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Reviews for Unexpected Endeavors

By : Scottishfae
  • From ANON - blueinferno on August 23, 2006
    XD Awesome thanks again
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  • From ANON - Kryssala on August 23, 2006
    I agree with you on the character bashing. Most of the time it's not even done well and comes across as just that, bashing. It serves no other purpose in the fic.
    I'm waiting to see how Sesshomaru reacts when he's confronted with the 'you tricked us' I guess his reaction would depend on who said it and how. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Shard on August 23, 2006
    Anouther great chapter, I think you did a great job on Jaken he's a better character than he gets the rap for in many fics. Also thank you for the no character bashing hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - Rinseternalsoul on August 22, 2006
    Impressive writing and character representation. Especially Inuyasha. I also like the fact that there's no character bashing. Poor ol Jaken catches hell in most fics. lol! I'm really curious as to what Sesshomaru has going on in his head. You've built a nice little mystery here, and I look forward to its unraveling.
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  • From ANON - adsv on August 22, 2006
    I enjoy your portrayal of Jakken. He is nothing if not loyal, maybe a bit snivvelling too, but definately loyal. He overlooks Sessh's bad habits and character flaws. Too bad he can't find some way out of this.
    I also enjoy how Inu is being more protective and caring and admitting she is part of his pack and he has a right to complain since Sessh tricked her.
    On a legal note, (yes, I'm a lawyer) when someone makes an offer to contract, the receiver can refuse the offer, accept the offer, or come back with a counter-offer. But there must be a present intent to contract the service. It would seem that Kagome did not have the intent, though her suggestions could be construed as a counter-offer, except for the part where she told him her suggestions were to help him approach some other female.
    Personally, I would love to see her get out of the contract, and him follow her around like a whipped puppy begging her to reconsider. Imagine, thinking he could just arbitrarily decide she should bear him an heir, then get rid of her when it's old enough. Men!
    Keep up the good work. I enjoy your writing style.
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  • From ANON - bluemoon_175 on August 22, 2006
    I must say this is a really good story, your story has me bouncing off the walls to read more I hope you UDATE as SOON as you can.
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  • From ANON - Lost Child on August 22, 2006
    k, now you got me curious. I wonder what Sesshoumaru wrote in the scroll...guess I gotta wait and see, but I really don't wanna, so I hope you update again soon.
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  • From ANON - genseng on August 22, 2006
    you know Kagome's mother is right he did trick her and now I lose my respect for the Sesshoumaru that I once liked!! And he is so ashamed of her he is putting her where no one will be with her very much, he's a sick prick!
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  • From ANON - Faerie Demoness on August 22, 2006
    Awesome as always. I actually like what you have done to Jaken, I have yet to really intergrate him into my story since I really didn't know how to portray him. You have done a very good job. I like it. Continue on great writer! I can't wait for the next chapter.

    ~Much Love~

    Faerie Demoness
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  • From ANON - angel on August 22, 2006
    wow she learned a lot about him and inuyasha.... please please more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Dawna Sama on August 22, 2006
    I am truly honnored for another dedication to your story. again, another very good chapter! actually, I kinda have a fetish for sessh/Kag pairing, if you wouldn't mind doing a one shot for me please? My birthday was yesterday and i couldn't go out. Im 21 now* grins* But anyways! if you didn't mind, I'll also give you my e-mail adress as well if you wanna talk about it. plus I dont know if you like semi rape and/or BDSM. but something on the lines of that please. again, good luck with school and I'll be seeing you around

    Dawna Sama
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  • From ANON - wynter89 on August 22, 2006
    Yay!!! You updated! I am glad that Jaken didnt get beaten in this fic. Usually he gets the sich knocked out of him, but it great to have a change.... though it is still nice to see jaken repremaned when he picks on Rin.

    good luck
    i hope you update soon.

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  • From ANON - Cochrann on August 22, 2006
    Good chapter! But I was really bumbed out that you didn't include what Sesshoumaru had to say in the letter.
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  • From tinytot on August 22, 2006
    I like where you're taking the whole Jaken situation. It puts a new spin on things. Another great chapter! Job well done :)
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  • From ANON - ChaoticReverie on August 21, 2006
    Your writing technique is amazing; very descriptive. I sincerely hope to hear from you again very soon, and anxiously await the next chapter. I adore your style, and use of diction. Kudos to you for your exquisite dipiction of Sesshomaru, I can honestly say that this story is one of the very few where his character is believable. Anyways, update ASAP.
    Your loyal reader and reviewer,
    ChaoticReverie
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