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Reviews for Unexpected Endeavors

By : Scottishfae
  • From ANON - kinkyneko33 on October 07, 2006
    i love this story! i'm so glad you updated. it's got such a great plot!! please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - angel on October 07, 2006
    ~lol~ wow you learn something new all the time with them ... hmmm all with short hair... please please please more ... and good luck on your paper.. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - White_Youkai on October 07, 2006
    I love this story. Poor men... All with short hair. It's good that they heal fast. Can't wait till the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - kawaii-miko on October 07, 2006
    haha im likin haru hes fun to read about
    its soundin like kag wants to have sesses
    son its real good so far
    UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - raven (bittenbyyoaibug) on October 06, 2006
    Now as an authoress myself I have to agree with you. if one can not make an intellegent arguement without being an ass then they probably should keep it to themselves. How things are portrayed in a fanfic is totally the author/authoress' perogiative. Now as a woman I have to say that yoai is simply delicious and in a word HOTT!!!! I am enjoying your story and like how you have this worked out plz let me know when u update, I mena i have u saved to my favorites list on my comp and check for updates pretty much daily but still it would be cool if u'd just drop me a message even if it's just to say "i've updated" that would totally rock. Thx.
    Raven
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  • From ANON - deathwish on October 06, 2006
    i am not a particular fan of yaoi but as long as there is no make-out or sex between men i am fine.
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  • From ANON - kookookitty on October 06, 2006
    the story is very unique and interesting. the characters are acting within their personalities given the circumstances and situations you have placed them in, i do note some ooc-ness but the the general dominant personality traits are evident.

    legal claims and loopholes aside, i noticed in one of your replies the possibility of sas/kag having a daughter... their agreement as stated was that she would bear a son, if the outcome of the pregnancy was a girl, there would be subsequent attempts to impregnate her until the desired result would be achieved. this would be encompassed by the stated agreement. she would bear a son implying the agreement would be in effect until she bore the agreed upon son.

    quite an indteresting dilemma, and an intelligent, captivating and wonderful story, you are an amazing writer!

    thank you,
    ginny

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  • From ANON - Kai on October 06, 2006
    Wow. This is a crazy story if I do say so myself. I like that you added in Haru. It's good to have some comic relief between all that Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha tension. It kind of sucks that the whole deal became void thanks to Koga. He ruins everything. T_T And with the yaoi relationship...I think it just counts on who Haru ends up with. Hopefully not Inuyasha. Just seems to strange. Sorry. ^^'' I can't wait to read more! Good luck with all these midterms.
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  • From ANON - Galadrihm_Star on October 06, 2006
    Oh! And as an openly Bi woman, I would find it both constructive and non-offensive for you to add a same-sex story to this. Depending on how it is approached, it could really be a bonus to the story. Your side-character depth is wonderful and I love learning about these characters of yours. Keep up the wonderful work!!
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  • From ANON - Galadrihm_Star on October 06, 2006
    Brilliant character developement and plot depth!!! I love this story!!!
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  • From ANON - Shae on October 05, 2006
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

    Please don't put guy on guy action in this!
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  • From ANON - Biteswhenprovoked on October 05, 2006
    im fine with you putting yaoi in your story. i've read them before. i have an idea if some people dont want you to put a yaoi scean but you decide to then you can put a warning before and after it.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on October 05, 2006
    If you want to get your review board back onto the screen without the need to scroll, copy and paste review number id # 3000028784 into a Word document and break up the long strings of characters. Then take the review off of your board. Repost it informing the reviewer of what you have done. Make sure to copy the pen name, date and review number Your board should be back to normal.

    Snow
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on October 05, 2006
    Since I have been a very bad reader by not reviewing, I will answer your question and review. Yes, I love yaoi. If the majority of your readers do not respond, I would say that it is silent consent. Anyone who doesn't want it will probably be screaming and yelling.

    I find your fic interesting in that it puts a modern girl in quite a primitive situation. However, I am happy with the fact that it appears that Sesshoumaru is not guilty of treachery, but of a misunderstanding that, of course, he will in all probability never see. Also, you seem to be warming Kagome up to the idea because she seemed a bit sad when Kouga showed up and actually ended the deal. I hope that the situation can be resolved without someone getting hurt. Sesshoumaru does appear to be well versed in diplomacy and proper protocol.

    I love Jakken. A character does not have to follow canon in order to make me happy. It is nice that you have him protecting Kagome and beginning to warm up to her. That is a real compliment.

    I know that Inuyasha is simply trying to protect Kagome. Yeah, he's a jerk and sometimes it seems as though he is behaving atrociously when he really is trying to do well.

    I did not truly believe that you would make this non-con, regardless of my earlier fangirly ravings. And, I truly did have fantasies of Haru engaging in some steamy situations with certain other male (s). So, don't mind me.

    Great fic, keep up the good writing.

    Snow
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  • From ANON - Diane on October 05, 2006
    I'm a fan of yaoi so it would be perfectly fine with me to include a same sex side romance, as long as it doesn't take over. ~_-
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