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Reviews for Fate's Mistake

By : kimisan
  • From ANON - rainmorninglord on January 09, 2017

    I know it is supposed to be a oneshot but this one is so good and I would love to read more.


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  • From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2012
    Awemazing store wish there was more

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  • From ANON - Ox King on April 25, 2011
    Too bad this is a one shot. I would love for the next chapter about the fathers finding out and their reaction.
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  • From kuramasgirl on April 07, 2010
    damn that was hot. u should so do a sequel where either kurama or yusuke runs in2 the preg kags. id love 2 see them develope in2 a 3some of lovers.
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  • From kittygirl86 on April 03, 2010
    I really like this story. I was wondering If you would be considering making it into a to ahot? It feels like it could have more added to it. It would be neat to fnd out what happnes when Kagome hads teh baby and yusuke and kurama find out.
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  • From Legilmyth on May 30, 2009
    I just love this story. And I was wondering if you would concider doing a sequel, or allowing me to write one?
    The idea I have has Kagome giving birth to twin girls. And taking place fifteen years after your story.
    Let me know what you think. My muse just wont let it go, if you want to e-mail me I can let you know the rest of my idea.
    legilmyth@hotmail.com I look forward to hearing form you either way.

    Legilmyth
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  • From ANON - lisa on October 01, 2008
    more!more!more!more!more!more!more!more!more! please?
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  • From loretta537 on September 21, 2008
    this was so good, i dont want it to be a oneshot. please write more, do yusuke and kurama ever find out they have a child and if so what then
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  • From ANON - Violet on July 14, 2008
    please add more
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  • From StephanieG on June 07, 2008
    that's a really great one-shot! i was wondering, is there a possibility that you will write a sequel? I really hope so.
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  • From ANON - dejaz on February 27, 2008
    i really liked this one shot but i really wish there were more to it. like if koenma sent the boys to investigate the shrine or something so they'd be able to meet with kagome again. (maybe have more fun~)anyway, i loved it!
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  • From Epiphany on February 21, 2008
    *chuckles* For some reason, all I can think is that if either Yusuke or Kurama ran into (or saw) Kagome during the pregnancy, the two would wind up deciding to corner her and convince her to let them be a more solid presence in her life and the baby's life. And not to think of continuing their rather unique association as "breaking them up" so much as "agreeing to be their surrogate" so they can have kids as a couple. Especially since she would be utterly paranoid about coming between them given her past experience with her own little triangle. Although when explaining the relationship to others, they'd likely have to take the diplomatic route and say something like the two potential papas mixed their "samples" together for insemination to make sure the baby's paternal influence was a surprise.
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  • From ANON - kogome on January 20, 2008
    please update soon! I really want to see if they meet her and find out shes having their baby!!!
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  • From whirleeq on October 14, 2007
    THIS IS FRICKEN HOT! You should really write a sequel... the plot bunnies are ENDLESS... can you imagine Kagome's surprise when she gives birth to a hanyou? Or if the child favors Kurama, and Yumi does the math and figures out just exactly how Kagome talked her way out of jail? ;) Seriously, you should write a sequel...
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  • From ANON - kags on September 29, 2007
    PLEASE CONTINUE this story its really good
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