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Reviews for Complexities of Fate

By : yannaenoah
  • From XxSangoxX on October 24, 2006
    ahhhh
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  • From ANON - Celest on October 24, 2006
    CONTINUE!!!!! I NEED MORE! Please... Continue quickly. I'll be waiting.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 23, 2006
    Great job with chapter 18... Loved it! I do recommend proofreading your chapters, I notice you really don't make spelling errors but you do make some typos. Once you're finished with a chapter, reread it and look for things like "you" instead of "your" (I noticed you made this typo at the start of chapter 17 as well). Despite the minor typos and the occasional grammatical error (you roll onto something, not unto), it was still an awesome chapter, good job! Can't wait for more!
    -xfx-
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  • From ANON - Megan on October 23, 2006
    OMFG MORE!
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  • From ANON - XxSangoxX *not signed in* on October 23, 2006
    Fuck yes. That's bomb and I am hella excited for the next installment. Thanks for not lyricizing. It did get a tad redundant on your part. I like this story.. it's cute... check your spelling though, the first thing I noticed upon opening your newest chapter was that you said 'hand in you tests' it should be your.. prolly really only just a Typo.. I get those all the time.. just be careful of them. okay?

    Can't wait for more!

    JE NE!

    Heathe.
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  • From ANON - 6angel9 on October 23, 2006
    Its amazing, intense, and you make it so good that i cant wait to read on
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  • From ANON - BastardOmega on October 23, 2006
    nice chapter. nice cliffhanger. but all in all nice job, keep writing and give us the next chappi. update soon.

    Peace & Love BastardOmega
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  • From ANON - Lissa on October 19, 2006
    Ohhh, sooo cute. I wonder what type of relationship Sesshomaru is after. I can't wait to read more. This is a very good story.

    :)

    LOL
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  • From ANON - fire_eyez on October 18, 2006
    YES!!! FINALLY!!! THEY ADMITTED IT!!! THANK GOD! Im soooo excited now!! but you left us hanging. :-(. Now i have to wait till next chapter to see what happens. But i cant wait! It's very suspensful and thats hard to pull off.
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  • From ANON - pat on October 18, 2006
    out of all the fanficts that i have read that arnt based on the story itself this has 2 b the best
    keep writing
    lov the story
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2006
    HOORAY!!!
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  • From ANON - Celest on October 18, 2006
    CONTIUNE!!! I love this story. You gotta continue or I'll die.
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  • From ANON - Megan on October 18, 2006
    MORE, I NEED MORE!
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  • From xfxgfx on October 16, 2006
    Great job writing this story, it was really well written and I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter... please update soon!
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  • From ANON - fire_eyez on October 15, 2006
    AWESOME!
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