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By : RhiannonoftheMoon
  • From ANON - adea neri on September 28, 2006
    heheh this is funny. im loving it. upadte soon.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on September 25, 2006
    Here’s the review that one of your author notes asked for. Strange, I had just done that for another humorous fic. ^_^

    This was a contest to win a woman through seduction, not by beating the crap out of your opponent. (first, smooth language, then elegant. Exact opposites. That made me grin.)

    He hadn’t known one could be kissed like that, but Kagome did and it got him wondering what else his friend knew. And whether she would do it with Kikyou while he watched? (Funny just because of it being so random)

    His original tactics to win the miko had been to prevent his brother from pulling his mojo shit (so cool that you’ve set Sesshoumaru up as a playboy)

    Unfortunately, he hadn’t a clue how to get off of her shit list and into her panties. (So crass that it made me grin.)

    not physically whaled on each other (nice description, brought a smile)

    “Maybe you shoulda thought of that before you started sucking face with fuckhead over there!” (LOL So funny simply because of the wording.)

    “Kagome, you-“ gurgle, gurgle, “-fucking-“ splash, gurgle, “-aah!” Inuyasha suddenly disappeared in a flailing, soggy mess of silver and red, having found a small waterfall. (LOL gurgle LOL)

    One should never get attached to their conquests; it was a cardinal rule of womanizing.

    Annoyed and needing to take it out on something, he gathered a cloud of youki beneath his feet and flew downstream to where his half-brother was pulling himself out of the water. Setting down on the smooth rocks that paved the shore, he fixed the boy with a cold, superior glare.

    “Dear brother, if that is how you charm women, then you will remain a virgin until I kill you.” (heheh, taking his frustration out on Inuyasha, subtlety insulting the boy by mentioning his virginity and mentioning again that he will kill Inuyasha. Oh, that’s sweet.)

    “Have your leg humped, lately?” she asked in lieu of a real answer. (OMG! LOL)

    “Dog slobber,” Akago spat, frowning and crossing her arms over her chest. “And who knows where his nose has been.” (ROFL)

    Some hentai radar told him that Sesshomaru’s attention to Kagome extended well beyond a simple wager. (Ooooooh, Miroku is very insightful! Is it possible… maybe… Sesshoumaru has harbored feelings all along and just didn’t know it? Well, he did make special trips just to see what color her panties were. LOL Oh, I loved that one.)

    “What I’m trying to say,” Sango continued, ignoring Kagome’s question, “is that what may seem like a fling to you may be something completely different to Inuyasha, and especially to Sesshomaru.” (Hm, another hint that Sesshoumaru might not be in it just for a fling. Hmmm A little foreshadowing there?)

    ‘I’m a bad man. A very bad man.’(grin)

    “I don’t want company, I want pu-“

    Snatching his staff from its resting place against the wall, Miroku smacked him over the head. “My money is on Sesshomaru.” (ROFL)

    He did know why, but telling her: “because I want to screw you before my brother does” just wouldn’t fly. (big grin)

    What would she bet that Miroku had put him up to this? (Wow, surprised that she thought that)

    How did you make me feel sorry for Inuyasha when he’s being such a jerk?

    “Little brother, you behave like a pup (grin, another insult)

    “What did you do to her, half-breed?” (Ooooh, shivers. A protective Sessoumaru, yummies)

    Kagome knew that smile: it was his “come to me, bitch, and we will make sweet love in the moonlight” preening smile (big grin and flutters in my stomach just imagining that smile)

    Man, I sure hope she gets another decoder ring. I loved hearing all of Sesshoumaru’s wonderfully smutty thoughts. Making love on a bed of rose petals, etc. Even if he just wants your typical romp—or started out that way.

    This was by far one of my favorite chapters. Maybe it was the kiss coupled with action. Dunno.

    Great job!

    Snow

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  • From ANON - Badgrl74 on September 25, 2006
    Oh shit! Well, maybe if she can break the other ring, those other demons can't use it.
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  • From PhoenixWolf on September 24, 2006
    Hey! Still loving this story! I wonder how Kagome is going to fare now without the decoder ring? She won't have the "heads up" for the hentai thoughts or emotions. Please ipdate soon, as I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave on September 24, 2006
    Gah! I knew it. I just knew it. Inuyasha had to come and spoil it all. And he’s such an ass. Of course, so is Sesshoumaru. Sesshoumaru is just more elegant about it. I almost died when they had the ring and still wonder if it is really broken. If it is a decoder ring and she couldn’t hear Inuyasha’s thoughts, then Sesshoumaru probably couldn’t either. OMG! I wonder if he found the other one when he went to harass Inuyasha! He could have intentionally shielded his mind from her. Oh, the possibilities! Nicely set up suspense!

    What a great lime, so hot, so wonderful, and Sesshoumaru is starting to wonder if he isn’t falling for Kagome. Ooooh, I’ll bet he gets major possessive if he does.

    And what does Sango know about it? She seems to know more than she’s saying. Is Sango’s hair really short? I think that would look good on her, maybe even sexy.

    Hm, I think that I don’t hate Akago so much in this chapter. I can see where she would get protective of Kagome, considering what she has been through. Nice job. Nice of you to clue us in a bit.

    I didn’t get the whole reference to the beetles being able to counter Sango’s moves. Maybe I missed something somewhere.

    Well, awesome chappie! Keep up the great work! (I so wish that I could write comedy)

    Snow

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  • From ANON - Faerie Demoness on September 24, 2006
    Amazing...as always. I absolutely LOVE this story! Mostly the "He broke my dog decoder" I fell off the couch laughing at that one! It was good. I look forward to the next one...

    ~Much Love~

    Faerie Demoness
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on September 18, 2006
    Ooooh! That SOB! I hope she hears some not so wonderful thoughts about her bearing his bastard pups! Or the bet he has with Inuyasha! Grrrrr. I want to kick him so bad. And Kagome is being an idiot; a complete airhead. What does she really think that he wants!? *stomps foot and cusses* Yeah, so, she wants a kiss. Kisses can lead to more things and she isn't thinking ahead. Sorry. Erm, not!

    LOL You certainly have my interest. Well written as always.

    Snow
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2006
    No fair! I was reading the last chapter and you stopped so suddenly that I gasped with outrage. Please don't leave me hanging and finish the story.
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  • From ANON - bettychan on September 16, 2006
    What a delightful story. Don't suppose you could update tomorrow, could you? I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Badgrl74 on September 16, 2006
    It's interesting seeing Sesshy as such a playa! Too bad they don't touch on this in the series. Great cliffie!
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  • From ANON - iceraqs on September 16, 2006
    evil author!!!! grrr... anyway, it's nice that you updated already! YAY! and this story started out to be boring for me, but then...it went practically too nice not to miss! haha. please keep on updating! ;o)
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 16, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Faerie Demoness on September 16, 2006
    *bangs head against the couch pillow* DAMMIT DAMMIT DAMMIT!!!! That was soooooo evil of you! I was so happy with the way it was going, then you do this to me? *sobs* You are so mean! Seriously though, good chappie. I loved it, and so long too. Woo hoo! I like them long like that. You are so awesome. Keep up the good work!

    ~Much Love~

    Faerie Demoness
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  • From ANON - ldymoonluvsinuyasha (nsi) on September 16, 2006
    Yeah, too lazy to re-sign in, I hate the fact that it knocks you out when your reading a story, who wants to speed read through a great chapter like this? I mean really. I love the cliff hanger. I believe in cliff hangers like another religion. It demands the reader to return just to find out. And being that it's Friday it's a good cliff hanger day. I wonder if Inuyasha is around somewhere looking for her to then find her kissing Sesshomaru. However, I would like to see Inuyasha actually get a shot at her too because I think when she finally chooses Sesshy-kun and his magical Mokomoko-sama he needs to feel the rejection. And that's weird coming from me being that I adore my puppy eard halfbreed. Looking forward to the next chapter have a great week kay!

    ldymoon
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  • From ANON - AIdeen on September 16, 2006
    I really liked it!!! Please up-date soon!!! I want to know what happens next!!!
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