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Reviews for A Dream Come True

By : alakeshadow
  • From LunaKageTenshi on October 12, 2008
    O.M.G! This story is rrreeeeeeeeaaallllyyy good! Please continue(sp?!) it very soon it's so good and I can't help but want to know what happens next...So update soon!

    *LunaKageTenshi*
    "Tears that fall are merlly reminders of what we are..humans and that the feelings within are real."
    By...me
    ^.^
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  • From marcia on August 12, 2008
    well i hope this story has a happy ending and yours does too. There's a reason i don't like tragedy. Good story and I look forward to more when you get the chance.
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  • From ANON - Maria on October 25, 2006
    Hey~
    I absolutly ~love~ your fic!! I wish tat you would update soon so that we could see what happens to Kagome and Sesshomaru/Lord Fluffy ^^ I love your style of writting and I hope to read more of your fics~ I best be going now though... If you wanna reach me try inuyasha_1234@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 18, 2006
    Your story has such emotion to it. I love it. The story line is just so amazing. I think this has to be one of the best sessh/kag stories I have read that had this sort of plot line[betrayal, and then the truth and stuff]. I can't wait to read what comes next.
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  • From ANON - Rain on July 27, 2006
    Wow. I enjoy this story very much. I normally do not read stories with this much angst in them, but something about this story has kept me coming back. If you still need a beta I would be honored. Please keep writing. I am looking forward to finding out how this story will end.
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  • From ANON - Shadow on July 24, 2006
    Aww, man, I really love this story!!!! How long until you update??? I just love it! I'm up at 7 am, so that tells you it's really good, my limit is 6! *winks* Please update soon! I love every part of this, but it makes me wonder, who raped Kagome? Darn you and your complicated plot!!! Hehe!
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  • From ANON - hightechredneck on July 09, 2006
    i love your story keep up the awsome writting

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  • From ANON - Cochrann on July 07, 2006
    I'm so happy that my review made such a positive impression on you! As a fellow writer I really try to include as much constructive criticism and possible solutions as I can in my reviews and it's nice to know that people actually appreciate what I have to say. And I agree with the other reviewer you mentioned that Sesshoumaru really does need to start having a more dominant personality in the story, without straying from your originial interpretation of him in the previous chapters - which I think you've done an awesome job in the last chapter, you just need to keep it going by making him show kag's that he's sticking around for an indefinite period of time, so that she can become more secure in her feelings for him.

    This last chapter was great by the way! Every scene was fantastic! Sesshoumaru's conduct and need to love and protect her was awesome. Even Kag's offering herself to Inuyasha was a great angsty twist - definitely made my stomach twist in disgust even at the same time that I knew it was beliveable response on her part. I like the way you're showing kag's emotional and mental healing in this story, it's very believable with just the right amount of confidence, self-deprecation, low self-esteem, and overal mental anguish that she learning to wade through in her quest to come to terms with everything that's been going on in her life. I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - whitney on July 07, 2006
    WOW!! The song was awesome! and I can't wait to find out what really happened between inu and kagz
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  • From ANON - ama on July 06, 2006
    THis is beautiful.Keep up the awesome work.Please write again soon.
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  • From ANON - Cochrann on July 05, 2006
    I'm not sure I'd say the writing in it is crapy. I think the problem with it is that it's way too dark, angsty, and incredibly depressing with no light at the end of the tunnel. Honestly if Kag's is feeling this horrible it would only make sense that she would try to kill herself at one point. There just doesn't seem to be enough happiness to counter ballance the darkness in the story - especially with the last two chapters.

    Now don't get me wrong I do like this story, especially the first 3 chapters, but if you want people to respond to this story your next chapters are going to have to have more love and positive emotions in them in order for the story not to get bogged down with overwhelming depression and no end in sight.

    I'd also like to mention that I do like a good angst driven story but in order for it to work there has to be some light at the end of the tunnel, otherwhise it's just a depressing sadistic story and who wants to read that for fun...that's what world news is for.
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  • From ANON - Soul of a Woman on July 04, 2006
    I loved it, when it comes to sesshomaru you are by far the best with his attitude. Overrall I loved it hope you write more soon
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