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Reviews for Live and Let Die (Part 3): Learning To Deal

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From ANON - inuyasha831 on December 29, 2006
DUM DUN DUM....we finally know that Rin and Fluffy get together� as if it wasn't obvious before! lol. I'm glad Shippou will finally learn his place in the group especially after the stunt he pulled; BTW that was a very cool scene with Inuyasha's whole reaction, good job. Most of the time when I was reading that last chapter, I kept thinking that inuyasha was going to turn human and Naraku's spy was going to find them, but it didn't happen. Oh well it turned out fine with out it. You are really starting to tie up all the loose ends with the group, i.e. Inuyasha's feeling for Kikyo and Kohaku/ Sango relationship, it�s nice to have everything nice and neat. I can't wait for the wedding that will truly be an amazing chapter. You did give one thing away about the final battle though...we now know that Fluffy and Rin survive so I will take that to mean that the good guys win. Ha! I figured it out lol. Update soon and have a happy new year!
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From ANON - inuyasha831 on December 11, 2006
Very nice, loved this update, gomen that it took me so long to RR, finals are keeping me running around. The shopping scenes were good very realistic and you gave great detail which was awasome is every respect. When inuyasha fell into the underwear shelf I laughed my ass off, well done. I would like to see more progress with sango and miroku all they seem to ever do is console one another, i'm not asking for more lemons between them just that thier relationship should move on. I can't wait to see where you take Rin in this story, with your creativity there is no telling, but I know it will be great. Update soon, I await the wedding chapter. Keep up the Great Work!
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From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2006
OH MY GOD I HAVE BEEN FOLLOWING YOUR STORIES SIENCE THE BEGINNING LIVE AND LET DIE IS THE BEST FANFICTION EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE

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From FarAwayEyes on November 23, 2006
Well it looks like it's my turn to give a review. Love how Inuyasha's got a goofy grin on his face about Mama telling them to take a shower together. It just sounds cute, and of course, sexy. And how nice of Mama to buy him some new clothes. Such a motherly thing to do. Poor Kagome, she's still embarrassed about peeing in front of him. That's funny. Now that they're in the shower, seems it's less about cleaning than it is about some more sex. Oh my, and it is hot, too. Well, Mama did encourage them, after all. . .Wise of Koga to send his friends and pack away from the village AND Jaken and Ah-Un. No telling what Jaken might say if he should see Koga. I don't think it would be pretty. Oh dear, I think he just figured out Sesshomaru wouldn't hesitate to kick his ass---not to mention succeed. Poor Koga, no respect. It's nice to see Sango and Kohaku finally reunited. The poor boy needs some love and support in his life. It's so sad that he'd think his sister would be angry with him! Oh my. Souta is a little excited, isn't he? My, my. Jumping in his future brother-in-law's lap. That's cute that he's so happy Inuyasha's going to marry his sister. Yay for Kagome realizing that sometimes Inuyasha gets tongue-tied, not that he's doubting his choice. He's not big on those kind of things, especially when he has to think on his feet! Uh-oh. I wouldn't want to be Naraku's incarnation and have to return to him to tell him the bad news. I'm not sure Naraku will be very forgiving or understanding that there just simply wasn't any signs of Kohaku or Sango there. He'll just have to deal with it, I guess. Aww. Good timing there, monk. Finally, he lets that true compassion of his show. I think as much as Inuyasha hides behind that tough, rugged exterior and biting remark, Miroku hides behind those �cursed� hands of his and the groping. It's nice to see him simply show his care and love for Sango without being stupid in the end. And Rin, so sweet and caring. She has such a large heart, it's no wonder it's melted the ice around Sesshomaru's. She just had to show her concern for both Sango and Kohaku. Aww and Sango's taking Miroku on a walk with her. Yay. Uh oh, a huge dinner party, on the night of the new moon, held by Totosai? Why do I get the feeling a certain Demon Lord is truly behind this? Shopping...that'll be fun. I can just see Inuyasha now. Especially when it comes time to be measured for his clothes. Poor Koga. He has no idea how much Sesshomaru outclasses him, does he? Suddenly appearing out of no where like that. That's classic. Nice, he even knows to use Inuyasha's name when Sesshomaru gets pissed. We know that Sesshomaru's a possessive guy. HE's the only one who can get away with insulting his baby brother. Anyone else better expect a huge ass kicking. Another soft scene between Miroku and Sango. I like how she was the one doing most of the initial touching and hugging. It shows real progress. Nice to see Kikyo talk to Kohaku about his feelings about seeing Sango. It's hard for him to understand, but I think she helped, at least a little. She knows, as I'm sure he does, that Naraku could come back any time and end it. They don't have to say it since it's the large elephant in the room. Oh dear. Looks like Kagome's gonna be getting Inuyasha all worked up again resting her head in his lap like that. She probably wanted that, anyways. Bad back! Bad! She was about to help Inuyasha out and it had to get in the way like that! Seems he thinks she oughta handle it right away even if she meant to rub his back instead. Silly Inuyasha. A two for one, eh? A massage AND sex together? That sounds fun and, and, and well hot. What a nice way to wake up...more sex. Yay. Uh oh. Kagome's upset. That's not good for a man's ego after sex. Glad she let him now it was happiness and not sadness! Made her very happy to know he could be a little more public with her than he has been in the past, all without even mentioning Kikyo once. And yes, good of him to tell her that he told Kikyo he'd not let her get away with hurting Kagome. I'll be anxious to see the dinner party and what happens when they get the rings. It should be interesting to see who shows up and what's going on. I can't wait to see adult Rin with Sesshomaru. I'm sure she's got to be beautiful, and a bit wiser than the last time they saw her! I look forward to the next chapter!
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From ANON - inuyasha831 on November 23, 2006
Nice update, the fluff was a nice change, and the mystry with naraku is starting to become very intersting, keep it up; I can't wait for the wedding. Happy Thanksgiving BTW
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From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2006
haha i thought you were going to say that she was pregnant! hahhhhhh i didn't know if i was scared about that or not lol

shit.
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From FarAwayEyes on November 14, 2006
Alright, I better finish getting caught up. What a sight Koga found, huh? I wonder if he knows that Sesshomaru's the one that melted the tiger down to goo. I still have to wonder, though, if there really isn't something Naraku can do with the remains, goo or not. We know he's resourceful, after all. Silly cops, thinking Inuyasha had something to do with Kagome getting hurt. ..as if he'd hurt her on purpose. Glad they figured it out. Stupid Eri. Can't leave them alone, and now she has to run off and tell everyone that she thinks Inu's not human. Gah. Can't she get her own life? Good cover by Yuka saying that Inuyasha can have that done through plastic surgery. Ah, the ever observant Sesshomaru. He knows that Naraku's up to no good, but he also is so curious about things going on around him. Good for him to know that Inuyasha always returns to Kagome no matter what. Uh oh, Sesshomaru realized he's, ahem, a bit too attached to our Rin, eh? Too bad. Again, Kagome is such a smooth liar here with that doctor. Still makes me wish she could do that well in the series. Love how Kagome wants to defend Inuyasha from those silly boys at school who think he's foreign. If they only knew. . .Inuyasha really needs to get a book on how to control that guilt of his. Sheesh. Glad he's got Kagome to stop him. And uh oh, loved how Kagome wanted to, ahem, spend some time with Inuyasha and he had to point out her mother behind them. Embarrassing I'll say. Finally Sango's figuring out that she should apologize to poor Miroku for what she's done. She should realize that he would want to touch her after what they've shared, but not always in a perverted manner. Good thing she's coming to her senses. Poor confused Miroku. He just doesn't know what to do. I've always thought, as much as he flirts, he's never actually done anything. I'm glad they finally could talk about that and get that out of their systems. Maybe they can finally start to build a real, trusting relationship! Way to go Yuka and Ayume, going over there to ask and talk with Inuyasha and Kagome first, before doing something stupid. I'm glad they were willing to accept them because they're her friends and not use it against them. And love how grandpa finally accepted Inuyasha because he did the honorable thing and asked permission for the ceremony. Ooo. Exciting to see Totosai show up. A jeweler, eh. He'd be well suited for the job, that's for sure. Love how Inuyasha had to choke back a few laughs. Poor thing had to have a hard time there. And the ring and necklace sounds beautiful. Oh my, Totosai knows more than he's letting on. That sneaky demon! Mama's pretty smart. And Inuyasha's always so shy about gifts. Poor thing. Yay! Sesshomaru and Rin make it to the present. That's cute. And Inuyasha caught on all those years ago? I dunno. He just doesn't seem to be the type to piece it together, but maybe he actually PAID ATTENTION for a change. I'm sure if he uses those eyes he can figure it out. And Sesshomaru knew he was being laughed at. Too funny. Nice to see Miroku and Inuyasha get a chance to talk. They do share a nice bond as friends, and I think it sometimes gets lost in the shuffle of things. That silly monk should realize by now he's not all that misunderstood. He's the one that keeps getting in trouble, after all. Oh my, I'm glad Kagome gave Kikyo the benefit of the doubt, but I know I'd still be pretty wary about the whole affair. After all, she still is responsible for Inuyasha's imprisonment in that cave, at least partly. It may give her a chance to atone for it, perhaps? And Rin wants to learn how to read and write. That's cute. Sesshomaru should have taken the time to teach her years ago, though. I love how Totosai is scared off by a big aura. Maybe it's how he's lived so long? Poor Inuyasha, thinking Totosai would take more fangs. Goof. Oh dear. Kikyo did not expect to land on her ass, did she? Smooth. I always wondered why the manga, and the anime especially, makes it seem that Kikyo is the stronger of the two, while Kagome is supposedly powerless. Kikyo has less power, I think, but has the training, which is her advantage. We know that Kagome has more power, because she's affected Naraku with it in much more damaging ways than Kikyo's, she just lacks the proper tutelage to do some of the things Kikyo does. It was nice to see someone acknowledge that about her. Oh dear. Totosai and Myoga should realize talking about Inuyasha right in front of him is not a good idea! Yay for Kikyo understanding that mikos CAN have power even if they take a lover. She could have saved herself so much trouble if she had realized that a lot sooner. I like the feudal era phone sex. That was hot, even if it wasn't an actual lemon, and I loved how Myoga WANTED to talk to him but Totosai figured out that Inuyasha was ahem, a little busy. Oh my. Sesshomaru is jealous already. That somehow does not surprise me. Oh dear. Inuyasha's a panty thief! Somehow that doesn't surprise me. Uh oh. Naraku's watching! I wonder what he'll learn. Miroku is trying to get himself killed asking them what was going on under that barrier...somethings never change. Naraku's been had! He still has no idea what's in store for him and he's busy buying his popcorn for the main feature. Too bad he won't enjoy it. Leave it to Miroku to realize that Sesshomaru meant the more that Inuyasha and Kagome have sex, the more likely they'll share power. And the lemon was hot, as always. The well is an interesting choice to, well, do that. Sesshomaru's not nearly as observant as he should be. He should know that Rin can read him like a book, at least for the most part. She knows when he's troubled and pleased and anything else. I think I really like the relationship Sesshomaru and Kaede have established. There's a quiet respect, and dare I say a trust building there? He knows that Kaede is an old woman, but not weak, either. Oh dear. That would have been an awful scene, having to pick splinters out of Kagome's butt after all that hot sex. And now Kohaku has arrived. I wonder what will happen there. I'm curious, because I think this takes place before Kohaku ends up traveling with Sesshomaru in the manga. Is he still holding a grudge here against Kohaku for nearly killing Rin under Naraku's control? I will be curious to find out. And now I am all caught up.
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From ANON - joy on November 13, 2006
as always frikken amazin cant wait for next chappie...! keep up the good work
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From ANON - inuyasha831 on November 12, 2006
Whoa! Kohaku made an appearance! Great! So I take it from the flash forward that Rin will get with Shosmaru in the future, so Shippou will not be a "problem". Just thought I'd ask. Away great well lemon, I had never considered that location before, good job. Nice timing with Naraku's minion BTW, really cool how that whole thing worked out. I can't wait for the battle, but that means that this fic would be over and that would be make me very sad. Oh and by the way, thanks for the shout out and the answers to my questions. Keep the good work and update soon.
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From FarAwayEyes on November 12, 2006
Finally, here are the reviews you deserve! My, my. That nurse sure should have listened to Inuyasha when he asked her to check the chart. Would it have been so hard to read it and then find out you don't need to give the stupid injection, no matter what the schedule says? Sheesh. Inuyasha might not have a clue as how modern medicine works, but he sure knew enough that Kagome shouldn't get another dose. That nurse is lucky he didn't turn full demon her. And I'm glad the doctor sided with him and didn't try to throw him out. Kagome sleeping through all of that makes it almost certain that no one would be able to stop him if he transformed. Kikyo stubborn as always. Why does she insist, just like EVERY other character that she's the ONLY one who can beat Naraku? Honestly, they oughta take realize by now that there are strength in numbers and that if they all worked together his ass would be grass. I like how Sesshomaru finally admitted that to himself, and acknowledged that Kagome is very strong, no matter what Kikyo wants to think. I like how Kaede stood up to her, rather than letting her get away with intimidation and the like. It's nice to see Souta be Inuyasha's friend while he has to be away from Kagome. And of course, Inuyasha gets his favorite snack. If he can't kill or be with his mate, food is a good fall back. Ugh, not Kagome's friends again. Gah! Eri shouldn't touch Inuyasha! At least Ayume knows better. Daaaaaaamn Eri has no class. Kagome? Prude? Poor, poor Inuyasha. And he had to overhear all of it. Loved how Inuyasha confused the fact that Kagome might not be �decent� not realizing it meant clothes. Poor thing. Aww good to see Kagome up again and getting much much better. But did Eri HAVE to show up again? Eww. Come on, girl. He's taken! I can't believe she said she'd try to take Inuyasha away in front of Kagome. She's lucky she didn't get her ass purified or something. Love Inuyasha's explosion once the stupid girl leaves. Gah. Like Eri'd even come close to being good enough for him. Oh no, NOW Kagome's pissed. If I'm Eri, I'm running right now. Oh Sango. She should make up her mind on what she wants. Poor thing, so confused. She wants him but she doesn't. . .sigh. And she's confusing Miroku. What's he supposed to do? Get hit and practically rape her? Sheesh. Those crazy kids will have to figure it out, I guess. Enter Koga the diplomat. He's dense, but he still has some smarts enough to know when there's something going on! I hope Sango will tell him what the hell he did wrong..confused monks can leap to very bad conclusions very quickly. And good for Shippo, even if he did kind of mess up. He's starting to learn..at least a little. Good to see Sesshomaru try to put the pieces together. He knows Naraku plays games to get his way and uses others to do his dirty work. He's half way there! Kagome oughta know by now that Inuyasha will baby her to no end. Loved how he swept her off her feet. Liked how Kagome tried to explain western traditions to Inuyasha. Go Mama, telling Inuyasha what he needed to hear. He needs to know it's not his fault! Uh oh, that whole time separation thing..not good. The ever curious and concerned Sesshomaru. .. he'll never admit it. Of course he had to go see why Inuyasha was so upset! It's nice to see everyone concerned about Inuyasha for a change. Not just Kagome. They can tell he's not holding up well without Kagome in the same time. Koga don't do that! Oi. He's not very bright sometimes, I take it back. Sesshomaru still maintains he'll be the one to kill Inuyasha, huh? Interesting. So Koga's gonna find out finally. That should really bake his noodle. Figures Koga'd try the well first thing. Goof Good to know Sesshomaru has realize he doesn't kill in front of Rin unless he has to. He knows she's seen enough and been through enough already. That evil Eri! How can she do that! Well about time she got the hint. Nothing like watching Inuyasha and Kagome go at eachother like bunnies. I hope she knows better now! And the lemon? Hot as always. I think I'll get the other chapters in a bit. . .I'm so far behind, sigh.
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From ANON - joy on November 08, 2006
WOW that chap was sooooooooooo cute i wish i had my own lil inuyasha.. but don't we all. Any who i have to hand it to you that was great chappie
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From ANON - MaryJane on November 06, 2006
I loooove this chapter, just having Kikyo knocked on her butt was great! I can't wait to see the next chapter.
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From ANON - inuyasha831 on November 04, 2006
Great update, and I loved the lime. That was "almost" fedual era phone sex, lol. Anyway the training kikyo was wonddeful and really showed kagomes power, good wokr in that area. I like the fact that you decided to include the details ot the ring making, that was very interesting. Keep up the great work and don't get too confused by the time travel aspect. Update soon!
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From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2006
lol
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From ANON - MJ on October 29, 2006
I just wanted to tell you how much I love this story. I ran across it monday when I was looking for something different to read. I read one of your one-shots first and loved them so I started on your Live and Let Die series and fell in love! Normally I'm a yaoi fan but I just can't get enough of this story and can't wait until you write the next chapter! Keep up the good work.
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