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By : VixenArgentum
  • From ANON - emdog on October 02, 2006
    I think I'm gonna like Ryuu. :) Update soon!
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  • From ANON - limited on October 02, 2006
    That was awesome, best line ever was "Forgive me! I love you!" Keep up the good work and I hope you recover safely from surgery.
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  • From ANON - Merely Truth on October 02, 2006
    BREATHTAKING ! Thank you !
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  • From ANON - DemonGoddess on October 02, 2006
    hehe, now that I'm more awake....

    I like how you are taking this in smaller steps, instead of the huge leaps into feelings that I've seen before. Your use of flashbacks is good, in that it really shows some things that are only vaguely hinted at in the present text of the story.

    Boy oh boy, dog daddy REALLY fixed it this time didn't he? One the one hand, he got what he wanted. Both his sons spared, and his mate free. Even tho he didn't do the freeing himself. On the other hand, just how exactly is he going to explain all of what he has done in the past centuries to his mate? Finally, methinks he sensed perhaps underlying feelings between the boys that one was just too proud to admit to, not to mention still feeling betrayed and hurt by the one parent on behalf of the other....while the younger knew of the feelings, but had to subvert them as he grew older. Was that the ultimate reasoning behind the pairing he insisted on?

    Chapter was worth the wait, as always!
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  • From ANON - Demitria Miriam on October 02, 2006
    Oh my god. What did you DO to your new chapter?! (cries at the havoc The Russ has caused)...(remembers that The Russ doesn't like being called "The Russ").... ^_^;;;

    As for my review over the chapter...

    Oo, I want to know WHY Sesshomaru had “once” lost control of his youki so long ago! Tell meeeee!

    And I LOVE that flashback with Izayoi, Inuyasha and Sesshomaru! Especially the obi part.

    I would also like to either see a flash back of this following sentence or a ‘side story’ (you should really consider doing those) or something: The violent kaleidoscopic storms that were the moods of Inutaisho were an experience of their own, if only to be seen.

    That was funny!

    This had me in giggles... cause I just find this fetish of his SO hilarious: My garden! thought Inutaisho.

    BUWHAHA!

    And erm, back to the HTML thing... (can't even put it into words...) No, I'm only teasing... kind of. But erm, if you ever, EVER, need help with it, lemme know, cause I really don't mind ^.^;;;



    -DM
    [hearts]
    The Russ

    ...that will now kill her for calling her that. (runs away)
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  • From ANON - Arashi on October 01, 2006
    Right now you are one of my heros! You have no idea how long iv waited,
    how hard Iv seached for a Sesshoumeru/uke/beta/With-him-Pregnant=Story, and even if thats not your plan;
    you put a clip in that was everything Iv been looking for, for years.
    I doubted you would keep him pregnant, I wouldnt see the real Sesshoumeru going thru that willingly anyways, unless he did it for his mate, but he first has to learn to love his mate, he isn't there yet.
    I have however seached and seached for a story where he gets it,
    and get knocked up..and i seem like its really the sesshoumeru from the original story.

    Magnifacently done!

    And thank you so much, beleive me, Iv debated writing one myself..

    Ha! me type?!

    I can't type to save my life. And if I did do it,
    I would already know what happened so there would be no point in reading it.

    So see, you're my hero!
    Such a taste of what I desire is so very wonderful to me!
    Thank you!!

    Arashi
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  • From ANON - bluesake on September 28, 2006
    I love it. It's awesome please do continue it
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on September 20, 2006
    Nnng! Mmmm! Errrnnnng! Aahhh! How could you!? Mmnngg! Sesshoumaru! That was... *sobs* ...absolutely... *sniff* ... horrid, macabre, evil. *bawls* Poor *hiccup* Inuyasha. Poor, grandpa Inutaisho. That howl that you gave him broke my heart.

    Okay, now that the horror of it all has been released; nicely written. Dad is an idiot, and boy is he in for a surprise. Can't wait for that one. Questions posed, no answer please-just rambling: Why did Sesshoumaru release Ryu? To bring back some semblence of sanity into their lives? To punish father? How will Inuyasha react if and when he finds out what Sesshoumaru did? Will Sesshoumaru remain uke? He should...cold, unrepentant, bastard. How will father defend himself for his actions? OMG! Will Ryu try to kill Inuyasha!?

    I can understand Sesshoumaru's wrath at his father for forcing everything on them. I can only hope that he recovers from the nightmare. Inuyasha was so sweet, being so concerned for Sesshoumaru. Kind of makes me wonder if he isn't already fulfilling the role of seme. And it was such a touching interlude when Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru were sitting together. Awwww, Sesshoumaru promised to keep Inuyasha's secret.

    Gah! So much to process! Lemon, angst, humor, action, anger, suspense! Great job.

    Snow
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  • From ANON - blacktea on September 20, 2006
    This chapter was very much needed, it gets the ball rolling. I like how Sess" released Ryuu because I don't think his father was ever going to around to it! LOL. The writing was awsome as usual, so keep up the good work!
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on September 20, 2006
    Thank you for the hint of the 'potato', etc... SHE appreciates it. :-)

    Oh, speaking of 'speaking like a Pirate', who tha' heck thought of Pirates Day?!?! That threw me for a loop when I heard it on TV.
    **************
    about #8...

    okay the scene between Ryuukotsusei & Inutaisho...was very endearing and I almost felt like I was eaves-dropping [you know that word almost sounds nasty].

    NOW...why do I get the feeling that Sesshomaru opened up a can of worms that stank when it was closed, but now that it has been
    re-opened, it's going to be putrid?
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  • From ANON - DrawFire on September 19, 2006
    Truth be told, I expected Ryuu to come back enraged... But I'm glad to see that it was Sesshomaru who brought him back... The part where Ryuu went to reach for Sesshomaru was gorgeous! I loved it! Probably because I doubt many others would... But yes! I loved this update! Except the beginning, that was near heart wrenching and was painful to read...

    I'll be back!

    - DF
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  • From InuKagnSessy on September 19, 2006
    oh you're so evil, how could you just end it there?? damn that was great, i love it. i hope things work out between the bros, i love seeing them together. more soon, please?
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  • From ANON - Amelia on September 18, 2006
    TOO GOOD TOO GOOD TOO GOOD!!! PPPPPLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE!!! IT'S TOO GOOD!!! damn shesshy... he's such a mean bastard... BUT I STILL LOVERS HIM!!! please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Silence on September 17, 2006
    Beautifully written. This story is wonderful. Poor Inuyasha, Sesshoumaru had the right idea not to hide behind lies even though it would have hurt the little hanyou. But then he chickened out. Inuyasha needs to know before he finds out in a worse way. And now Daddy has a surprise coming. I'm actually looking forward to that 'cause somehow I don't think its gonna turn out quite as badly as Taisho and Sesshy expect. Personally, I always thought the Ryuu/InuT relationship was weird but you breathe a wonderful life into it. I actually look forward to the flashbacks just as much as the story itself.

    Thanx
    ~Silence~
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  • From ANON - jess on September 17, 2006
    please update really really fast cause i NEED to know what happens next
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