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  • From ANON - Little Jack 2 on July 22, 2006
    Inuyasha trys to act nicer just so that he won't get sitted so much,I wonder how far he'll succed.My favourite part was Miroku telling Inuyasha if he won Inuyasha would have to grab Kagome's hooters.
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  • From ANON - bettychan on July 22, 2006
    Not bad. But it could be a lot better. Please learn the difference between "there"(opposite of here), "their" (belonging to them)and "they're"(they are). Names always start with a capital letter, no matter where they are in a sentence. Also please learn the difference between "wen"( A harmless cyst, especially on the scalp or face, containing the fatty secretion of a sebaceous gland.) and "when". See what a big difference one little letter left out of a word can be? "sangos" means more than one Sango. Something belonging to Sango would be written "Sango's" The 's shows possession. You also need to learn the difference between "to", "too" and "two". "Ill" means sick. "I'll" means I will. "Im" should be written "I'm" (meaning I am.)
    Since you're posting on this site, I assume you to be over eighteen. You should know these things. I realize these stories are written for fun. But taking the time to proofread and correct simple mistakes like these shows you have pride in your work, no matter if it is for fun or not.
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