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Reviews for Live and Let Die (Part 3): Learning To Deal

By : doggieearlover

From bluemoon175 on June 22, 2007
I have read all three of your stories of these and I loved them, I can't wait to read more so your stories. I hope you think about doing another trial of this story, maybe even have were kagome gets pregnant.
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From Knittingknots on June 22, 2007
What a neat ending...I have really enjoyed the Live and Let Die series. Thank you for sharing your wonderful story!
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From vikikibouki on June 21, 2007
OOPSIE...I made a boo-boo in spelling. I meant 'visualise'. Sorry.
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From vikikibouki on June 21, 2007
Hey, Sweetie. I've sooo been looking forward to this chapter. I just haven't had as much time as I would have liked to read it in one go. With my doc appointements, hospital treatments, and, well, it took me up to this long to get through it. I just want to let you know that I was thoroughly enticed from start to finish. You, Alterfano, and Inugrrrl have similar ways of creating stories that captivate. I could actually viualise the story as it unfolded while I read.

Inugrrrl, Rocks, Alterfano Rolls, And You, my dear friend...HOWL!

Keep on Howlin' those fantastic writes of yours.

Luv ya & leave ya. JA NE.
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From WTW on June 17, 2007
So nice to see another chapter added. Sadly this story is slowly coming to an end but its been so great along the way. Keep up the wonderful work hun
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From FarAwayEyes on June 17, 2007
Alright, while I wait on the beta, I thought I'd take the time to review finally. Well, it seems Naraku's gotten a bit hasty in his �kill of the incarnation that pissed me off today,� because he didn't do it right! Tsk. That's not the Naraku we know. He should be used to this betrayal thing. Somehow I don't think he enjoys it as much when he's the betrayee and not the betrayer, or making others betray each other. If he had only gotten a hobby, like knitting (He is a spider, I can see it...). And it seems Naraku's bad day is only going to get worse. He still believes that Sess killed his brother and Kagome. Honestly, he should keep up with the day's news a bit better. Finally, Shippo does something worth noting instead of whining. It's about time!! Good idea to have him in the Well so Kagome can get the shards right away. And now Kagome's wearing her beautiful fire rat. I still like the idea that hers is green rather than red. As nice it is to see her in Inuyasha's, green is still a better color for her. Interesting how both Jaken and Sesshomaru are trying to save Kouga from Naraku. Just the history with Rin (and I'm sure they both know it was Koga's wolves) makes it so interesting to see. Interesting that Naraku hasn't quite figured it out yet. He's so certain that Kaede has the shards and that Kagome and Inuyasha are dead. I'm sure he'll get the surprise of his life soon. And he taunted so wonderfully, only to be the one fooled this time. How fitting.Byakuya's not all that smart, taking Rin like that. If Naraku didn't manage to kill him, Sess will. I'm glad they're done fighting the fake Naraku. He seems to enjoy using that technique most. And Inuyasha and Kagome arrived just in time. I think Naraku's bad day is going to get worse. Yep. Most certainly worse. Love how he finally underestimated his enemies, all at the wrong time. And it's extremely fitting that the curse he put on Miroku is what finally ends him. I don't think he would have ever expected it. It's nice to see the echoes of the manga death for Kikyo here, with her directly saying to Kagome that she is powerful. It's a nice touch. Nice to see Shippo ask nicely, and even ask if Inuyasha was alright, rather than getting all whiney when he found out Kagome was exhausted. Baaad Jaken telling Rin that she's not wanted. He's so mean to her when he shouldn't be. I know he's worried about Sess, but still, that's not nice. Funny Koga. He knows that humans cook their food, but nothing about the skinning part. Silly him. I think it's funny that Sess is all anxious about a conversation from 500 years past about Rin leaving him when she's sitting right there with him in the future. He's so cute when he's insecure. Change that. He's sexy when he's insecure, cause that was a nice hot lemon for them, all because he was feeling a bit nervous about the past. Interesting that he didn't want to have children when she did, and she told him she'd leave if he didn't want her children. Good for her, and of course he relented and gave her what she wanted. He was silly to think she wouldn't want them. That's a nice wish Kagome made, and not a clich� one about the well staying open forever or what not. And I like the fact that it is so unselfish and so like Kagome. I think Koga finally claiming Ayame is a bit true to wolf mating. They're not humans, and I think the fact that he did it in front of the whole pack as its alpha means a lot. It's nature for wolves to know who is who and where in the pack order, and he's proving to everyone around that Ayame is his and that if anyone should dare to touch what is his they'll be sorry. I think that was a good way to show the claiming of a mate for a wolf demon, actually, rather than him whisking her off to take care of matters alone. I'm glad Inuyasha didn't let Kagome stew over the decision on which time to stay in. They've come so far to regress to that. I'm glad Miroku is going to be faithful and wants to show her that with the ceremony. Good for him. Ooo, do I detect an all grown up Shippo? Baad Miroku for getting all drunk at his wedding. You know, in my story, we call that Alornish behavior. That's how they celebrate weddings, after all. I know that Miroku is still uncertain if it's real, but still...And now Shippo's scared of Sess again. Poor boy. He just has to get over that and realize what most everyone else has, he's a big puppy dog under it all, unless you get on his bad side. Oh no. The drunken villagers are pissed about Inuyasha and Kagome being together. Not good. That could be very bad for their health. I'm glad Miroku apologized, although what happened wasn't all his fault. It's too bad they didn't get a proper good bye. I think I like Akane already, although I must admit, I keep thinking of Ranma when I read the name, lmao. I can't help it. And I love how even now Sess doesn't take no for an answer. I look forward to the next chapter, and I am curious to see how you wrap it all up.
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From Sieg on May 28, 2007
I would have to say thta this one was a master Piece i just finshed reading it. It was way thought out the only problem i had was that trowands the end Inuysha and Kagome didnt not seem as reasltic . Still a very great read keep up the good wrok Update soon. :D
~~~Sieg
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From vikikibouki on May 07, 2007
My dear, sweet Doggieearlover. Thank you for your time, patience, and effort with this chapter. Believe me, it was well worth the wait. The only thing that hurts a bit is knowing that this story is almost finished. And by the way, the memory paradoxe that Sesshomarou and Rin were going through, past and future, was very well thought of and written about. I CANNOT WAIT for your next chapter and am greatly looking forward to it. Take care and until next time, JA NE.
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From Caitriona on May 06, 2007
Good chapter. Something about Kouga taking Ayame with the entire pack howling around them was far to erotic to be believed.

Thanks for sharing!
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From LadyTsunadeSama on May 06, 2007
... Oh my....

This was even better than I had expected! *applause* Almost makes me wanna beg to see what else you got in store...
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From WTW on April 30, 2007
Yay! Its so nice to see new chapie up. Thank you for writing. Its nice to have you back too. Looking forward to the end of a wonderful series.
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From DragonFanatic on April 28, 2007
I just wanted to say that I have really enjoyed reading this story. Not just this one but all the ones in your Live and Let Die series. They are very well writen and alot of fun to read. I can't wait to see how you finish this story out.
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From LadyTsunadeSama on April 28, 2007
Ahh such a good chapter-- you did such a wonderful job with this even if it did end on a sad note. Poor Kohaku!!! I look forward to seeing more!
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From paulamyers on April 07, 2007
I love this story it's like the fourth time I've read it and still love it , I hope you have more stories , I love the world you mad.
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From paulamyers on April 06, 2007
OOOOOHHHH, toooo short. Not fair,LOL cant wait for more, I love your story thanks for the fun.
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