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Reviews for Unexpected Endeavors

By : Scottishfae
  • From ANON - Mel on September 21, 2006
    What a great chapter! I think the direction that the story is going is great, you keep doing the unexpected. I can't wait to see what happens next. This is one of my favorite stories.
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  • From ANON - sky_040 on September 21, 2006
    u are sooooooo mean it should have been longer. more more soon soon. PLEASE
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  • From ANON - Krys_otaku2007 on September 21, 2006
    This is a great story! I can't wait for what happens next and I want to what Haru is going to do or about what Sesshomaru is going to do about the deal.
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  • From ANON - DeathWish on September 21, 2006
    I hope all your classes work out well. I am goin gthrough the same thing. But if it is not to much to ask.......... could you please update soon?! I would really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, appreciate it!
    Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Pastel on September 21, 2006
    Nice chapter. I wonder what Sesshoumaru is going to do when he finds out all of his plans are void. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - akume on September 21, 2006
    Poor Kagome. Her life keeps getting more complicated as time goes by. Anyway, thanks for the update, until next time. Ja.
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  • From ANON - sodapop0006 on September 21, 2006
    Wow, that's quite a deal-breaker there. But I certainly hope that the deal can be redone. I liked the chaos it was causing. ;) Very well-written work and a real pleasure to read. I look forward to the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Flightoffancy on September 21, 2006
    I just found this beautifully crafted story and I loved every minute of it. It is creative and flowing. It is also very funny. I really like how you have fleshed out every character without sideline babble. You are direct, informative and entertaining. I like how you have treated Inuyasha and Jaken, in partcular. Inuyasha cares for Kagome like a part of the pack, which she is, and he respects her. Jaken has always been true to his master and Sesshomaru shows this by placing all his trust in him.

    Another Brother? YUM. One more delicious tidbit for us to drool over. I hate it when I run into these really good stories so far into the chapter. I like to be there at the beginning to watch it unfold and to cheer you on but I found you now and I am not letting you go.

    Now that we have found the loop-hole in the deal what-ever are we going to do now. I think everybody better keep all their eyes on Haru at all times. He can probably teach Miroku a few things.

    If it is not too much trouble I would like to be on your mailing list. pegasus4bellsouth.net

    Til next time, Deb (Flightoffancy)
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  • From ANON - Kryssala on September 21, 2006
    *snicker snicker* Sounds like this could get really sticky for poor Kagome. Haru is a riot! Good luck with school, I know how hard it can be to juggle everything.
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  • From ANON - angel on September 21, 2006
    man sess will not be happy when he finds out about this .... how will sess get kagome to have is kid now .......... please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - JadedInu on September 21, 2006
    Okay, one stop beating yourself up. Your doing a great job! I can't wait for the next chappie.
    Two take your time. Edit if necessary and set realistics goal for how much you can write a day and not interfere with class. Good luck with everything!

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  • From ANON - Sacred_Sagittarius on September 21, 2006
    yah! Turmoil and testosterone! I love it, especially Haru so don't let anyone knock it. I'm really interested in seeing where your taking this now with the latest info about Sessh's claim being countered by Koga's prior one, or visa vera? Anywho..update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Katie on September 21, 2006
    LOL! I LOVE THIS ALREADY!
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  • From ANON - lala_land on September 21, 2006
    nice but make it better where sesshomaru and kasgome have sex
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  • From ANON - Faerie Demoness on September 21, 2006
    That was great! This is just such an amazing story. I love it. And no, I don't think your writing style is warbling or anything. Seems pretty stable to me. As far as school goes, I'll tell you like I tell my husband, I believe you can do it. Concentrate, but not too much, have fun. I know you can do it. I can't wait to see your next chapter.

    ~Much Love~

    Faerie Demoness
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