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Reviews for Unexpected Endeavors

By : Scottishfae
  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2006
    that chapter was so very funny! i loved how you resolved the pinky holding issue.

    so very entertaining! happy update reward: chocolately goodness!

    ::chocolate coma::
    12 oz silken tofu
    12 oz melted chocolate chips
    whipped to a fluffy froth
    refrigerate till cold ~ yummy!

    thank
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  • From ANON - Faerie Demoness on December 07, 2006
    Amazing as always...looking for a little action though. Hope its soon. I can't wait for the next chappie!

    ~Much Love~

    Faerie Demoness

    Sorry, late at night, would write more, but I've gotta get to bed!
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  • From ANON - madmiko on December 07, 2006
    I jumped over here from MM to get the full chappie --LOVE IT!! Worth the wait, though i can't wait for the next one!! (Hope you get all A's on your finals, and a new chapter out soon after that!);) My only plea -- please don't pair off Sango and Inu! That pairing gives me the willies. love the way Miroku and Haru were getting along. Great moments with Sess and Kag! The pinky-holding -- how sweet!! Just about laughed my ass off when Sess tried to get Haru to seduce Koga! Not his type, huh? Wonder who Haru was referring to when he said some might fit the bill --Miroku? Sango? Kagome? Love the way Haru and Kag get along! Her comparing Sess to Miroku -- priceless!! Is Aiko going to cause trouble? Really love Haru advising Inu and Koga to stop fighting and to pay some attention to Kagome. Can't wait to see some raomantic efforts on their parts. And Sess thinks Haru may be becoming interested in Kagome, huh? Love it! Just love it! With her, what's not to love? This is a great story and I can't wait for more of it. You made my day today!
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  • From ANON - angie...who? on December 06, 2006
    Another..great chapt. its getting really interesting (if that is possible)... idk something about the chara. and what is going on so far has intrigued(sp?) me. .. yup.. update soon!
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  • From ANON - rowdygirl on December 06, 2006
    i think it's a really good story; i am really enjoying it. can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - angel on December 06, 2006
    wow that was great .. i love it .. i hope that lady does not do something stupid.. please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 06, 2006
    great so far i love the story. update soon!
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  • From Demonlordlover on December 06, 2006
    Great story. I love the character Haru and his...unbiased view on sexuality. Not to mention the development of the plot. It's a great read. I completely understand about the updating. No worries on that count as this fic is worth waiting for.
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  • From ANON - rowdygirl on November 27, 2006
    OMG!!! i LOVE this story! may i say i think you are a brilliant storyteller? i have been laughing so hard and then i'm in tears...jeezlouise you spin a good yarn. and i can't even yammer about grammatical errors, you've caught most of 'em [sorry, i'm a bit OCD about grammar, i slap the spit out myself when i make a mistake]. i'm still wandering through this website, in awe of the many good storytellers who have posted here, so i just found your most excellent tale. if i could, on a scale of 1 to 10 with 10 being the highest, i would definitely rate it a 20. i love the way you're developing the characters; you are making them very real people, using that term in it's broadest sense. and your plot is well-planned and certainly full of twists and wry humor. i am enjoying this immensely. well, do whatcha gotta do, get your degree, get that wild job, live your crazy life; but always, always, always keep writing; someone with your gift should use it and share it. Thank you very much. Oh, and please post more updates soooon...i have the patience of a 3-year-old in a toy store.
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  • From ANON - sessme on November 27, 2006
    i love this story! the progression of a relationship btwn kag and sess seems more believeable than most. i think the pacing is right. kikyo pissed me off but it doesn't take much for her to do that. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE WITH A QUICKNESS! you've got me dying over here for more of this story...
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  • From ANON - Shiva on November 06, 2006
    I luv this chapter it so cute, yet sad. Keade is dead :(
    And why did you let Kagome get slapped like that? And you makin Sesshomaru into a player, player. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Faerie Demoness on October 29, 2006
    Hmmm...as far as the arm and suggestions. Let me think... 1. Maybe during a battle with Naraku, he unwittingly gives back Sesshoumaru his arm... 2. His mother knew how to get it back this whole time but felt he needed to learn a lesson... 3. There's always Kagome and her growing powers as a miko (they are right?)... 4. Haru or Inuyasha learn of a way or a spell to help him, but only to their advantage, and maybe thinking it would gain favor from Kagome... 5. After a gruesome battle, near death, Kagome finds the strength to weild his sword and wipe away the goblins, in the process giving his arm back...oooh, maybe weilding his sword would help her powers... That's all I can think of for now. All of them sound pretty good to me, use them at your pleasure. Hope I helped some. My story on the other hand is in trouble. Its been at least a month and a half, and I now only have one sentence on page five. Ugh! Hope everything goes well with the next chapter and hope all is well with school. Until next time!

    ~Much Love~
    Faerie Demoness
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  • From ANON - Metis on October 29, 2006
    Yay! Cookies and Points! Chocolate Chip I hope :) .... Hmm, I wonder if maybe, kinda, just accidently someones claws/weapons could 'slip' and no more Kikyou? (dreamy look). Accidents do happen. ;)
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  • From ANON - Mel on October 27, 2006
    Great chapter! Thank you so much for updating. Have I told you this is one of my favorite fics? Well it is, so keep up the good work.

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  • From ANON - Demitria Miriam on October 27, 2006
    LMAO!!! Oh man. I was NOT expecting that HUGE tangle of love web to be introduced (Kouga, Inuyasha, Sesshomaru, (sort of) Haru and Kagome)... now all we need is Akitoki from the feudal times and Hojo-kun from present day!! Bwuahahaha!! Oh hell, AND Naraku (though probably not romantically)... XXD

    I want to rip Kikyou a new one. This only enforces my hatred for her (though I suppose she has her reasons). I still think she's a bitch regardless.

    I'm glad I found this fic again. I've read two Sess/Kag fics in the entirty of my fanfiction reading career(the House of the Moon fic, which was okay... I couldn't be bothered to finish it though and yours). That's a huge thing, keep in mind; my reading just your fic alone for this pairing, as I've said before, I think.

    There are some grammatical mistakes and spelling errors but for the most part it's really good! I love how the brothers are getting along (as 'along' as they can in such a situation) and I'm glad that there IS another brother (a half-brother no less). I think that's awesome! Yay!

    Keep up the great work!


    -DM
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