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Reviews for Innocence Lost

By : DarkRoseBlood
  • From katiedog on August 03, 2007
    oh my wow I love it......did she kill her self to or just him?
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  • From ANON - School Girl 2206 on November 08, 2006
    Oh! My! It was such a lovely piece to read, especially because I have such a school-girlish nature. And, oh my, oh my, was it a sight to read. And the ending was quite surprising to read. Oh, Lord, it was just all around good. I really enjoyed reading this piece. And, :Sigh: I find myself breathless. Congradulations, you've really managed to capture my attention and keep it. xD

    S.C.'06
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2006
    very well written. a very awesome fic. very dark and foreboding. i'm not much for unhappy-like endings but this was very, very good. keep up the great writing!! this fic was great. please write more great fics like this. and no i don't think you should continue anything w/ this unless she didnt kill him or sumthing. b/c this fic would be great just left as it is b/c i've seen quite the few fuckups w/ ppl that continue and drag on stories.
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  • From ANON - citrusbaby on July 29, 2006
    ...

    what? what what what what??

    wow, i gotta say i wasn't expecting that. if you added more details to the story, i think it would make one hell of a fic. good job.
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  • From Ochiko on July 20, 2006
    Woah. I can honestly say that the ending was not what I was expecting at all. I liked it, in any case. Good job.
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  • From LdyMoon on July 12, 2006
    Wow, I liked it and it was intriguing. It had that eery thrilling feeling to it. I'd like to read more of your work.
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  • From ANON - Hai Ikurei on July 12, 2006
    Wow! What the hell was that?! Is this One-Shot? Really good, but it was a lot more scary o-oUu...Congratulations xD U make me want to kill Inu too lol...But I'm still scared, and in the moon xD didn't understand it too much but besides that I have to say again Congratulations really good...and...*couldn't find another word* again good fic XD!!!. Bye!
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  • From ANON - Artemis on July 12, 2006
    Holy shit, that was brilliant. You wrote it wonderfully.
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  • From ANON - Hentai Jane on July 10, 2006
    Wow.......that was cool. I loved the way you described her eyes and the ending...damn what an ending. Nice job.
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  • From ANON - evi on July 10, 2006
    I love this story this I is on of favorite stories I especially enjoy the part at the end when kags shoots Inu haha he so got what was coming to him

    evi
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  • From on July 10, 2006
    This could actually work as a "real" short story if you changed the names of the characters.
    Lovely angsty story although in the end it has very little to do with Inuyasha. It's set in alternative universe and the characters are occ so the only resemblance to the actual show is the appearance of the characters. Nevertheless you did marvellous job. You are very talented author and you'd be better off writing your own things. Create something original because you have so much potential as a real writer.
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  • From ANON - Lovelylilme on July 10, 2006
    Unbeileveable

    Outstanding

    Excellent

    Do i need to say more.

    Ur goin places. And If u keep this up you'll be there b4 u know it.

    No one ever saw it coming. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sankontesou on July 10, 2006
    that was good..the ending was freaky...
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  • From ANON - pat on July 10, 2006
    wow she killed him? u dont see that very often but i liked it and thats what kinda scares me
    nice job
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  • From Superbitch on July 10, 2006
    Oh my... how evil! I like it!
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