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Reviews for What Lurks Beneath

By : Roushijin
  • From ANON - Alala on July 25, 2006
    Hello Rushie... You missed one. Sure, you got the Ridi update, but what about the chapter 9 of PMS? Hmmmm. You caught 8.... but not nine. After all... This puts you REALLY far behind. LOL.

    Alala/Tryst/AlalaMoonTryst... Yeah... I have other author names... Though, the Tryst ones are a bit more tilted to another grouping. :-D Told you I have more fics than you can possibley understand.
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  • From ANON - sea of sin on July 24, 2006
    this is just a wonderful story although the chappies are a bit short. good work. update soon
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  • From ANON - nessi on July 24, 2006
    how can you stop the chapter at this point!!? It´s unfair...I want to read more!!! So please update!!^^
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  • From ANON - Alala on July 24, 2006
    Har de har har. That was a good one. Lol. Little maid? A whore? Are these two in love or is there some kind of unresolved issue? Wow. Lol. But I should warn you... I have several fics I have yet to finish posting. As they say, don't count your chickens before they hatch. Keep your eyes on Ridiculous... after all... It is complete.

    :-D

    Alala
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on July 24, 2006
    That was a interesting turn of events....... So they together but not together????!!!!!f... Well I know you will explain everything later.........I just have to wait....
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  • From ANON - L-chan on July 24, 2006
    I like your story. Please write more.
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  • From ANON - kitsune-dono126896 on July 22, 2006
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! How could u...it was getting good...hehe...anyways...keep updating alrighty!
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  • From ANON - Cassie on July 21, 2006
    How could you do that!!!!! and right at the good part. I thought he was going to take her on the floor in the hallway. I couldn't believe that you stopped a major lemon right there , that's not right ( crying and stomping like a baby) Waaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please please update the suspense is going to drive me nuts I want to find out if her pushes her against the wall or something. Please anything a sample ANYTHING PLEASE........really good update soon.. ^________________________^
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  • From ANON - Sam on July 21, 2006
    OOO I feel SOO privledged that I was mentioned in an authors note. It was actually my first time on this board. .well in a good way.. there was this author who had it out for me the first review.. because I like knowing whats going to happen but I dont know so I make those little guesses and theorys right most people are ok with it well she wasnt.. but thats a story for another day. I just feel so happy inside :) I am kinda sad that my theory was wrong but hey no harm done its not the first time I was wrong.. I will eventually get over my wound. J/k no but wow that was his wife.. and the general was flirting with her.. did he by any chance touch her??? I read this story ok I have read alot of storys where fluffy will kick some serious ass because people lay a finger on rin or kagome *not mated but she is to inuyasha* and he is all "NEVER TOUCH AN INU-YOUKI MATE" and with the groweling.. but yea it was a really good chapter a little short but HEY it was an update right?
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  • From ANON - diego on July 20, 2006
    hehehe...didn t you say I would love your story...well as always your right. You know me very good...well see ya next chapt
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  • From ANON - loopypants on July 20, 2006
    Oh your just so mean lol:) Hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - Alala Moon on July 20, 2006
    Alrighty then. I shall take that reveiw challenge. But, you are so far behind it's not funny. LOL. Cause you see... I already have a chapter nearly done. So, get on with it. Update soon.

    Alala
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  • From ANON - Caramel on July 20, 2006
    Cool story! it's really good! i hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on July 20, 2006
    WHAT!!!!!! What kind of freaky game are they playing?????? Playing with that poor clueless general life???? Sesshomarum must not have marked her yet....because if he did his scent would have been all over Rin,and that General would have know "HANDS OFF!!!" You're messing with Sesshomaru's property.......update!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - leyren on July 20, 2006
    ooohhh,being seductive are we? ^~ you got me wanting more, I love your description and the flow of the storyline. IT's really good. update soon!
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