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Reviews for Unexpected Endeavors

By : Scottishfae
  • From ANON - Anon on May 13, 2007
    Has anyone noticed all these things about Kag getting it on with men that is as old as her great x20 grandfther!?!?!?!
    If you think about it like if she was from the future and did it whith sess or inu or even koga, it like getting it on with your 100 year old grandpa!?!
    Just food for thought
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  • From Crysan on February 27, 2007
    oooooo UPDATE SOON PLEASE I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
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  • From KawaiiKilala on February 26, 2007
    I dont mind that you wont be responding to reviews anymore...
    It is just what happens when there are allot of reviews...!
    I really am somewhat confused about all this...but I will stay with ya for now, just incase something more interesting comes around! =)
    Up-date soon!
    TTYL;
    megan
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  • From ANON - Sherry on February 26, 2007
    im not sure i understand
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  • From jessicashae2005 on February 25, 2007
    Please update soon!
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  • From angelnomiko on February 21, 2007
    wow that was sad .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Yaya on February 19, 2007
    I haven't read any of the reviews, and typically am not one to leave any (my internet connection isn't very reliable)but for you to have to post such an extensive (as well as defensive) note for flamers is ridiculous. Its this immature mentality that has paved the way for all the sloppy, shoddy one-shots that seem to have flooded the web. I have nothing against them, but if you're going to be impatient and complain that a particular story is being dragged out, then perhaps you shouldn't be reading it in the first place. There's enough variety out there for everyone to be content. I for one have no complaint. It is an incredible story that is soaking in awesome character developement and it can only make for an even more amazing experience. Don't give up, because i am POSITIVE that for every dummy posting a negative review there are a buncha dedicated readers-admirers of your work-anxiously keeping track of your progress. I'm one of them!!!
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  • From SnowWolf on February 17, 2007
    This is a really good fic and Haru is a bit of a funny character, i'd hate to leave him and Miroku togeather for too long ^_^ Well, good luck with your story and i do hope i can read more soon. i also wish to thankyou for informing me of the fic you talked about. take care of yourself and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Sherry on February 14, 2007
    I loved your story and I think that its great, please update soon, and for those people who were mean and acted like jerks during your last chapter well who cares about them! I understand what you did, or at least from my perspective, I now know what Sesshomaru and Haru were like when they were younger and why Sesshomaru's mother doesnt like Inuyasha! Please update soon


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  • From TimeFlys on February 11, 2007
    OMG!!!! I'm sorry that some of your readers aren't respectfull enough to understand that sometimes a author needs a chapter to explain something in the past of the character(s)' so that the readers can understand how they became the people they are. Personally the fact that you seem to have planned out and spend a lot of time building the characters and the character's you made, makes your writing that much better. Infact you are one of my fav. authors. Thats why I'm writing you this review, I usally don't write a lot of reviews but reading your autor's note made me scared. I really hate the idea of of you ending thid fic. because some people are rude. With that said I would also like to say "I'm sorry. If I was one of the reviews that was rude to you, It was never my intent - so I hope it never came across that way. I adore this fanfic, (as well as some of your others) and would never intentually try to be rude/hatefull, I understand why you wrote "And now something different chapter." Infact it explained alot about sess. and his mothers relationship. If anything I was just a little saddened by the fact that sess./kagome's realationship would not be pergressing in this chapter. BUT THAT DOES NOT MEAN I HATE IT OR THAT IT WAS USELESS - BECAUSE IT ISN'T!!!!! With that said, I'm looking foward to your next chapter very much! So please update soon. lol XD
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  • From ANON - Spander on February 10, 2007
    I didn't think your last chapter was useless. I really enjoyed it. I think your writing is brillian and I hope for a new chapter soon. It funny, I have you on my aol favorites list and on my cell phone and I know I will be checking it like everyday so I can get more of this story and your addictive writing style. I really love Haru. And I'm not one to fall in love with OC's it's only happened three times. In your story on in my sisters and a random one. Yours (not surpisringly) being my favorite. I sincerly hope you update soon because I reallu have enjoyed reading your story. ^_^ Have a nice night!

    Laters~
    Jonni... or Spander.... it's my username here but I just didn't feel like logging in. lol

    P.s. Oh and before I foget I really love the way you write every character they are all so awesome! You stay true to the manga but add your own little flare to it which I can really appreciate. Good job! (And I absolutly adore Izoyai... I can't spell her name please forgive me. lol)
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on February 09, 2007
    Ok during my reading chapter seven I just had to reveiw in the middle of the entire thing. You got alot of key detailing in the story mixed up and otherwise wrong
    For one thing you spell the name of inuyasha's sword wrong its spelled "Tetsusaiga" Not Tetsaiga.

    More importantly the two things that ticked me off the most.

    When she said "You know im not even going to say sit because you arent even worth it" Thats basically what she said.
    Well she said sit in that sentence so Inuyasha would have been slammed to the floor anyways.

    Last but not least, and the most important thing. The entire reason I decided to writ you.
    When Jaken said "Yes I was the retainer to the Great Inutaisho as was I the retainer to his father before him. Never have I felt more proud than to see Lord Inutaisho rule over the Western Lands. He was by far the strongest the House of Inu has ever produced."

    Thats not true, hes indebted to Sesshoumaru because he saved his people. You should read up on your facts and pay attention to the story/show ext before making up
    a characters past and switching things around.
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  • From mrskgoodman on February 09, 2007
    I have read this entire fic in one day and I must say that I enjoy the ups and downs of this story. I agree also with A sentinal mother being a awesome story. Reading both stories have modivated me to continue my own fic. Thanks for the excellent work and modivation.
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  • From ANON - Melissa on February 07, 2007
    Don't let the flames get to you. Rudeness over an internet forum is a sign of immaturity and not a reflection of your work. I'm enjoying the story. You also get coolness points in my book for naming your computer Slartibartfest. (I wonder how many people get the reference?)
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  • From ANGEL2006ASHLEY on February 06, 2007
    I love your story... at times it is confusing... but overall it's a wonderful story. I hope you update sometime soon.
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