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Reviews for The Journey to a New Life: An Inuyasha Story

By : GothDemon069
  • From ANON - Shellnet on January 31, 2017

    Is lem supoe to be lemon becas it is citrus free and what would make kagome go to her for advice songo and all of them are OOC they didnt try to protect the girl songo would have steped in and held her wepon up defending the girl kagome would not have taken no for a  answer and she would not be asking about her problems when the girl is being abused i was abused by my brother as a kid and i avoid him i live with my husband and he will never hert me exept he is a little firm on his grip when he is rubing and  massaging me but then i tell him and he fixes it are you a violant mail abuser is that why you get off on this where the girl geting beet is a lemon you make no sence  


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  • From ANON - eccentrica on September 23, 2006
    i liked this story in the beginning but you've made things go way too fast..and your second chapter is no more then a paragraph! O_O i am quite confused actually...
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  • From ANON - claire on September 09, 2006
    Are you gunna continue this story? I reaaally hope u are, cause you've left it kinda in a cliffy... pleaasssee update!
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  • From ANON - Joerg Janshen-Jaeger on August 28, 2006
    Hmmm...

    The 2.nd part seems a little bit "short" with only 13(!) Lines, could it be that there was something lost ?

    Mfg. McHunter
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  • From DarkMuse on July 28, 2006
    Not bad. I hope that you'll update soon. Please let me know when you do. K?
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  • From ANON - A Lost Child From Heaven on July 21, 2006
    i like ur story it's really good a little violent already but good
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  • From ANON - eccentrica on July 18, 2006
    nice beginning! i really enjoyed how it played out it, its makes me want to find out what happens next!
    so keep up the good work!~ ^_^
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  • From ANON - chefyoukai on July 11, 2006
    very good cannot wait until the next chapters
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