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Reviews for What Lurks Beneath

By : Roushijin
  • From ANON - Beenie on July 30, 2006
    Great story!
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  • From ANON - sesshou-chan788 on July 28, 2006
    Hi, im a newcomer in here. Maybe i dont know many beautiful words to say, but i really love your stories,this one and the other named "his lost bride". Im just afraid that you wont reply my compliments, but i really want to make friend with you, can you give me your Y!M? When i went to this website, i have always looked for your stories first. The way you write make me feel a little different with other stories i have read, so i love your stories very much. Please write more chapters, i hope to read it soon.
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  • From ANON - Cassie on July 28, 2006
    How could you do this again that's really mean of you to do right at the lemmony part too!!!!!!!!! Could you please get on with the lemmony sex scene because if I see another shocking short cliffy I'm going to pull my hair out ppppppllllllllleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssseeeeeeeeee update..... really gooooooooooood story keep up the good work.......^________________^
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  • From ANON - Ana on July 27, 2006
    This is a great story. I can't wait to see what happens next. UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - diego on July 27, 2006
    he,he,he... I forgot how good you are...why do you alway cut in the good moments...that is really mean...and that is one more punishimens...well see ya later...and this time im going to kick your ass
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  • From ANON - samantha [not signed in] on July 27, 2006
    upddate update update! this was great. now please update soon, i can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Inu_Twins on July 27, 2006
    WOW!!! That was nice!! Plz Update ASAP!! Intense and those cliffs are very deadly!! I wouldn't want to fall off of one them!!So...um...Update ASAP so u don't get in trouble for killing someone!! But u would never do that....or would U...I am joking...^-^ seriously!!

    From Kit
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  • From ANON - blue on July 27, 2006
    this story is plain... AMAZIIIING!!! i know u just updated yesterday, but PLEASE update asap! its sooo great right now. and ur cliffs are KILLERS! i just finished reading all of the chapters, and they had me HOOKED! please continue continue continue!!!
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  • From ANON - sauncha on July 27, 2006
    Ooooo! Getting close to the lemon it looks like.
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  • From ANON - Sam on July 27, 2006
    OMG thank you SOO much.. You just went up like fifty knotches on my people I love list.. Yes and it was a very very good chapter YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY He didnt cheat on her!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2006
    I really like the way you write...!! and I also like the titles of the chapters (although I don´t really know why...but I think its better than to only write `chapter1`, `chapter2` and so on...)
    I hope there will be a new chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - Bandit on July 26, 2006
    I LOVE IT!!
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  • From ANON - Alala on July 26, 2006
    Rushie, you better not quit. Or I'll hunt you down with a pitch fork and extend my Trysted sense of judgement over it... LOL. Ummm, yeah.

    Now, about your fic...

    That is evil. You always manage to cut off just at the good points. Mmmmmm. Well, here's another thing, You rushed the beta job on this. It's all in all a good fic. But there's several spelling errors.

    And what the heck?!

    Rin thought Sesshomaru was cheating on her? What an idgit. As for Rin, she's more guilty of that then him. Sheesh. LOL.


    Anyway, where the heck is my review for PMS? Huh?! Grrrrrrrrr. You are falling further behind....

    Alala
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  • From ANON - CinCin on July 26, 2006
    *glares at her comp screen with an intense desire to blow the damn thing to a million tiny peices and send them to TUMBUCK2!!!!!!!!!!!!!* "pant pant" that was cruel worse then burying a dead person bringing them back to life then telling them they have to go back into the dark cold scary GRAVE PIT with the fat dude from viva la bam! *sniffles* fine be that way tear the very fabric of my heart out and stomp on it and use my tears to wipe it up. but if not be nice and update^.^ ByTheWay rin is a lil sex vixen and should be locked up and hidden so all the rest of us have a lick of a chance at being so ellusive and damned desirable and SESSHOUMARU *underline underline* is a damn sexi beast who should be handcuffed to the bed and never let go *coughlikejohnnydeppisonminecough* so hurry up and tie the damn drool worthy dude up!!
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  • From ANON - Sam on July 25, 2006
    Wow that was a shocker.. that little imputent basterd cheating on Rin. GRRRRR... I could castrait him right now :( But good come back little Rin * Snaps for Rin* I'm sorry if my review is boring :( But my brother-in-law died a couple days ago and I am having a hard time with it.. but reading these storys makes me happy. O btw 31 everytime I write that he died the author asks how old so there you go 31.
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