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Reviews for Having It All

By : KishaW
  • From ANON - OriginalSinner on July 04, 2006
    Chapter 4 was so... *sighs wistfully* ... so... beautiful Chigirl *starry eyes*. I love the way you write. It's so freaking descriptive. I could just see that beautiful floral quilt loverboy made for Sango. What a paradise... *sighs again* Do you mind if I come over and we can play with your muses together? It seems like such a dreamy place to be.... *smiles in contentment* But then there's the raunch factor *eutopian bubble pops and Sinner falls into happy hentai land - yipeeeeeeee!* RRRRAAAAAWWWWRRRRSSS! Another hot chapter from the Chigirl... you make me such a happy little hentai ^_^
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  • From ANON - OriginalSinner on July 03, 2006
    Oh my lawd!!!! *Dripping off of chair into puddle on floor* That chapter just melted me away I swear! That was awesome chigirl... something to be absolutely proud of. Unfortunately I haven't heard Tori Amos's version of this song but could only here REM's rendition swirling around in my head, which kind of did me in cos every time I hear it, I think of the ex (it's one of his all time favourite songs), and as much as I love to hate the ex, I can't help but think back to the mind-blowing physical relationship I had with him and this fic just left me practically a sobbing mess. So very, very good badgirl.

    I can't wait to continue with this story... it's blowing my freaking mind! Unfortunately I don't have a lot of time to read and every time I do get settled to have a read, I get interupted, so I'm quite pissed of that I can't just sit down and read this from beginning to end... I'm going to have to print it out! Thank God you keep updating sweetpea, so I won't be left in suspense!

    Peace babe,

    The Sinner
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2006
    Freakin' awesome chapter, Chigirl!
    Sango and Kurama were getting it on! lol! Wonderful chapter, I enjoyed it very much! ^^
    Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - OriginalSinner on July 02, 2006
    Awww *gushes* what a sweet, sweetpea you are Chigirl ^_^... that lil' bit at the end of your chapter (that would be chapter 3 I think... *short-term memory loss kicking in...doh!*) made me feel all warm and fuzzy... I concur girlfriend! Let's show these ecchi fiends here at AFF that there is life beyond Kagome and Inuyasha yeah ^_^. Anyways, I finally get to sit down and read the whole of this chapter (I don't get a lot of time to sit down in front of the computer... you can probably tell by my slack arse updates no?) I guess I should really be sleeping right about now, but fat chance of doing that after reading this *RAWRS* I finally sit back now I have some me time to read (without being disturbed) and tickle me pink... talk about being totally blown away! Girl, where have you been hiding? Why haven't you written anything sooner? You been holding out on us so it seems...What an awesome chapter! I swear I was on the edge of my seat there when Kurama was being the dreadful tease, on the verge of melting into a puddle and spilling onto the floor! I'm speechless hey. I've read some good fics but this one is hot girl. Its suspense and wry humour and hot characters are all making for a kick arse story you know this yeah. And I'm such a happy little vegemite cos you've updated again since I last hit here (and unfortunately didn't get very far in my reading efforts) so I've got some more scrummy, steamy (and I'll hold you to your warnings being the hentai that I'm sure you're well aware that I am) that there's gonna be some fall-off-your-chair-in-a-gooey-mess type, smut-filled chapters to go... Oh goody *clapping hands excitedly like a depraved hentai!*... lets see what happens when Sango catches up to her beguiling thief shall we? *~_^* >_>...
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on June 30, 2006
    omg that was absolutely fantabulous. You have got to hurry and update, your killing me with the cliffhangers here. Please update soon and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - mitsuki! on June 30, 2006
    WAHHHH!! that was the best youko sango fic ive ever read! u BETTER update cuz it was sooo goood! ahh loved it!
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  • From ANON - Lazy wolf (author account not working) on June 26, 2006
    excellent job. I normally greatly dislike songfics, because i think the lyrics interfere with the 'mood' of the fic, but you
    managed to find a fitting song and not some mushy romance crap. Don't get me wrong, I'm all for romance, but this sort of
    pairing,this situation, is just so much better. In chapter two though, you need to use shorter lines so that people with smaller
    computers don't have to constantly move it back and forth. Also, be sure to keep your work of the same quality and not try
    to force out chapters just for the reviewers. If they really want it that bad, they can wait for it. Quality is the most important part.
    I've learned, though, that after sex that good (chapter 3) the girl tends to be rather sore in the morning, and has some trouble
    with walking. ^.~ you've been added to my favorites, so I'll know when you update...expect more of my reviews for your stories from now on.
    But if you do a bit of work that isn't good, I'll still criticise you. No one is immune from that.
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  • From ANON - OriginalSinner on June 25, 2006
    PS: Where is your other story Solace? Did you take it down? Put it back up so I can have a squiz sweetpea... F-cuk the other readers... if they're to lame to do the polite thing and review... let 'em go into a gigantic hentai hole... I'd like to see what you did... you got me wondering now... what pairings was it? Gods... if it were a Sango/Sesshie pairing and your holding out I'll have to throw a tanty! Put it back up and I promise I'll review and pass the story on to a few of my other hentai friends... Remember AFF lost a lot of authors cos of the dicking around they did revamping the site, and just as myself, there are some older readers coming back who did like to read and review... so hang in there a bit longer hey?

    Ciao ^_^... hope to see Solace up and posted next time I check out to see if you've updated....
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  • From ANON - OriginalSinner on June 25, 2006
    What's going on? Why have you no reviews sweetpea?! What a great start to a freaking hot crossover... man readers are getting slack on AFF.... As you know, I haven't been on AFF for quite some time (if you've still been reading Lessons and What Now) so I didn't have a clue that you actually wrote yourself or else I would've checked your fics out sooner, my happy lil' reviewer. The reviews certainly make all the difference as to whether or not your going to continue a story, so even if I have to come back to this story and review 50 bloody times till it piques someones interest to get off their slack arse and leave a nice comment... I shall.

    You are truly a good writer... I liked this opening chapter... Please continue!!!

    Peace Chigirl

    The Sinner ^_~.... *runs of the check out Solace... *
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