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  • From ANON - henna on September 30, 2006
    !!!!!

    I love this story, it's so good.

    I hope you update real soon!

    =D
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  • From ANON - Bondage-Lover on September 17, 2006
    OOOHHH i love the story, please update really really soon PLEASE

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  • From ANON - Ari on September 11, 2006
    kyaaa! dont end it there!!!
    this is like the best story ever. The plot is very griping as well as the way you write
    Please update soon
    Ari
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  • From ANON - memorietrail on August 22, 2006
    please write more
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  • From ANON - Kags21 on August 21, 2006
    Poor Inuyasha , what will Sesshoumaru do to him?
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  • From ANON - little nikky on August 19, 2006
    :) i love it
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  • From ANON - Gilgrissom on August 05, 2006
    Did you really kill the Bat Demon off?

    I would like to know.
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  • From ANON - skydreamer22 on August 05, 2006
    Really nice story you have. I can't wait to read more so I hope you get the next chapters done soon.
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  • From ANON - Riley on July 31, 2006
    Great story so far, I really enjoy it and hope you update soon.
    Recently, I know this is very forward, I started writing an Original slash on a Geisha. Though it is male/male. I would love if you looked it over, seeing how you have based a story on the same thing. I am trying for historical accuracy and need feed back from somebody who knows something. I would be honoured if you contacted me at aprilmoffat14@hotmail.com if you are a mite interested.
    thanks for you time,
    Riley
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  • From GrayWolf on July 26, 2006
    these look good ^_^ i don't remember changing back the years and stuff... er... did you look that over?
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  • From ANON - Toni on July 25, 2006
    Your story line is intriguing and it looks like you have spent a lot of time doing research. I hope you write more of this.
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  • From ANON - Conner on July 16, 2006
    You said that you are not Japanese speaker/writer/reader, so what makes you think you should try and write so much Japanese in your story? It makes people who don't read Japanese mad and it makes people who do read Japanese laugh at your mistakes.

    I like your story except for all the Japanese words. Maybe you should take out a lot of the Japanese and just use the normal stuff like only their names in Japanese.

    And I looked for this on mediaminer and I couldn't find it. Where did it go?

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  • From ANON - Cracker on July 16, 2006
    omg you must update soon, this story is so cool!!!!! PEASE
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  • From ANON - ... on July 15, 2006
    I like your story quite a lot, it's interesting but a couple of things on your use of Japanese. First of all in Japanese there are no plural words [eg. Incorrect: There were many sensei's. Correct: There were many sensei] Also..uh Arigatou Gozai'mashita' is past tense. Arigatou Gozai'masu' is present. Hope these help somewhat.. =D Ganbatte!
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  • From ANON - Stormraven on July 14, 2006
    LOVE the story and really like how you're incorporating Japanese terms into it, especially the ones for the Geisha lifestyle and everyday items. I get shivers at visualizing Inuyasha in a full Geiko regalia! Will Sesshoumaru find out what happened to his younger half-brother, if so, what will he do? Will Naraku show up in the story? How about Kouga? Can hardly wait to see what happens next...
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