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Reviews for Unexpected Endeavors

By : Scottishfae
  • From ANON - Anon on March 23, 2008
    @jestergirl: If somebody is upset over nakedness, they shouldnīt even read stories with the PG13- rating.
    If so. gets an erection it also fits into the Adult- rating without the +, as long as nobody touches it.
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  • From RinxAkarui on March 22, 2008
    I love this story! Keep up the good work! I can't wait for what will happen in the next chapter! ^^

    By the way, who are the two beings that are plotting against the gang, besides Haru?? XD
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  • From jestergirl06 on March 22, 2008
    And a remark to what lily say about that it should only be ADULT without the +. Well no scottishfae did it right, because some people would probably perfer not to read the part were he is naked in the water with her, or his growing arousal. Or the fact that she is naked in with him. The fact it even hints to a lemon when she takes off her shirt and they begin their lovemaking, that might upset someone so by putting the + we are being warned that there could be sexual innuendos or naked scenes.
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  • From jestergirl06 on March 22, 2008
    O.o You go girl!! Yes I like lemons, I mean what girl does not when it invovles Sesshoumaru, but you are completely right, some stories are just ruined so that a lemon could be thrown in. Personally it has to be a well written lemon that is a big part of the plot. In your story it may have been leading up to the lemon, as a change in life for Kagome, but the main point is the struggles she goes through, and the love she finds. I am more interested in what Rin is going to do, and if Sesshoumaru will fall for her. Good job on the story, I can not wait for your next update.
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  • From ANON - Mikonally on March 22, 2008
    I can not believe someone could find any complaint on Unexpected Endeavors.
    I only started reading it not long ago but I have been hooked since then.
    And you are correct in Adult Fanfiction meaning mature content not just sexual content. (I believe the disclaimer when you first enter the site and verify you are at least 18 says mature content as well)
    It is idiots who complain about such ridiculous things that ruin everything else and if they are wanting to read just smut then they can go elsewhere to read it, no?
    In the mean time, I sincerally hope you do not let thier criticism and whining bother you as I believe (as do several friends of mine who are also reading UE) that you are doing a great job.

    Have a Fantastic Day!
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  • From ANON - Lily on March 22, 2008
    I donīt think that the story would be better WITH porn. That wasnīt what I wrote. I just think that the rating is too high. On AFF.net there are 3 ratings: "Adult" (suggested sexual situations and violence, swearing...), "Adult+" (gore, EXPLICIT sexual situations, etc.) and "Adult++" (no limits at all. darkest plotlines, kinks, torture to death). Scottishfae rated this beautiful story "Adult+", but this rating is too high! This story belongs to the simple "Adult" rating. If it was rated that way nobody would expect explicit lemons here.
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  • From sabashi on March 21, 2008
    Thats right stick up for ur Beliefs, in my opinion ur story is great without the porn in it. keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - ShellBabe on March 21, 2008
    Just because a fiction has been posted on this site, doesn't mean it needs a lemon. Adult material means many things, including the use of swear words, sexual scenes, or at least the implication of sexual interaction. The story is fine the way it is. Please continue and do not worry what others may say about your story. Being a veteran in the InuYasha community for over 5 years I conclude this story has more deph than most stories that include tons of lemons. I applaude your writing and keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Lily on March 21, 2008
    This is no flame, so donīt get me wrong. I love your story, otherwise I would have stopped reading it at the latest by chapter two, but I did read the whole story. It is beautifully written, soulful as well as humorous. I didnīt detect many misspellings either, if any at all. A sex scene doesnīt make a story better in any way, it isnīt needed at all for a good plot, but on Adultfanfiction.net the readers expect to see at least one lemon in a story that long, I think.
    Maybe it wouldnīt even have stood out that there is no lemon in this story if you hadnīt somehow suggested it in chapter 19, but you did, and even if you suggested it, it wasnīt even "suggestive" enaugh to fit to a simple "Adult" rating.
    You posted this story under the "Adult+" rating and it doesnīt fit there, so you leave me (and some other readers too, as I can see) a bit disappointed. If I read a story at Adultfanfiction.net (under the rating of "Adult+) I read it because there are lemons, as they are illegal and therefore censured in the other fanfiction- archives.
    If you arenīt good at lemons, at least change the rating to "Adult" (even if the PG13 rating fits better to your story) or leave any sexual situations out, but please donīt cut the lemon when itīs finally getting really hot like you did and leave your readers high and dry.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2008
    As Kagome was poisoned she received her first kiss from Sesshoumaru. Yet now she behaves as if the kiss in this chapter was her first kiss, as if she didnīt know the feeling of another tongue in her mouth.

    And this is Adultfanfiction.net. Why do you put this story here if there are no adult themes like lemons or violence? You cut the lemon as if your story was rated T, so thereīs no need to post it here.
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  • From ANON - puneeti on March 21, 2008
    cant u give a good lemon because ur story is good but there is no lemon it is quite dull so plz repost the chapter no19 and give some lemon or in future chapters give lots of lemon because it make ur story very good and very enchainting
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  • From ANON - aideen on March 21, 2008
    i love it!!! please up-date again as soon as possible!!! i have to know what happens next!!!
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  • From ANON - Shannon on December 08, 2007
    I love your story. I am anxious to read the rest of it. Please post another chapter soon!!!
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  • From ANON - puppydog on November 13, 2007
    Please continue the story! It`s getting good! (chanting:lemon,lemon,lemon)
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  • From ANON - sesslover on October 29, 2007
    This is a great story. I really want to here more about Kin and Jiro. I want to see Inuyasha end up with someone other than Kikyo and be happy. I want to see Huro happy and content in life. I want to see everyone happy. Sorry I sound so demanding, but I really am invested in this story. You're a really good writer and deserved all those rewards. Keep it up.
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