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Reviews for Cereal Box Romance

By : RhiannonoftheMoon

From ANON - rowdygirl on December 06, 2006
did i remember to tell you that i think you are brilliantly funny? i laughed my ass off. plus the writing is good and the plot is great! sess is such a dirty dog.
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From ANON - Badgrl74 on December 05, 2006
Hell yeah, paybacks a bitch and her name is Kagome! I still feel a little sorry for Kouga, but he is so dense. I couldn't handle an eternity with him. Make those dogs work! He he he
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From ANON - swtdrm01 on December 03, 2006
I loved it. Please update soon.
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From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on December 02, 2006
O.o I can't wait to find out who it is! Yasha, and she is going to sit his behind into the next century? Or Sess, ans she will show him the true meaning of cold shoulder?

PLEASE update soon! This story is so good!

Until we meet again.
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From ANON - Dionysos on December 02, 2006
please tell me that is sesshomaru please let it be him, cuz i've waited (what seems like) forever for this moment!!!
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From ANON - AmberEyez on December 02, 2006
Wheee! Can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens when it all hits the fan! Great story!
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From ANON - Snowfall on December 02, 2006
Um, I'm dumbstruck. Such an eventful chapter! We get to see Souta acting mature and pointing out something that should be rather obvious to Kagome. Even though this is not a Kouga/Kagome fic, Souta has a point. And I do hope that you find some way to let Kouga down easy. He seems so naive in his stubbornness. It would be terrible if his heart were broken.

Poor Sesshoumaru. After reading the most recent manga's, I don't doubt that losing little Rin would just about kill him. He does love her immensely. I felt like crying. Eh, I'm not sure what to think about Inuyasha's reaction to the well being closed. His actions and thoughts before really annoyed me. He was supposed to be her friend and then he went and made that bet. That's a terrible thing to do to one's friend. Sesshoumaru on the other hand never professed to be a friend. He never misrepresented himself that I can remember.

The meeting was absolutely wonderful. So, Sesshoumaru discovered that he has feelings for Kagome. I hope that we have an elaboration on that in the next chapter. The whole fight was hilarious and I loved the other lord's. They were an entertaining addition. I felt so bad for Sesshoumaru because he was worried that Kagome had been killed in the fire. You've kept Inuyasha's character much the same as it was over 500 years ago. But, why would he still want to kiss her? After all, he admits that they are friends. Is he being a jerk again? I think that Kouga got what he deserved because he was flaunting his success where he knew it would get a rise. He just didn't expect one from Sesshoumaru. Oh My God, Sesshoumaru admitted that he considered Kagome his. That was too awesome! I loved that!

Oh no, she has one of those decoder rings again. At least, she knows that Kouga isn't playing at any games. He's so sweet, thinking about her having his puppies. I really do feel bad for him now. Who was that woman that she recognized? I hope it's not that woman that's after her. Oh, just imagine the fight that would break out if the woman tries to kidnap Kagome! That has endless possibilities where the men are concerned. Then again, it may be someone totally different than what I'm thinking. Kilala in bipedal form? That's a good mystery.

Oh no, I know that at least one of the people that came through the door was Sesshoumaru. How is he going to react!? Now he knows that Kagome is with Kouga and not because she is drunk! Is Kouga going to propose in front of Sesshoumaru? How would she answer? Sesshoumaru has already decided to win Kagome rather than kill Kouga. I'm so glad that Sesshoumaru didn't see Kagome as a whore. Of course, she isn't drunk now. That could change his mind.

I am wringing my hands with the possibilities! This is so exciting! You've got me dancing in place in anticipation of the next chapter. Ooooh. Gonna go read it again.

Snow
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From ANON - stellargurl on December 02, 2006
Wow! Never saw that coming. Kagome and Kouga? Well no matter what anyone says you didn't ruin the story. Its just it came as a shock. So screw anyone who thinks that it ruined the story. I am positive you did it for a reason. Althought we might not know what it is at this moment Im sure we will find out soon. Update soon
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From ANON - amhor56 on December 02, 2006
I am so glad you updated! I look for your story all the time. It had an new, exciting, unique, kind of plot and I have loved every bit of it. Congratulations on winning 1st place. No surprise there though. It's great that they acknowledge that this is a simply divine story. Hope you update soon and I will look forward to an update in your story. Thanks and bye!
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From ANON - DarkMystic on November 19, 2006
*sniffles.* I got misty during a few parts of this chapter. Mostly because I was listening to a song that had the lyrics "We've walked together down this winding road in search of something true, together we grew, but now our journey has come to en end, and its on to something new for me and you. So good bye my friend, until we meet again, some other day I know so much will change. But you came back I can say I wouldnt change a day, hope you can say the same."(Hoobastank-say the same)and while reading about sesshoumaru trying to find kagome I was listening to this"Ive become tired of waisting my time, thinking'bout choices that ive made 'cause I cant move forward while looking behind. The only thing I can do now is change the way that i used to be,cause now it seems crystal clear to me...That you're so much more than a memory...It wasnt fair for me to go and act like I knew what you've been through,'cause i wasnt there and ill never know, I couldnt see from your point of view, but im doing all I can for you to see that I understand...That your so much more than a memory-Yeah so much more than a memory, so dont close the door on what still can be you and me, 'cause you're so much more than a memory...Please dont go. Cause i finally know that the past is gone and I know that I was wrong..." (Hoobastank-More than a memory) Its weird how that song goes so well with that scene...Sorry for the long post I write whats on my mind. Please write me when the next chapter is complete. Oh and my views on the whole kagome and kouga thing...Thats going to be a problem for her lmao. It was romantic at first with the kissing of the hair and the I love you's and stuff...But when the bra was forced up and the hands under the skirt and what not, it sorta went out of hand from there...You cant have a good story without a few tangles in the tapestry so to speak, but never the less if she had to have drunken sex with anyone I would rather it be with a hot wolf youkai rather than a random fat drunken guy in a bar. ^_^ I wonder how she is going to break his heart though...I dont know if I would, I mean damn something that awsome doesnt come around other than once in a life time lol. ...Ok im rambling! *smacks self* bad! Anyways yeah write me. Great story been reading it for quite some time.
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From ANON - dends on November 16, 2006
Ahh!! Nooo! I never saw this coming! ='( I always thought... well Sesshou... ack... Kouga... *mutters to herself* K-a-g-o-m-e..... How could she be so stupid? I feel like saying, "baka, baka, baka, bbbaaakkkkaaa!". Which I have now said. >.< *sigh* I never saw this coming, not even a clue or foreshadowing. Argghhh!! But... I'm hoping that reminder about you being unable to finish the story if you are dead means good things will be coming. *holds scissors to a Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha plushies* Or else the plushies get it! >=D
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From ANON - mandy on November 16, 2006
Ok, i'm officially disappointed. Its not like her at all, especially the first time. No way. And with the wolf!? Even Hojo would have been better.
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From ANON - Kirei Kunouichi on November 16, 2006
Please, write some more. it's pretty good. i'll be watching for the next chapter.....
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From ANON - ayame on November 14, 2006
Not Kouga! Eww. Thats it. You ruined a perfect story.
*shudders*
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From PhoenixWolf on November 13, 2006
The chapter was very good! I am a bit surprised at how easily Kagome "fell into bed" with Koga, but I'm sure that it will make sence later. I can't wait for the next chapter to find out what Sesshomaru does when he discovers what happened with Koga and Kagome. *shivers* I can almost feel the tension now.

Until we meet again.
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