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By : SayuriNakamura

From madmiko on July 08, 2007
Oh, such a NICE chapter! Loved it! But you sure know how to make things difficult for your readers -- now there are FOUR fabulous guys for Kagome. (FIVE, if you count Youko. Heh heh!) Seriously, you know me -- I'm all for Hiei, and Hiei/Kag/Yusuke is good, too. So, how did you mangage to make me feel sorry for Koenma, and make Kurama such a perfect match for her, too? *sigh* It's very disconcerting. LOL! But you spelled out their similarities so perfectly, I just couldn't help but go "Hmmmmm." I loved Genkai confronting Hiei and Yusuke, and pointing out to them why Kagome was so upset, AND the fact that she would be feeling torn between them, while THEY could choose to share her. And I really, really liked the way you wrote that it was obvious from their reaction to her words that they had both been considering that very possibility. And, you did such a great job of having Yusuke just say right out that he was willing to do it, while Hiei stubbornly refused to say it, --prefering to mention that they could fight it out, -- THEN telling Yusuke they should talk. That whole part was just wonderful. And, I'm guessing they already had their little talk when they started looking for her. Hmmm. so, what will their reaction be when they come across her with KURAMA? Hee hee!! *rubs hands together in anticipation* This is going to be GOOD!! I was really thrilled to see another chapter up for this -- it's one of the few stories I'm really following these days, since I've been spending so much time writing myself. I will be looking forward eagerly to your next update!!
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From Patty530 on June 16, 2007
I really hope you haven't given up on this. I just found it and loved every minute of it. So if you need encouragement to continue, you have it. Please.
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From Chaosharbinger on June 04, 2007
I'm really really loving this story. You had said that you didn't know whether you were going to make it a Yusuke/Hiei/Kagome or not, so here's my plea. YES, YES, YES... please ^^'. Keep up the great work, and I'm waiting expectently for the next chapter.
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From cowgirlkitten2000 on May 31, 2007
wow this is a really great. i not normally fond of 3 way relationships but with this story i find myself really wanting it. you are doing a wonderful job with this and i cant wait to read more.
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From CloverBabe on May 28, 2007
whoop.

loved it.
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From madmiko on May 28, 2007
That was fabulous!! I loved Hiei's thoughts about her and the way he realized how very similar their situations and motivations actually are. And I loved the way Kagome told him how much she appreciated the little things he had done. This was a great two steps forward, one step back chapter. The wonderful, comapnionable time they spent together, followed by the mutual attraction and growing passion. And it all would have been smooth and great and positive, if Yusuke hadn't shown up when he did. And, perhaps, if Hiei had been able to keep the triumph he was feeling from showing. I think it was beautifully written, and you hit all the right notes. And now Hiei has faced his own yearnings and feelings and come to a decision. I do wonder how he is going to explain his reaction to Kagome. And Kagome has that "torn between two lovers" feeling ready to plague her. I feel sorry for Hiei, though, because he's misinterpreting her reaction. He needs to talk to her. And it looks like it may take a while for him and Yusuke to come to terms over her. Hmmm. I don't remember what the end situation was with Inuyasha, but I have to say, I hope she DOES see him again, with these two at her side. She deserves to have that kind of closure -- that kind of vindication. Nicely done!
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From CrowNoYami on April 22, 2007
Lol... you unkowingly made a fan for life... putting two of my favorite movies in it... well anything to do with Will Smith is a favorite of mine... I hope that Kagome can find love in both Hiei and yusuke... they both need her, though I don't know how Hiei would take that. He should show her his past and then she'll accept him and then everybody's happy!!
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From HopelesslyEscaflowne on March 20, 2007
For Chapters 1-5:

Wow, this story has a lot of potential. You have set the plot up so well that there's equal chances for Kagome to end up with Hiei or Yusuke. The backstory you've made for all of this to happen is very believable too. The characters are likeable and it's nice to see them all integrate Kagome into their lives in some special way. In my humble opinion, I think that Hiei is the best pairing for Kagome. Yusuke, even though his heart was broken, his situation mirrors too much of what Kagome has already been through. He's a terrific guy, don't get me wrong, but I like Hiei as a pairing for her more. There just seems to be more chemistry between her and Hiei, primal and intense. Even though he's not as verbose as Yusuke, it's still there, and just as strong. I bet you that if Kagome spent some precious one-on-one time with Hiei just like she did with Yusuke, although doing others things, that she'd have just chemistry if not more with Hiei than she did in this last chapter with Yusuke. ;) That last chapter was really nice though, with her and Yusuke. Oooo, I bet Hiei finds them like that and finally identifies that emotion he's been feeling a lot lately, jealousy. ;) Even Yukina can tell that he's in love with Kagome. Again, I honestly think Hiei is the better pairing. He has a troubled past, that only Kagome can soothe, he opens up to her more than anyone else, watches her like a hawk 24/7, cares about her more than Yukina, and wants to spend as much time with her as he can. Overall, he is head over heels for Kagome, but he's like an innocent child who's never really experienced this sort of thing before. He really is adorable and his youkai is wonderfully possessive. I love the fact that his youkai rears its head more often than anyone elses. It really adds to the story. I do hope you keep writing this fic and update soon! ^^
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From ryukotsusei on March 18, 2007
Oh man I can just imagine how pissed Hiei is going to be when he finds out Kagome is going to be with them. I doubt he'd be able to talk her out of it though, if he'd even try. Then again he might try to order her which might cause problems too *chuckles* Can't wait to see how he takes finding out. Good chapter, update soon please.
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From ryukotsusei on March 18, 2007
So I'm finally sitting down to catch up on a lot of the reading that I haven't gotten to. So, my review for chapter four hehe. I like the interaction between the three, I think Kagome is going be good for Yusuke in getting his life back to normal. I can't say as I blame him for being pissed at Botan, my question is by the sounds of it Shizuru knew as well. If so, what are his feelings about her at the moment?

I also like how Hiei is helping Kagome deal with her own emotional instability. Heaven knows she's going to need it with the way she takes the weight of everyone elses problems besides her own. Good chapter! I'm off to read the next one.
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From madmiko on March 11, 2007
And chapter four again: just excellent! Who could ask for more? Loved her interaction with Yusuke -- the way she was trying to get to know him better. I loved the revelation that the only things she knew about Inuyasha were from observation because he never talked to her. Hiei's thoughts were interesting, too. He had never trusted Keiko, huh? And he's acting jealous towards Yusuke now and wondering if he can trust Kagome. If he and Yusuke don't come to an understanding, will he consider Kagome untrustworthy for liking Yusuke, too? I sure hope they work it out! They both have formed such a bond with her. When Yusuke ran on ahead and Hiei found her where she had tripped and hurt herself because he came looking for them, it was so revealing of his feelings for her. (Even if he's still wondering what the heck they are.) Even Kagome noticed the emotion on his face and in his eyes. And I loved it when he took her hand and started helping her remove the gravel from her leg. It was such an "AW!" moment. She's the only one who brings that out in him. It was great, too, when she was walking back to the shrine with the two of them and she mentioned Miroku and they were both curious and both ready to kick his butt if he deserved it. LOL!! You really have done the most amazing job of developing her relationship with both Hiei and Yusuke. I don't think I've seen a threesome set up any better than this.
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From madmiko on March 11, 2007
And chapter 3 is still amazing, too! Kagome's anger at Keiko and her complete empathy with Yusuke were spot on. I absolutely love it that she had Hiei spar with him to get some of his anger out. And Hiei's thoughts that she should take her own advice were great, too. But the ultimate scene was her sitting down with yusuke's head in her lap and inviting Hiei to join him -- and he did! And they were all completely content. Awesome!
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From madmiko on March 11, 2007
Yep, I'm reading it again. Just finished the second chapter, and it is such a completely, wonderfully fantastic Hiei/Kag chapter that I found myself reading sections of it over and over again. When Hiei vowed to himself after seeing her story through the Jagan that he would never betray or forsake her, I could feel my heart skip a beat. That's just damn good writing. I loved it when Yusuke and Kurama were eavesdropping, and then when they agreed to protect her, I was like: Wow! You hit all the right notes. But the real kicker was the very last sentence where Hiei never let her out of his sight. Good golly and Hell's bells! I know I loved this the first (and second and third)times I read it, but somehow, THIS time, it was even better. You are SO talented, and this is SUCH a great story. I'm just loving it!
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From madmiko on March 08, 2007
Aw! Such a sweet chapter. I like the way Yusuke and Hiei tried to comfort her when she told them about her friends. The threesome set-up is awesome! Yusuke and Hiei seem to really be working together to help her. Loved the part about Koenma's visit. He's attracted to her, too, huh? Well, he'll have to get in line. Wonder where Hiei was when Koenma came? He's not going to be too happy about the news, is he? That was a nice evening Kagome and Yusuke spent together. I hope she gets to spend some time with Hiei, too. I've got to go back and re-read this story now to refresh my memory on everything. I love it that you've made Kagome wise enough to think the way she does about Hiei and Yusuke, and even about Inuyasha. She's sad, but she'll get over it. (Who wouldn't with those to help?) Loving it!!
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From ness2g5 on March 08, 2007
I really like this story... I think you should definately make this a hiei/kag/yus fic... They would work well together...
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