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By : TheGoddessRhiannon
  • From kookookitty on April 23, 2008
    sorry for your troubles. yes, it would be good if you can crank out a chapter soon.

    thank you.
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  • From Hatchii on November 28, 2007
    Absolutely FANTASTIC! I have read quite literally hundreds of fanfics, but this one by far is my favorite so far! I really hope that you continue writing and updating! Keep up the beyond excellent work!!
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  • From FallenAngel1129 on August 25, 2007
    hi! lol i actually created a login name just so i could review this story and say I MUST HAVE MORE! LOL.........i love it! great plot ty for not diving right into the smut, its nice to have a story line

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  • From LadyCash on August 13, 2007
    I think you've been given pretty good advice grammar and layout wise, so I'm going to
    cut to the chase with my main concern.
    This story has potential, but not as it stands. Frankly, if I were IY, I'd drop this
    Kagome faster than you could spit. She's whiney, selfish, demanding, controlling, and
    immature. It's all about what she wants, and if IY disagrees, SIT. This is not funny.
    A true relationship will never happen as long as this continues. They never talk, just
    constantly bicker and fight. Are you sure that your Kagome and IY really even like each
    other, because I'm just not seeing it.
    An overhaul would do wonders for this story, cutting the snarkiness and sarcasm, and
    showing just why they want to be together, and how they work to achieve that.
    Drop the sits, grow them up, and let them, and us, see just what wonderful things happen
    when they become real.
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  • From AletaRois on August 11, 2007
    I really am enjoying this story, though parts of it are very long-winded and lost my interest, such as the extensive search for clothes for InuYasha. Also, you are in need of a good Beta.
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  • From ANON - hannah on June 26, 2007
    update please!!!i love it!!!
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  • From moongirl818 on June 17, 2007
    i like this plz update soon
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  • From kookookitty on June 15, 2007
    a suggestion, a story posted in more places has more exposure.

    other popular sites:

    mediaminer[dot]org, destinysgateway[dot]com, fichaven[dot]org, fanfiction[dot]net

    more places means more feedback. more happy reviews!

    ciao!
    ginny
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  • From WTW on June 14, 2007
    *ebil grin* I love the kag and inu bickering/fighting in the latest chapter. Cute ^^

    Keep it up! I can't wait to see what else happens.
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  • From julianna on June 07, 2007
    I am in love with your story so far!! I really hope that your write much more! And soon! Lol
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  • From kookookitty on June 02, 2007
    you need to add onto your summary that you've edited the existing chapters and invite everyone to read them again and tell you what they think.

    everything looks good, pretty with all of the line breaks and stuff. the story is still really entertaining and funny.

    ja,
    ginny
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  • From ANON - BrownCoat07 on May 30, 2007
    Ok... in case the sight won't let you see my e-mail (for beta'ing) it's rdietz@gac.edu
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  • From ANON - BrownCoat07 on May 30, 2007
    Hey hey!!! If you want a beta before you continue this story and nobodys offered yet... I can, it may take me a while because I have a TON of stuff going on this summer, but, eh, I'll manage to work it in, of that I'm positive... Also, just wanna say that I LOVE this fic so far, and if you do not continue it it will be a crying shame =) Please get back to work on this soon =D
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  • From HimeJunHi on May 28, 2007
    WHERE is the FLUFF?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From wharehouse on May 26, 2007
    yo, Not a bad story, could definatley use some work in the grammar/spelling but enjoyable regardless. In response to your Beta request I could help you out, I've done it for a few people before. If you're interested in my help just hit me up with an email.

    Cheers
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