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Reviews for Sweet Spring Caress

By : Bunnybop102
  • From ANON - krimson kitsune on July 30, 2015
    Hi. Just want to say that separating this out into paragraphs would really help the reader understand- especially when you change who is speaking. Also, it this is an internal dialog inside Kagome's head, you should say something about that too. From the way it looks now, it sounds like Kagome is holding a conversation with herself-out loud! Most authors italicize internal dialog. Hope this helps.
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  • From LunaKageTenshi on October 06, 2008
    Update,update,update update U.P.D.A.T.E uuuupppppddddaaattteeee!!!!!!!!!!!! Please(on knees begging like puppy for treat)Hurry and update!

    *LunaKageTenshi* {and if you don't...well we'll get to that later}
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  • From ANON - Momi on July 28, 2006
    More plz.
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  • From ANON - sesshy'sgirl on July 16, 2006
    please update/continue. i love the Sess/Kag pairing!
    thanks
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 29, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Stephena on June 28, 2006
    You need to get the second chapter up. I want to know what will happen.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 28, 2006
    more and please longer !!!
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  • From ANON - aurora on June 27, 2006
    nice very nice i like it a lot please update
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  • From ANON - Tasha on June 27, 2006
    I like the beginning! I want to know more! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - NingenKun on June 27, 2006
    Dude, This story is teh suxxor. Do the writing community a favor and *don't* continue!!!1111eleven
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  • From ANON - Inu_Twins on June 27, 2006
    OMG!!! U meani!! U can't just stop there!! U have to Update!! I want to know wat happens!! Plzzz Update soon!!!
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  • From on June 26, 2006
    Allright, so I suppose I should tell you that first of all I thought it was ok. But, it could be better. I didn't understand some of it. But, I did get some of what was happening and I thought it was great. Just fixe some of your wording and it would be really good. Hahaha!!! I would love to see Sesshoumaru relaxing in a hot spring so close to InuYasha and the othes. It was be very ammusing and higly entertaining. So, anyways great first chapter, just fix up some spelling mixtakes and I think you would have a master piece. Sorry if this sounds like a flam. It isn't meant to be one.
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  • From ANON - SugarCandyFairy on June 26, 2006
    I cant wait to see where you take this story ^_^
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