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Reviews for Live and Let Die (Part 3): Learning To Deal

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From LadyTsunadeSama on April 05, 2007
The most awesome story!!! I simply love this and please please update soon-- I wanna see what happens!!
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From paulamyers on March 07, 2007
Hey I love your story , I hope you up data soon, and you keep this world you created alive. I can't get to your live journel it wont open for me. If you know of another way to find it let me know. thanks
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From adeaneri on February 25, 2007
loved the chapter.
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From FarAwayEyes on February 24, 2007
Well it's time for another review. I am glad that Koga is glad he made the right decisions. And I love how he has to slow down for Ah-Un. Too funny. I highly doubt Sesshomaru would punish the dragon for attacking our wolf prince if he wasn't being careful. And Sesshomaru and Rin are so sweet with one another. I love how she asked him about letting Inuyasha be human out in public, and he answered. If it had been anyone else, I suspect they wouldn't be talking for much longer. I loved when she kissed his forehead. Beautiful. Oh my, yet another betrayal. I don't think Naraku's incarnation is being all that wise here. Sure, he's thinking ahead about what will happen if Naraku dies, but to actually considering siding with Inuyasha and company? Not a good way to live long! I love how Totosai has learned such skill in jewelry making. It's amazing what he's done with the bands, including her engagement ring. Hmm, something tells me our �secret buyer� is Sesshomaru himself and he just doesn't want everyone shouting from the hills. I have a funny feeling he would rather keep it secret so it's not something Inuyasha can tell his brother to do in the past. Uh oh. And now Totosai has been outed to Jii-chan. This can be good or bad. I am glad he actually realized not all demons are bad and that it's a good thing he's Totosai's friend! Yay! Oh no, not another girl after Inuyasha. Sigh. Though I suppose you can't really blame the girls. Ooo, Sesshomaru and Rin arrived. I kind of like him with the dark hair and pony tail. Kinda nice. And I like the color choice for his shirt. Pretty. Love how Kagome pretty much knows but isn't sure what to do about it and is almost afraid to approach him considering Sesshomaru has more followers than he knows what to do with! Love that Rin is Sesshomaru's buffer between him and humanity. He needs one---badly. I do hope we'll get to see Sesshomaru and Rin's children at some point. It'd be neat to see which parent they tend to favor in both looks and personality. Ooo..and now Inuyasha and Kagome are going to finally meet them. This should be fun. Interesting how Shippo is suddenly so industrious, even though we all know he's merely trying to get that sympathy. Maybe if he actually tried to behave he wouldn't have to try to act super good. He could take some good lessons from Rin on that one. And learning how to do things like clean and kill the food you eat might come in handy for the brat, too. Methinks Naraku is learning the hard lesson that you're kinda left in the dark if you let others do your dirty work for you. And of course it only frustrates him more when he doesn't know anything. Oh my and we meet Sesshomaru! And he HUGS them. How unlike our demon lord. And then he gets shifty about his arm coming back. Oh my. I like how he explained the new fancy concealment charms. Glad Totosai's nephew could do that. I loved the interaction between Sesshomaru, Rin, Inuyasha, and Kagome. It was nice to see them reunited in the future, and for Inuyasha to finally kind of get the feeling that his brother accepts him for who he is. It was so sweet of them to agree to come to the wedding, though Inuyasha should know by now that they would. Love how Sesshomaru in the past fetches Miroku only to have the monk confuse him with that deck comment. And oh my, Koga actually gave up his shards. I wonder how he'll work in battle. I'm glad Jii-chan protested Sesshomaru's visit and then realized that he was reverting to his old opinions. Uh oh, there goes Naraku into psycho realm knowing that his incarnation has betrayed him. It will not be pretty. The lemon was nice and hot as always. Love how Inuyaha's all upset that they'll leave after just reuniting with Sesshomaru and Kagome figuring he'll understand. I think it's interesting that you have Kikyo not know about Inuyasha's night. I know the series has pretty much indicated that Kagome was the first person to discover this, and we've had little to challenge it. If anything, it's a true testament to Inuyasha's trust in Kagome and distrust in Kikyo. If he had truly thought he loved Kikyo as he proclaimed, he would have been as open as he was with Kagome concerning this most crucial of secrets. And he trusted Kagome so quickly with this secret that the fact you have given Kagome the ability to protect him on his human night shows how that could grow if they were allowed to finally put their full, one hundred percent, trust in one another. So Sesshomaru's not all that �quick� is he? He's the one in the present that gave Kagome her new outfit and it took him THIS long to figure it out? Sigh. Sometimes that boy. . .I love how he kissed her on the top of the head, though. That was a sweet, touching thing to add in and shows how Rin's changed him in the past 500 years. Another hot lemon and I love how it ended with them just resting with each other. Very sweet. Interesting how Kikyo jumped Miroku for not giving him the shards that he promised to give to Kagome. Seems sometimes jealousy rears its ugly head even if she's put most of it behind her. Seems Sesshomaru and Koga have the same bad habit of being antsy. Loved how Sesshomaru stared down the well, waiting. Inuyasha shouldn't hang with Miroku too often...that butt grabbing curse could always strike him! That was cute how he just grabbed her though. Boy, Sesshomaru shouldn't pace so much. He WILL wear a hole in the rug if he keeps it up, and considering his speed, I bet he could if he wanted to. And boy has he softened. So sweet of him to let Jaken have a room to rest and expressing concern for him in his old age. Oh dear. Naraku finally decided to do his own work. That can't be good. So proud of Jii-chan. He gave Inuyasha a good gift and told him that he was honored to know him. He's come a long way! Bad Kikyo, not listening to Sesshomaru. She still harbors some of those judgments that prevented her from being with Inuyasha in the first place. He may not always be the nicest, but he certainly isn't evil! I love Rin's kimono. Very beautiful. And of course, Sesshomaru just had to impress his lady by leaping ALL those steps with her in his arms. That was just cute. I'm glad you let Inuyasha keep his feet bare even for his wedding. He may have had to wear the shoes for the formal party, but somehow I think it's right he be barefoot for the wedding under the Goshinboko. I'm glad Rin and Sesshomaru had an obi for Kagome and that Rin got to help her with that. It's a nice thing for them all the be family together officially in human terms. I love the fire rat Kagome received. It's beautiful sounding and oh so appropriate. So this must be the outfit Sesshomaru didn't realize he had given her until just awhile ago. Ooops. Naraku's incarnation's jig is up. He's so caught and in so much trouble NOW. Naraku's really losing it here. I think he's a little more nervous and afraid than he's letting on here. Love how Sesshomaru's respectful enough to let Jii-chan get away with his lack of spiritual power for the ceremony. He knows that it's too important and probably knows where all that power ended up: Kagome. It's a wonder, sometimes, how she got so powerful! I loved how beautiful the wedding was and loved how their auras blended when they put the rings on. I wonder if anyone outside the shrine noticed any of that? Ooo, that sneaky Sesshomaru, telling them to get back when they were so worried about leaving so quickly after finding him back. He knew all along, even if he didn't know about that �gift.� I have to wonder if he really took that long to remember how Kagome got that green fire rat. . .I look forward to the next chapter as always, and I wonder how much longer Crazy Naraku can keep things up before he loses!
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From flamingangel on February 24, 2007
Yay! Another chapter! I love it!
I can't wait for the next chapter, now... Sesshoumaru warning them not to dawdle.. oo... the suspence! I love how you keep your chapters nice and long, with alot of detail (I could nicely picture Kagome's mom's dress in my head).
I hope you wiin in the competitions! I can't say that I've read the other fics, but I definately think yours deservs an award :)
Ah, and I'm also curious as to Shippo's punishment...
Can't wait to find out what happens!

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From flamingangel on February 12, 2007
Wow, I LOVE this series! I can't wait to read some more!
Keep it up!

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From LadyTsunadeSama on February 11, 2007
I suppose I should have reviewed before this but the truth is that heheheh I was reading it for like 4 hours before I realized I hadnt reviewed. This gets my vote as one of the best written InuYasha stories ever done and I await more most eagerly!
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From paulamyers on February 11, 2007
u are good, I love this story I hope the serices continues. I love your take on the world of Inuyasha.
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From XxSangoxX on January 29, 2007
I need more lol
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From DragonZero on January 25, 2007
Hey I great story. I have read both live and let die 1&2 and the 3rd one is really good keep up the good work. Please hurry up with the next chapter I can't wait!

Btw I wish to ask you to take a look at my first fanfics... It under Sess/Kag title "The Unwillingness of One"
I wish for your input on it because I am a big fan of your series Live and let die and wonder if you could give me any suggestins on how I may be able to improve mine own.
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From FarAwayEyes on January 15, 2007
Alright, I can finally make time to review the latest chapters. I love how Rin just totally understands the emotions of those around her and is growing. She feels bad for Sango, and her empathy is just beautiful. I love how Inuyasha's confused about Kagome's display of emotions and how he's not always sure what her crying might mean. The poor thing just has to go with it, I guess. And of course the lemon was nice and hot, but sweet and tender all at once. I like how he's learning to read her and know what she wants to make their relationship on all levels enjoyable. Nice of Kaede to notice that Sango and Miroku needed one another. Thank-god Shippo did, too! And wonderful how she is getting to know both Rin and Sesshomaru well enough to know that they, too, love one another. She's very wise to pick up on those things. And what a naughty inu Inuyasha is to be between Kagome's breasts when her mother is trying to talk to her! Way to go Miroku growing enough to comfort her without letting his hands get him into trouble! Yay. It's a nice touch! Oh my. Poor Inuyasha and the train. I can only imagine how unfun that might be for him. All the smells and the crowding and everything. GAH. Kagome's dress sounds beautiful and I am sure that Inuyasha will love it! Oh NO! Inuyasha has been defeated by a rack of bras and panties. Take it from me, those stupid racks are a pain in the ASS. I should know after spending two months moving the dumb things around---without wheels on most of them, too. I feel his pain! Seems Inuyasha has an eye for what he knows---traditional wear. Probably the first time he's liked shopping at all! Inuyasha in a tux just sound hot, too. Sigh. It's not fair that we'll never get to have our own sexy inu hanyou! Soooo Sesshomaru gets his shoes custom made and Inuyasha got lucky to find a pair on hand for him. Oh my. Seems I was right about not wanting to go back and tell Naraku you can't find Sango and Kohaku. He's not a happy spider, is he? Funny how Totosai isn't willing to get close to the group until Sesshomaru gives the Okay. I don't blame him. After all he has had trouble with our dear Demon Lord in the past. Sighs in frustration as Shippo has to get in someone's face AGAIN because he's just being a brat. When will he seriously LEARN to behave and stay that way? I don't think his groveling is going to get him any points. He's just sad that his plan didn't work, at least right now he is. The rings themselves sound beautitful. And so very fitting! I love how Naraku's incarnation raise the question about how he'll live if Naraku is dead. It is a rather good question! Smart of Totosai to build in that precaution for those rings. He may seem absentminded but he's not! Shippo's in so much trouble this time, I think when Inuyasha's done, Sesshomaru might have a few things to say! And I don't feel sorry for him at all. Yay for Sess and Adult Rin going to the same shoe shop! And it's nice to know that Sess has managed to keep his usual demeanor for the most part! What a sweet husband he is to ask if she wanted more than one pair, though. Sooo cute! And Kikyo is growing so well. I like how she is understanding that Kagome is stronger than she gave credit and that the reason she and Inuyasha didn't make it was due to lack of trust. And no one really had to torment her to get that answer, she just came upon it on her own. Uh oh, Kagome has doubts again! And Inuyasha's grown so much to actually be able to tell her why he won't stay around when Kikyo shows up. Yay! Love how Inuyasha can share some things in their telepathic link that he couldn't otherwise. Aww. Poor Sango. She feels bad that she is in the way of Kikyo showing up because of Kohaku. I hoep someone can convince her otherwise, because while Kikyo is afraid of Kohaku's shard being tainted, it's not Sango's fault! Yay for Koga finally admitting that he remembered his promise to Ayame and will not be with her instead. It's about time he grew up and let Kagome go! I can't wait to see what these two end up doing after he loses his shards and has to be strong on his own. I'm glad that Shippo isn't getting any sympathy from anyone. He was a snot and now he's pouting because he knows he's in big, big trouble. It's his own fault, anyways. I still don't have any pity for him and I assume Inuyasha's punishment will be bad! Awwwwww. Souta wants to be just like Inuyasha and got a suit to match. That's adorable! I'm glad Jiichan has gotten used to Inuyasha and Kagome and is willing to preform that ceremony quickly. I can't wait to see what happens when those rings are put on. And yay for Kagome's wedding kimono. It's beautiful! I love how Miroku and Sango's relationship is growing so slowly and wonderfully. Their bond is strong, even if they've had a lot to overcome. They're just so sweet! I'm glad that Kagome is upset with Shippo and won't let it just slide or ask for Inuyasha to go easy on him. It just wouldn't be right. Funny how Inuyasha's shredded socks with his toes. I wonder if Sesshomaru has the same problem with his socks or doesn't he wear any? Ooooo the reception. I can't wait and I wonder what they'll do when they meet Sess and Rin again. I wonder what Sess looks like in his �humanized� form. It'll be interesting to say the least!
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From ANON - XxSangoxX *NSI* on January 12, 2007
love it.
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From ANON - NateR on January 05, 2007
I just read the entire 3 parts of live and let die, I can see why you won all those awards now. That was so great, update soon!
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From ANON - L80hawk on December 30, 2006
This is my first review, so I'll keep it short. I have been faithfully waiting for this new chapter; your description of the bands Totosai created was so unique and clever, and I am anxious to see how they will react in battle or if Kagome and Inuyasha are seperated. Will someone later attempt to remove the bands that bond them?I have been so anxious for the reception scene and the reunion of the future Sesshomaru and Rin with Inuyasha and Kagome, but alas another cliffy. Shippo's challenge is also an interesting twist, how will the hanyou react when they return from the future?

Kudos for a really great fic! I can't wait for the next update, keep them coming!
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From ANON - youkia_girl 0u812 on December 30, 2006
please up date soon it's KILLLLLING me to find out what going to happen at the party. lol good job though.
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