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By : Scottishfae
  • From ANON - Adeen on October 28, 2007
    I love it!!! I love this story and so can not wait for the next chapter!!!! Ahh, I have to know what happens next!!! I love this story!!!
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  • From Jediashes1021 on October 28, 2007
    Oh what a great fanfic! It's getting hard to find a well written fic with an interesting premise but your's is wonderful. I love the idea behind it and your characterization is great. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Diane on October 28, 2007
    I really like this & am looking forward to more. There is are a couple of goofs though, you're not using the word donning & in 1 case donned correctly, it means the act of putting something on more than wearing it or it had been put on, the 1st time you used donning in chapter 18, "Her eyes were worried, completely unaware of the danger present. She walked over to the Taiyoukai, still donning the borrowed haori, and put a hand on his forearm." wearing or clad in would be more appropriate & there's also donned in this spot, 2nd sentence from the end; "The Taiyoukai looked over her approvingly. Over the white kosode Kagome wore a teal uchikake with pink sakura petals embroidered at the hems of the sleeves and bottom. It was left open without any obi so that the white was visible and lay in high contrast to the beauty of the outer robe. Her hair had the forelocks taken back and tied in an elaborate knot at the back of her head. Her dark locks had been straightened out with a cast-iron plate and hung down to her mid back. Her features were left without the white paint that often donned women’s faces. Simple colour added to cheeks and lips accentuated her more delicate features." adorned would probably be a better word choice. Hope this helps.
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  • From LibraCourt on October 27, 2007
    awesome, so glad to see you've updated. I've been following this story for awhile now. can't wait for the next update...make it soon! lol
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  • From szaugg on October 27, 2007
    Enjoyed it, as usual. I liked the small points about Kagome's unfamiliarity with the clothing and her awkwardness, and her little michiko hissy. It was a little childish, but she IS young and a little childish in a lot of ways, so I enjoyed that quite a bit. And I like Shun and Michiko as well, actually. I hope we see more of them. Oh, I'd love to look you up on NaNoWriMo, but they've disabled the author search, I understand. If you care to, I'm at http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/202915 Otherwise, I'll look you up when it comes back up! :-)
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  • From akume on October 27, 2007
    Yeah baby! Loved the update. I've so been looking forward to it since like forever. Well, thanks again and until next we meet.
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  • From Iyasu on October 23, 2007
    Aww... that was so sweet at the end! *happy sigh* Too bad Haru had to show up and try to take away Kagome like that. I can't wait to see how his plan with Naraku works. I also hope that Inuyasha will be happy, maybe he can convince Kikyo. Anyway, lovely writing, lovely chapter, lovely story. I'm going to miss this when you finish it, I just know it.
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  • From Loki176 on September 18, 2007
    I love your story so far, it shows how well of a story writer you are, its like reading a real novel from how good it is, i cant wait for next chapters looking forward to it. I feel very privliged to read your work.
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  • From ANON - sari on September 15, 2007
    this is great, a bit confusing but awesome!!!!!!!
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  • From gwoman on September 09, 2007
    beautiful, as always. and sesshomaru is so clever! i would never have thought of that. i look forward to seeing how kagome (hopefully) puts sess and haru's mom in her place...or rather usurps it. you said you'd update every thursday, so i'm expecting a wonderful, new chapter by the 13th.

    oh, and if you have any other stories you'd like a beta for, i'd be more than happy to help out! i've worked as a beta before, though i prefer to do het pairings. you can contact me at ctripp@clunet.edu

    good luck with grad school, btw! i'm trying to get in, myself.
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  • From ANON - sesshysdarkkitten on September 09, 2007
    Excellent chapter. I enjoyed it completely. Cannot wait till the next update. See ya then & keep up the good work. :-)
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  • From ANON - Katy on September 07, 2007
    Wonderful, I love it keep up the good work

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  • From ANON - amy on September 07, 2007
    This is a great story and i cant wait for the next chapter so dont take to long to write it ok.

    Thanks
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  • From ANON - puppydog on September 03, 2007
    please keep going. I am so loving this story!!!!!!! WHOO!!!!
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  • From ANON - Karissa on September 03, 2007
    Awwww please update!! This story is effin awesome =D
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