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Reviews for His Lost Bride

By : Roushijin
  • From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2006
    UPDATE!!! IM BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!! -glomps and doesnt let go till she updates-
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  • From ANON - kagome2004 on August 20, 2006
    * gives standing ovation* u go get them......your story is too damn good *excuse the language* if people don't like it they can go f*** themselves....so i am looking forward to the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - DTAngel on August 19, 2006
    WOOO You go Guy/Girl! Shut them people who do nothing but complain about others stories, and I agree, If your NOT AN AUTHOR then Shut up. *give a cookie to all and ONLY the autors.* Ok I said my rant.
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  • From ANON - C'Asia on August 19, 2006
    wow the comeback is on and poppin
    you tell the haters to back off
    i find your story very pleasing
    to read and i cant wait til you
    update please do it soon!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Midnight Star on August 19, 2006
    Hi!

    Read all three chapters of your fic and have enojoyed it so far. I do look forward to the next chapters of the story and you can e-mail me your next chpaters. I will read them and let you know what I think. Just put it in the e-mail.
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  • From ANON - daughterofbastet on August 14, 2006
    * shrugs* Yeah, you did. I'm not complaining... about that, anyway. Patience is a virtue... Not right now, it isn't.(You probably don't get that. Forget it.)You still haveohmygodihavetogobye
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  • From ANON - daughterofbastet on August 14, 2006
    Honey, tenshi means angel, and even if you want to have evil angels, that just doesn't fly with me: you have him gentle and easygoing, a fairly good man, yet on the field he's ruthless(I can totally accept that)and EVIL? I'm sorry, but that doesn't cut it. Also, voices don't CURVE. I'm going to bit a bit harsh on the other writers(other than me; I'm well aware I suck, so don't bother trying to surprise me with the news), so don't feel I'm just being critical to you. Like you need that kind of reassurance, butwhat the hell. Please try to keep in one tense: "You are a beautiful woman, now," her friend said, and she laughs. Ow. That just hurts.(It's an example, don't look at me that way.) Also: they don't HAVE dresses like that in that era. They don't even have kimono, they have a related kind of outfit, called yukata. It's considered rude and shocking to expose so much of a woman in public, even if she is a geisha or a prostitute, esepcially if she is of some political importance; Japanese women were never part of the "entertainment" unless it was soft speaking and looking pretty, or being shoved at some high-ranking official behind shoji walls. "Hell" was not a curse back then. It was a place, and if you want some Japanese curses, I'll be happy to give them to you.
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  • From ANON - daughterofbastet on August 14, 2006
    * stares at Fluffy-sama* OMFG... So... wonderful... * wipes mouth* Oh, shit, anybody know how to get drool out of keyboards? imoto: * laughs at DoB* me: * defenestrates imoto* One of my favourite pasttimes... But, no offense, it just doesn't WORK to use "drop dead handdsome" in the Sengoku Jidai. First, it's not a phrase they'd know. Second, it's drop dead GORGEOUS, not handsome. And he's not handsome. If you want to say he's hot, or hott, or gorgeous, go ahead; in fact, that last one is the closest. You've read the manga, perhaps? Remember what Jakotsu told Renkotsu when they were discussing our man? Demon? Youkai? Yah.(Copyright © daughterofbastet 2004.)Anyway, please try not to use "oh my god!" or "wow" or "sucker!" or "such is life", etc. Which is a very sad thing, because I use that one all the time... which is perfectly acceptable, since all my fics are AU. French is so expressive.
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  • From on August 01, 2006
    I'm in a pile on my floor crying my heart out...the pain...oh the pain...I just can't go on....how could you do this to your devoted reader? How...could...you *falls to the ground in a heap wailing* *some heavenly voice* awe...poor mortal..

    (please upate)
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  • From ANON - AnnaALF on July 31, 2006
    i really love this story. im looking forward to the next chapter. good work.
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  • From ANON - angel on July 30, 2006
    wow .. please please please please please update soon i would love to eread more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Femme Fatale on July 27, 2006
    This is geting interesting. Looking foward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - blue on July 27, 2006
    hey! its a good story. but im a little lost. wasn't lord sesshomaru the one to show up, not Jenshi. Is he coming representing Sessho, bc he says "What fool?! Sesshomaru could kill you!’" and the whole soldier setup and how everything is sorted out confuses me a bit. Like.. the way rin got to her father. idk. And why would Noki want to break the spell if she likes Lord Hitoshi? idk im sryyyy! ur stories are extremely good, they just got my head all mesed up right now.
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  • From ANON - Ana on July 23, 2006
    Great chapter. UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Bandit on July 23, 2006
    I love it!!
    Please up date soon!!!
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