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Reviews for Sugar & Spice

By : LdyMoon
  • From ANON - seiryu on August 11, 2006
    hurry and write another one damn it and I am waiting on Betrayals Gift as well, I love the webs you weave woman.
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  • From ANON - kougasbyatch on August 11, 2006
    My stomach muscles hurt I can't believe you gave Naraku that rating, I always found him darker and sexier, but oh my god I can see it from your eyes please keep it up. And I loved Ginta oh my I think I fell in love with him too, I want to see more fan fiction with him init if he's going to be so damn hot can't wait to see Koga's score!!!!
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  • From ANON - anon on August 11, 2006
    Thsi is funny and sexy keep it up
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  • From ANON - The real Hotaru on August 07, 2006
    Great story. It was hot! Let me let you know, Kouga can swim in my lake any time for free, so send him over this way. Oh, and I like how you gave Ginta such a high score for being tender. Loved it. Now hurry up and give me more.
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  • From ANON - The real Hotaru on August 07, 2006
    I only have three things to say!

    one: I would like to say I'm so happy you are writing a new story. You always have such good ideas.

    Two: This story was sooooo funny. Any one who don't think so must not laugh much.

    Three: I can't wait to read more.

    :)
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  • From XxSangoxX on August 05, 2006
    she is a black widow spider.... how mean.
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  • From ANON - Rayne on August 03, 2006
    I can soooo see it! It was so funny looking forward to reading more soon.
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  • From ANON - joy on August 03, 2006
    omfg thats was awsome plz update soon
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  • From SesshysJadedSamuri on August 03, 2006
    Oh my god... that was so funny... you definitely need to add more to this... deep down, I always knew that Naraku was a total failure.

    The only prominent problem that I found with it, was that you continuously mixed up 'course' with 'coarse'. For example, several times you used the phrase: 'of coarse', when it should have been 'of course.' I am not saying this to be mean, and I hope you don't take it that way. I am just trying to give you a little constructive advice, since I know that the spell/grammar check function on many programs does not always catch those types of errors; especially since the word is spelled correctly, just not used in the proper context. I hope there are no hard feelings.

    I am going to continue reading this story, because it is outrageously funny and uniquely original. All in all I think you did a great job. Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more of this story in the future. (I can't wait to see what your special agent has to say about my favorite demon lord (Sesshomaru) and his hot-headed half brother.)

    sincerely,
    sesshys_jaded_samuri
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