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Reviews for What Lurks Beneath

By : Roushijin
  • From ANON - CinCin on August 21, 2006
    o yeah the reveiw be4 this was me ^.^ hehe glad to be bck!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 21, 2006
    *sniffels* i come back from vacation and u do this to me!!!!!!! fine be that way *pouts and goes to her corner* so so so so so so so so o o o so not fair! we were this close ppl now tell me is that not soul crushin or what!?!?! nooooo hes soooo damn sexi and make ya just wanna mmmmmhmmm and yet u yank it all away and leave us sittin there bashin our heads against the keyboard *that hurts by the way* haha well i loved the chapters and im glad to be home again ^.^, keep up the good work, although the at guy in the grave from viva la bam looks loney i think ill join him =P CUZ IM KILLIN LONLINESS!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sam on August 21, 2006
    O My Dear Lord. That was like four paragraphs of real writting. Four SMALL paragraphs of real writing.. ummmm at least you updated!!!!! I liked the chapter though.. I was still really shocked that fluffy would cheat but HE DIDNT YAAAYY *throws confeddi and dances a strange little dance around a campfire*
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  • From ANON - Ana on August 21, 2006
    You had better make up for this chapter with the next one! UPDATE VERY SOON!
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  • From ANON - diego on August 21, 2006
    what the fuck...I hate you...how dare you make a chapter so small...you ..if i get my hands on you...you will pay...anyway it great so keep write...before i have to force you!!!
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  • From ANON - CrazyIvan(notloggedin) on August 20, 2006
    Well this is quite good indeed. Though myself I personaly am not fond of the chicken mc nuggets... wait what?
    Er herm, anyways, the formating is okay, spelling and grammer fine, you bastards and your cliffies, what exactly does it mean to "quite writing"? :p Typo'd it seems, might wanna fix that won't ya. Before I go, I wonder....



    WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU ARE!? WHERE DO YOU GET OFF WITH THE TITLE OF LORD?! I'LL HAVE YOU KNOW IT TAKES DECADES OF VIOLENT BLOODSHED TO ESTABLISH A ROYAL LINE!


    Besides that good job, and continue on. This is CrazyIvan, signing off for now...

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  • From ANON - Midnight Star on August 20, 2006
    That was a cruel trick you played on me for chapter 5. I was looking forward to the super jucy lemon that you promised. The only critice I have is that the chapter could have been longer but that's it. It's still a good fic.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on August 19, 2006
    I had to go to fanfiction.net to read the chapter. I did not upload all the way throuhgh. You love to keep us in suspense. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - angel on August 19, 2006
    wow that was great .. i cant wait in till then next chapter .. please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - blackpanzer on August 17, 2006
    I love this story, but you are such a tease! XP And that is what makes this story a good one. You build it up and then just cut it off with a cliffy. Oh well, it just makes me return to read more. Keep up the great work and update soon. Ja ne! =^,^=
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  • From ANON - Coyote_Wolf on August 15, 2006
    AHH!!! NEED...MORE...LEMONY GOODNESS!! *blows up* *random event, someone brings her a lemon drop* ah....thats better....but please keep writing! This is such an awesome story!
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  • From ANON - Romance/AlalaMoon on August 10, 2006
    Hey, I got an update up... Where's yours?

    LOL. I'll be looking for you.


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  • From ANON - Midnight Star on August 05, 2006
    Not a bad story,even if the chapters were a bit short. Waited till the last chapter to review. Can't wait till they finally get their freak on. I know it's going to be super juicy and kniky.
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  • From ANON - Genetics on August 02, 2006
    .....ugh. I've said it before, and I'll say it again, no more fucking cliffhangers!
    Other than that, good story ;).
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  • From on July 31, 2006
    I was reading getting all excited then....my world came crashing down...I was in (literatly) tears...how am i suppose to sleep? How? T_T I will be playing that moment in my mind over and over...and over... (Sesshoumaru should beat Rin's butt ;) ) and over...over...over...over...did i mentions you are so not my friend right now? :) lol
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