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Reviews for Demon Slayer Sango

By : PinkRoseBouquet

From Solaris on May 22, 2010
My sister Panther told me to read this story and she said it was one of the best Sesshomaru stories that she had read here or anywhere else. You kept Sesshomaru in character and yet not in character. I love this story. Thank you so much for posting it.
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From ANON - rowdyjaner on November 04, 2006
WOW!!! i found your story last night and read until nearly 2 am, i just couldn't stop. it was only the realization that sleeping on a keyboard is most uncomfortable [and leaves funny marks on your face] that sent me to bed. i've spent most of my saturday finishing it. i haven't read like that in ages; not even janet evanovich or margaret maron's books...i just didn't want to stop. i didn't want the story to stop either. i can't even begin to say how much i enjoyed it. terrific characterizations; good, tight plot; natural dialog. i would buy your books! i even cried at the wedding. and at the end of the story. i do wish that sesshoumaru & inuyasha had had their talk...but that might require a whole 'nother story. you did a really good job on this and thank you for puting it out where i could read it. it is truly Awesome!
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From Iyasu on October 16, 2006
Oh my! This is very well-written! If I didn't have classes to go to at college, I would have tried to read this all in one sitting! I absolutely adore this story, and if the characters were a little ooc, that's perfectly acceptable for me. After all, this fic probably wouldn't have been possible if they remained completely in character. I am honored that I got to read such a good fic. You helped show me that there are still good writers in the world. I'm so going to check out your other writings, if/when you write them!
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From ANON - Shaunda AKA Inu4ever on September 22, 2006
Had to let you know that I re-read this story about once a month when I need a Sango/Sesshy fix! And when I saw that you were continuing the story,well,needless to say, I was thrilled! Good luck with the sequel,and as one of your many fans,thanks again!!
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From ANON - Kyuu on September 20, 2006
Wow, oh wow! This was absolutly beautiful. I love it sooo much.
At the ending I actually thought sessho was going to marry kaiya(or however you spell it*blush*) Then you went and pulled the rabbit out of the hat and gave it a happy ending. It was absolutly amazing, it had great characterization, and the grammer was excellent... I don't think I ran into even one miss spelled word.*amazed* Again absolutly beautiful.... I'm definantly going to put this in my "must read again file".
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From ANON - Dragon Warder on August 14, 2006
damn, if only u could sell this shi* lol u would be rich

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From RuriRuri on July 18, 2006
WOOOWW!! that was sooooooooo goooood!!! like you wouldnt believe!!! hahah it took me like 3 days to fully read that but it was well worth it!! you have a fantastic style of writing and give characters their own characteristics! (of course) i must say this has been the best fanfiction ive ever read! twas very fulfilling! hahha i absoloutly loooved it! anyways the story was GREAT! dramatic at times and very deep! YAAY! good job im inspired by your work and hope to see more of what you've given! geeze i havent been THAT interested in a story like that.. since.. EVER! hhaha ok enough of my ramblings... great job again! and YYYAAAAY
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From ANON - silent pluto on July 16, 2006
Whoa i loved this fanfic it had everything!
Your a good at this! ^_^
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From ANON - Legilmyth on July 09, 2006
I am so glad you were able to finish this story. I enjoyed every moment of it.
I really like how you handled the mating, I was wondering how it would work out, excelent work!
Well I really can't put into words my appeciation for your writing style, so much decription it was fantastic.
Thank you for taking the time to complete your work, It has inspired me to continue with my own.
Good luck in any futur projects, I will be keeping an eye out for any.
Legilmyth
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From ANON - chel on July 08, 2006
Thank You So Very Much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved your story. You did a fabulous job!!!!!!!!!!!! Sess and Sango make a great couple! Any chance of a Demon Slayer Sango 2? no pressure, just a question. Thanks again. You Are The Best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Original Sinner on July 04, 2006
Crikey Sweetpea... I'm completely blown away by your writing. You are one talented chickybabe, but I'm sure I don't need to tell you that. I am so thoroughly enjoying this story. I didn't realize that you had already posted it. I've been pretty slack on AFF the last ... geez.... freaking months and months now. Life kinda came and gave me a harsh reality check... I guess that's it, or else I would've picked up this story in a flash! Hot stuff yeah? I have to admit though, I had to skip forward to the lemon (being the hentai'd freak that I guess you've probably pegged me for since you've been reading What Now?) and I have to say it totally rocked my socks babe *heeeheee* I don't get much of a chance to read lately so I've been pretty frustrated at the fact that I haven't been able to sit down and read this fic from beginning to end... and then I go to your profile and find there's another 20 chapters to go! *yippeeee!* Happy little vegemite am I *claps hand excitedly* Tell me? Is the original story different from this? Like, as you know, I'm in the process of tarting up What Now? and the version now posted is somewhat different from the old one... Should I just continue reading this or should I just continue reading the original version? ie... are there any differences between the two?

Either way, you have a devoted reader in me... love it sweetpea...

Peace,

The Sinner ~_^
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From ANON - OriginalSinner on June 30, 2006
How funny is that?! I must've been reading and reviewing your story the same time you were doing mine ^_^ *twighlight zone music playing in background* Freaky yeah? *hehehe* Ohs... how stupid do I feel? I went to your profile and saw that you've had heaps of hits and stacks of reviews *doh!* But I still am going to give this story a shout when I post my next chapter, cos after picking myself up off the floor after I slid off my chair from reading Chapter 8 (crosses legs... uncrosses... crosses them again... nuh... need a cold shower....) I think it very much deserves it! There are so few good Sango/Sess fics out there no? I'm so happy I found this...

Ohs... and thanks for the review... coming from a writer such as yourself, I feel very privelaged...

Cheers ^_^
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From OriginalSinner on June 30, 2006
Oh my goodness, this story just keeps on getting better and better! I�ve only just read chapter two*doh!* I was hoping to have read more after I first checked out this story, but unfortunately, I have little time for sitting in front of the computer reading *sighs* Anyways, I love the way you are pacing this story. I can see just from what I�ve already read that it�s going to be first class. I just love the little inner reflections you have the characters indulging in. It makes this story a notch above the rest I�ve read in a very long time. Only, I can�t understand why on earth you have no reviews! Geez the readers here on AFF are getting slack. I�m going to recommend this story next time I post a chapter (I�m writing a Sango/Sess story as well) so hopefully a few of my readers will catch on to this tasty little morsel. It is indeed worthwhile checking out, and thank god, I�ve got a few readers that do the right thing and review, which kind of makes the whole effort of writing a story pay off. And you�re up to chapter 8 already! Can�t wait to read more ^_^ I don�t think I have to tell you this, but you�re doing great.

Peace, The Sinner ~_^

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From OriginalSinner on June 24, 2006
Oh goody, goody gum drops! You have made me one happy hentai... Finally, another Sesshoumaru/Sango fic! And it is soooooo well written. Aren't they just the hottest couple in Anime-dom? I could almost feel the heat prickle at Sango's collar at having the haughty puppy looking her up and down. Your descriptions are very detailed and vivid and you have to update soon yeah? Ohs, and I like how you've got Sesshoumaru in character... Couldn't you just take to the arrogant pup with a rolled up newspaper? Actually, I personally could think of a lot of things I'd like to take to the hotdog *hehehe* but I might just save that for a story... might make for some good reading *tehehe*

Keep up the good work...
The Sinner ~_^
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