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By : VixenArgentum
  • From ANON - nette on November 12, 2006
    yes another great chapter wit some ryuu/inut action luved it! even a lil mix of inu/sessh in there as well. it was cute having those two fight over sesshy's pelt, they sounded like lil five yr olds fighting over a toy, classic. and inut sleeping on the floor, hilarious. i cant wait to read more so update soon : )
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on November 12, 2006
    Ah, again, so much to process. I apologize if my review is not as enthusiastic as is normal, but I'm a bit under the weather.

    I must tell you how very much I appreciate that you put so much into each chapter. It never leaves me feeling as though dinner has been taken away after only a couple of bites. Very fulfilling indeed. I bask in the headiness of the feast before me! Also, I don't understand why you would be impressed by reviews from me. What have I done to deserve that? Anywho, on with the review!

    Well written as always. As I have said before, I just love papa Inu. It was very wise of him to allow Ryu to take out all of the frustration, hurt, and disappointment. Very smart man. I was impressed that he obliged Ryu by sleeping on the floor. Despite all of the humorous barbs, I find the relationship between the two very sweet. You do such an excellent job of injecting humor and in such delightfully intelligent ways. I am certain that I do not have a complete picture tonight, but be assured that I will reread the chapter. Also, you manage to include the two in the story without it being out of place with the two main characters. Sometimes, the inclusion of focus on other characters other than the main character is an annoying distraction and not at all welcome. Not so with this fic.

    As always, Inuyasha's behavior toward Sesshoumaru is very touching. Hm, Inuyasha realized that Sesshoumaru had accepted him on some level (accepting gifts), but Sesshoumaru is wondering why Inuyasha never picked up on them as subtle hints that he loved Inuyasha? So, we find that Sesshoumaru has loved Inuyasha for quite some time. Another wonderful revelation. Inuyasha's snoring and the childish argument over the fluff was very amusing. Again, Inuyasha is concerned over Sesshoumaru's welfare and attends to Sesshoumaru as a mate would. He is very caring and protective. That is very gratifying.

    I am glad that the entire family is resting in relative peace for a day and can't help but wonder what kind of hell will break loose next! LOL You have surprised me with the lack of deep angst, the characters always moving forward, and I am grateful for that.

    When I put in a list of questions, I am not doing so in order to wring answers from you. It is merely to point out what a great job you are doing in entertaining me and keeping my interest. So, no worries. There's no need to respond to those.

    Well, another well written chapter. I would be cheering if I felt better. I enjoyed the chapter very much and though I am anxious for the next, quality comes first. I promise to be patient. ^_^

    Snow
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  • From ANON - angel on November 12, 2006
    man .. im glad they are getting along .. please please please please please please please please please udpate soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - kelly on November 12, 2006
    o.O please put up another chapter soon!!! i really wanna read what happens next!! please and thank you ^_^
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  • From ANON - LaToya on November 12, 2006
    I loved it! Thank you and youre doing such a good job. I may have to ask you to help me when I begin to write a yaio fic ^_^
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  • From ANON - PolkaDot on November 12, 2006
    I don't think that Sesshomaru got quite what he wanted. Personally Inutaishou's ass could stand a little more kicking, IMO>
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 12, 2006
    Very good!

    First of all, glad you're feeling better! RL always takes precedence over stuff like this you know....

    I got a kick out of when Sess was going to his room, with Inu following, and then thinking he was hearing things, even though he really wasn't. I also think that Ryuu is letting InuT off EASY, all things considered! ^-^

    I very much enjoyed the new chapter.
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  • From ANON - thedah on November 12, 2006
    oh.. this was so wonderful. I really loved this chapter. Ryuoo is just so awesome.. and sarcastic.. XD Poor Inu no Taisho.
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  • From ANON - ArchNemesis on November 12, 2006
    Ryuu is a cold bastard, but I can understand where he's coming from. Poor InuTaisho, he's literally in the dog house. I loved the tender moments with Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. Although, I do agree with Inuyasha on Sesshoumaru killing him if he finds him in his bed.

    Well, the Lord and Master is home once again, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully, Ryuu with talk his mate and let Inu off the hook. Will Sesshoumaru ever tell Inuyasha about the pup?

    Excellent work! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

    Nemesis ^_~
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  • From ANON - Lu-chan-san on November 06, 2006
    Yay, my first Inuyasha/Sesshomaru FF^^ I love it, hope the next chapter is up soon!

    *hugs*

    Lu-chan-san

    PS: If it is possible please send me a mail when the new chapter is on^^
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  • From ANON - kay on October 10, 2006
    i love this story!!!!! it Totally rocks! I hope that you update soon. :)

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  • From ANON - LaToya on October 08, 2006
    I like the chapie, it was great! can you please add another chapter? Will it be about Ryuu and InuTashio giving into each others' wants and needs?
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  • From PrismaKakkerra on October 08, 2006
    Alas, let me give credit, where credit is due. I find this story intriguing, as I wrote you in my letter, and I do hope you write more soon. Your right. Erotica is more than sex, and it s the character of the writer of fanfiction when they can go beyond the basic drugery of sex and look deeper into the characters they give their hours to, making the story not just fanfiction, but a story of their own. It takes a good writer to make a reader believe whats going on in the fanfic is more of a side line to the actual anime/manga plot, as if the very creators had a side line or some say in what goes on in the story. Take the story out of the ruff of PWP and put it into a whole nother world. I believe you have achieved this. Keep up this excellent work, I look forward to every single chapter with great expectations.





    Prismakakkerra ^.^
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  • From ANON - amelia on October 08, 2006
    wonderful chapter, as always!! i hope there will be some "getting to know you again" intamacy between Ryyuu and Inu Taishou!! Hope you're recovering well from your surgeory!! take your time and keep up the good work! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! =D
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  • From ANON - lick my stick on October 06, 2006
    what's with InuT I mean that was weird even for him
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