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From ANON - ChaosHat on January 18, 2009
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From Yurei on September 20, 2008
Hey, thanks for the update! Don't worry about it, and don't rush- these things take time, and have to come naturally. I'm sure it'll be well worth the wait. ^_^
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From WiccanMethuselah on September 19, 2008
Don't worry about the any catcalls or boos from your readers... I'll bet your devoted fans will just be happy that you are still writing at all, especially with all that is going on in Real Life. Come back to us when you can, ok? :D ~~Wiccan~~
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From snowbird on September 06, 2008
Please, when are you going to update? It's been almost 2 months. I hope you did not let the words of some of your reviewers dishearten you away from this story. Please let us know that you intend to continue it.
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From SnowWolf on August 22, 2008
It took me awhile, but I like it and hope you update soon. Ja ne!
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From lex1621 on August 10, 2008
Please update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next!!! I absolutely adored the last chapter, I found the pregnancy parts very funny, especially how long she'll be pregnant for.
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From ANON - uniqueness on July 21, 2008
ok, i absolutely love your story, and i love it so far, but i must say that if there isn't some serious yelling and bitch slapping in the next chapter due to that comment sesshoumaru made, then I'll cry, because it wouldn't be kagome at all, and i know that the baby and such things may be affecting her to act differently in this story, for i have read many that do that, but she would still tear him a part at least a bit because of that comment and how she would interpret it as "i just said it because I'm horny and want to fuck you" ...not that i think you wouldn't do that, I'm just saying because i think it would be a cute funny little part of the story. love ya! and sorry i write such long winded reviews, please don't hate me!!! ^_^
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From jennabean on July 19, 2008
Awesome as always :) Gods, Sesshoumaru is such a typical man, saying anything he thinks will get him laid >_< Great chapter, this story is indeed very entertaining! Keep up the fantastic work!
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From snowbird on July 19, 2008
I have been following this story from way back on your site, from there to ASS (where I did all my reviews) and now to AFF. I read a story for how the characters and the plot are woven together. I like a lemon only if it fits the scene. I'm no prude but I don't read smut for smuts sake. If a scene calls for it, then it's romantic. I have to admit that with all the sexual tension and insinuations that led up to the "big moment", I was surprised that no more detail was given. But I did not review because I felt that you were struggling to stay with the story and that your heart was not completely in that chapter. I felt that I could not give an honest review. I still like the story and will continue to be a fan of it and you.

I have to agree with a lot of what Lunar84 said in her review. Especially about Inuyasha. I get tired of so many writers using him as a scapegoat to make Kagome turn to Sesshoumaru. Sure, I've read a lot of good stories that began with that plot, but it does get old after awhile. You've made him her friend which is a lot more beautiful and heartwarming. You've also added a twist that no other writer has done by making Rin jealous of her and dislike her. I get tired of Rin and always with the flower thing. The script on her rarely changes and yours is refreshing.

I close with this request. Please don't be upset at the fans that voiced their disappointment. It's only because they are so deep into the story and the characters. They feel free to voice their opinion in their reviews to you. Otherwise, they would not care one way or the other. Also, please do not put in a lemon simply because you are pressured into it. Besides, if you had wanted to do a lemon, the time to do it has already passed. If I read one that you added now, I would only be thinking that it was done under pressure and some of the enjoyment would be tainted.

This Snowbird is your devoted fan.
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From L0VER on July 18, 2008
AHAHAH, the last part was...unexpected, lol. i can already imagine the sweatdrop coming from kagome. update sooon!!!!
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From ANON - Bratney on June 12, 2008
When are you going to update? I would really like another chapter sometime soon.
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From nightshade41230 on May 24, 2008
I can't wait until this story is done please finish
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From Lunar84 on March 26, 2008
I am really enjoying this fic. Along with many other readers as well. First I want to say gratz for your awards, noms and the great accomplishment of recieving 300+ reviews on this site.

As far as the basic plot is concerned. The "Sess needs an heir and chooses Kagome" deal I have read before. WAIT WAIT WAIT!! Before anyone gets upset let me finish. Though it has been done before I would like to point out what you have done differently to make this story unique in it's own way.

First of all, though this is a Sess/Kag story I LOVE the fact that you did not make Inuyasha some big dick face that treats Kagome like crap and always runs off with Kikyo. This seems to be the norm characterization for him in this sort of coupling. It's really nice that you made him a caring friend who genuinely looks out for her. Though you have made him like this you have also kept true to his character by keeping him with his natural flaws that we love about him. For example, his jealousy and the habit of saying the wrong thing at the wrong time. Inuyasha can be a jerk, but he still cares deeply for her in this fic and I really like how you wrote him.

Also, I'd like to bring up the subject of Jaken. To me this character has so much potential. It seems that in every fic I read he is always never given enough credit and is also written the same. Everytime. Until this story. You have given him a likable side, but yet as the same with Inuyasha kept him in character. I personally, really liked the background you have given him. It gives him more depth to his character.

Haru. It's nice to see that Sess has another "half-brother". He is an OC, but I really like him. You have made him into a wonderful character that has a nice humorous side along with a hint of evil which is coming out now. He really is someone I enjoy reading about. I would like to see some fanart focusing on him as well.

Last but not least, you have Sesshoumaru. You have written him brilliantly. I really mean that. You have also given him a clever background that wasn't rushed through, but instead given two lengthy chapters to inform us readers as why he is the way he is today. I love the moments when he does show Kagome that deep inside he is still that person- err demon he was long ago. Honestly, if you hadn't incorporated the chapters of background info, I would have said he was OOC. But, the scenerio you have come up with is very believable.

One more thing I would like to touch on is the lemon controversy steaming from the reviews. Here is my opinion, only that of course. I am a huge fan of smutty smut smut. However, I don't read stories to read a lemon scene. I read stories, because I love to read and the fic is well written and is an overall great story. If I'm going to be honest I will say Yes I was a bit disappionted that a lemon scene was not incorporated in the fic. I did feel there was a build up of one, simply because as another reviewer said, since it is AFF it is somewhat the norm to have on in every fic. But, that does not mean I think it should be dwelled on nor am I going to stop reading the fic now. It is your fic and it is your decision what to put in it. Smut or not, this story is amazing. And the reason for that is you are a great writer.

I'm sorry this story is getting harder to write for you. You have many fans and I'm sure that no matter how long it takes to get rid of the writers block we will all still be here to anxiously read your fic.

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From ANON - Chrisi on March 23, 2008
Some writers find it easier to concentrate on only one story at one time. Maybe you have let too much time pass between the chapters and that�s why you are losing the inspiration for this story.

I really hope that you won�t discontinue this fic some day, especially not because of some reviewers, but it has already won some awards, so you know that people HAVE to love your story. Some people are always dissatisfied, so don�t let it get to you.
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From ANON - Anon on March 23, 2008
Would anybody that can�t even stand nakedness in a fic even visit THIS site?!? So, "well no", the rating Adult+ is NOT needed for this story. There is no explicit violence and there are NO lemons at all. The fic is fine as it is, but it WOULD fit better into the Adult rating. Read the rating guides.
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