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Reviews for Live and Let Die (Part 3): Learning To Deal

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  • From FarAwayEyes on July 15, 2006
    It certainly looks like Shippo hasn't learned enough from his mistakes. The funny thing is, I can see him trying to scare Jaken because he's bored and wants to amuse himself. I say he got off lucky. Sure he got singed, but Sesshomaru didn't really discipline him, at least not yet. I suppose he'll tell Inuyasha about it and have him handle the situation. I know I laughed when Shippo tried to get out of it, only to have Rin tell Sesshomaru exactly what happened. Classic. Everyone knows Rin wouldn't lie to her lord. Besides, Shippo should have known it wasn't a good idea. I bet he gets left behind on the next couple trips for this little stunt, which is not what he wanted at all. I liked the scene between Miroku and Sango. Miroku is trying so hard, but I can see Sango's point of view. He might be all nice and everything right now, but what if he decides to go off and ask all the ladies to have his children again? He'll have to work extra hard to gain her trust and keep it, that's for sure! I do hope Sango will realize that Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is good and that their happiness is good for the group. After all, it can only make everyon stronger in the end. If she would just take the time to see that, I think Sango would be able to get closer to Miroku. I know they're not really able to have sex, just due to the problems a pregnant Sango would produce, but I hope that they can actually become closer and be loving with one another so neither of them feels like a third and fourth wheel to Kagome and Inuyasha. They also wouldn't feel lonely if they both could just commit to eachother. I guess I'll have to see how you work that into their relationship. I know that if Shippo is left behind again that might help those two! I am wondering exactly what Kikyo is up to, though. I wonder if she will be angry about what has happened with Inuyasha and Kagome, or if she will try to become a bigger ally. I hope when they do see one another, Inuyasha won't revert to some of his previous behavior. I don't really see him doing that, especially after what happened to get Inuyasha and Kagome together in the first place, but sometimes he does have a soft spot for Kikyo. I can't wait to see what happens there. And when she does show up, I wonder how Kaede and Sesshomaru will react? I have a funny feeling Sesshomaru would have a few things to say to her. I loved how frustrated Inuyasha got about his loss of concentration. And then it was hilarious when they went out shopping and Inuyasha thought the store clerks were coming on to Kagome, but it was HIM. I thought he was going to bolt the store when he realized they were checking him out. Hilarious. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 14, 2006
    i think my fav. part was the twins.. hahah that was perfect....


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  • From XxSangoxX on July 08, 2006
    oh yes, and i wanted to inquire...

    will there be a baby in the outcome of
    the eventuality of this story?

    i would really like there to be, HOP TO THAT WRITING!!!

    i suppose i should write too...

    oh sigh.

    Je Ne
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  • From XxSangoxX on July 08, 2006
    omg i went on media miner and read the first two parts to this.... i was rather
    intrigued. I strongly suggest you finish this, i really appreciated the IN character
    sense i was getting for most of this. The whole sesshoumaru thing however
    could prove to be a bit redundant in OOC... He does not stay true to character
    very much. I supposehowever, it does still bode well.

    please continue with your writing, i would really like to see more
    come from this.

    BTW nice lemons. ha. Miroku and sango HAVE to get it on eventually cuz
    damn .... houshi needs to get laid almost half as much as Sango does.

    PS check your work for grammar and spelling whenever you can.
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  • From FarAwayEyes on July 07, 2006
    I loved the chapter! Poor Shippo. He still shouldn't have blurted out what he did, but at least this time around he feels guilty, half because Sesshomaru might spank his little tush, and half because he was trying so hard and had behaved so well lately that he felt bad for slipping. He's still a little kid, so we can't totally blame him, but at least he knows to do better in the future! I loved how Sesshomaru was amused by Shippo's holding of his butt when he was pretending to be "asleep." You'd think Shippo would know that Sesshomaru can SMELL and HEAR that. I understood where Sango was coming from concerning Miroku, but I just wanted to shake her for being so angry at Kagome and Inuyasha for being happy. I know she feels bad that she would feel that way, but I just wanted to shake her anyways. I loved how she ended up having to face Sesshomaru on that, simply because he had overheard her musing aloud. I was glad that he held his temper, but still let her know how wrong she was to say she is both Kagome and Inuyasha's friend, while wishing that Inuyasha would screw up and upset Kagome. I hope that she starts to think about her feelings and actually confronts Miroku. Speaking of him, he should behave much, much better! How can he be telling Inuyasha that he's working so hard to be better, when Sango feels otherwise! As for Inuyasha and Kagome's meditation, beautiful. I liked how Kagome giggled and distracted Inuyasha. His suggestion, though, to focus on him was good, even if Kagome has a dirty mind. And Grandpa! Oh my, he was sure quick on his feet. Not the best lie, but hey, it got him through. I have to wonder though, you'll have them practicing in the well house, will those on the other side of the well feel it? Or be aware? I'm curious about that. We know that they aren't so aware of what's on the other side, but what about something like that? I loved the snippet with Naraku. I think he's going to be sorely disappointed on the fireworks he's trying to set up. I can't wait to see his big plan blow up in his face---save what Kikyo might do. Anyways, before I write a novel here, I can't wait until the next chapter!
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  • From FarAwayEyes on July 02, 2006
    When will Shippo learn that adults have things they would like to do that do NOT require little boys? I know he wants to spend time with all the adults and everything, but still. He really oughta learn how to entertain himself at different times when he finds himself left alone. Poor Miroku just wants to have a little romantic time with Sango and he has to get in the way. I loved how you had Grandpa not take too kindly to the mating. Poor Inuyasha, and of course when he snapped like that, he said the wrong thing but meant the right thing. One day, I swear, Inuyasha will learn how to THINK before he SPEAKS, but I guess that might be too much to hope for. And the fact that they wouldn't tell Grandpa themselves that those marks came about, from, well, having sex, priceless. I liked the heated kiss and fondle in the well. Nice touch to have them stay in the well a bit longer once they passed through to the past. Too bad Shippo had to interrupt, AGAIN. I loved the comment that Inuyasha said about not wanting to thank Kaeda for teaching Shippo those aura things. And I absolutely adored the fact that you had Rin running around and tripping Jaken like that. And of course, Sesshomaru was priceless, knowing it's going on but ignoring it at the same time. And I loved his amusement at Shippo's squeak. Poor Shippo. He should realize as long as he behaves Sesshomaru won't do anything to him. As for the dark, evil plot that's brewing, I think Naraku's gonna be sorely sorry. We know that Kagome hasn't lost an ounce of her power. In fact she's gained. He might want to steer clear of the couple if he wants to keep himself in one piece. He'll also be sorely sorry to find out that Sesshomaru won't kill them. Kouga neither. And Kikyo? She's the only wildcard. I do wonder what she might attempt to do, although I can't imagine it'd be all that effective at this point. I will be curious to see what else Naraku comes up with, that's for sure. I did enjoy his. . .colorful description of what Inu and Kags were doing! I'm waiting for your next installment to see what will happen to our heroes next. What will they learn!
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  • From ANON - hosagi on July 01, 2006
    The Tidbit was excellent the full thing w0w. keep up the good work
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