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Reviews for Where The Heart Lies

By : KishaW
  • From ANON - OriginalSinner on July 02, 2006
    What a dirty dog Inuyasha turned out to be hey? Where's my rolled up newspaper? I'll show that bad doggie to mess with my favourite gal! hehehe. Anyways sweetpea, I like what i've read so far. This little fic has heaps of potential. Just have a quick breeze through it though, cos there's a few spelling errors but hey... I'm still picking up arsed up phrases and stupid spelling even now in my tarted up - so-called-edited versions of my fics, so don't sweat. I thought this was really touching. Inuyasha hey... fancy him running off with slut-guts (oops... I mean Kagome *sits back and waits for the hate mail hehehe*) after vowing to her dying dad that he'd look after her... brings back unpleasant memories I can tell you... that's men for you though I guess. Anyways, as for character pairings, I'm sure you know who I'm gonna suggest, though I'd eat my keyboard if you weren't already planning a Sess/Sango pairing *please... please... and please... I really don't wanna have to eat my keyboard cos I won't be able to review your story anymore then ~_^* I can see a very clear opening for a bizarre love triangle thing happening here. Kinda when Sesshie was holding Sango after her dad died and gave her the 'look'. Ok... maybe the look was innocent and all but not to this hentai! Anyways, I'll keep an eye out to see where this story goes... (I do so hope to see another Sango/Sesshie fic... there's so few out there compared to the Sess/ Kagome stuff....) Thumbs up chickie babe ^_^

    Peace,

    The Sinner ~_^
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  • From ANON - Lazy Wolf (author account not working) on June 27, 2006
    good start to a story, but unfortunately, not many people see that. You're a new author, and people will take one look at you and chuck you out at the beginning, not even looking at your stories, but don't worry. If you don't give up, and keep writing, people will see your name on the pages more and more and want to check you out. People are not inclined to like stories with angst right at the beginning, most are inclined to want all fluff at first, but don't give up. Keep on writing, and I'm looking forward to more of your work.


    ~lazy wolf
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