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Reviews for Revenge

By : kresua
  • From ANON - MerelyTruth on June 21, 2006
    The "dance" : good idea ! When will he eat something correct ??? She changed a lot !! Interesting...
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  • From ANON - adry on June 21, 2006
    if you don't want your story to be deleted then please add a disclaimer to your story something like I DON'Y OWN INUYASHA. Or they will delete your story trust me i know. i don't want the story to be deleted it is a great story. so please add the disclaimer as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - MerelyTruth on June 20, 2006
    well done ! I foresee a long and difficult healing for the poor Sesshomaru...! Continue !!! (What means "spandex" ? (I'm french...))

    Merely Truth
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  • From ANON - Gslinger on June 19, 2006
    Your so so Mean Naughty Mistress, How could you be so diabolically cruel to the beautiful elegant Sexy Sessy, I know I could find so many worthwhile uses for him that didn't envolve bleeding. I think I like to interduce him to SJS for a little doggy style crossover M/M in Mexico...oh gosh... can you dig it Sugar Butt. LOL G

    PS Your writing rocks!
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  • From ANON - WeIrDpErSoN on June 12, 2006

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  • From ANON - Peter on June 11, 2006
    Great story I give it a 10/10. Please continue
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  • From ANON - merely truth on June 11, 2006
    Hello, I'm french and I decided to review your story to help you. Revenge is a good idea, truly, but I hope that she will give him a few gentleness. What is not very nice is that there is alot of horrible wounds and of blood, too much, and in the bed where they'll sleep just after (beurk !).

    I find Sesshoumaru not very Sesshoumaru, even weakened and broken ! and I would like more thoughts of the characters described, how they decided their next actions. Don't you think that an explanation about the motive of the revenge will increase the clarity of the story ? and why did she change all the time of idea ? once sweet, once awful...! Poor boy ! I hope that she will begin to become nice with him, to help him, perhaps to find his dignity ? Aren't they other persons in the story ?
    Thank you to continue, I'll read !
    A bientôt,

    Merely Truth
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