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Reviews for When Everything Falls Apart

By : IrishBlackRosie
  • From ANON - lala_land on October 13, 2006
    that was so sweet keep it up
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  • From ANON - animeprincess1 on October 07, 2006
    WENCH! T_T T_T You made me cry. T_T T_T
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  • From ANON - Ashley Wilson on October 02, 2006
    I love this story! Keep up the good work! Can't wait till the next update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 30, 2006
    not bad i guess wo am i kidding that was soo good
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  • From ANON - Vague on September 28, 2006
    you were going so good i understand why you wrote it but did you really really have to make her die? I can read anything, you can write the most perverse things, i can witness said perversions without blinking but i cannot STAND the suffwring of a child i cant stop crying because another little child has lost her life (your neice) youve written a beautiful stoty and now ill sleep as i wont be able to stay awake. I'm very sorry about your little laina.
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  • From ANON - Ang on September 27, 2006
    This chapter was so raw, I even started to tear up at the end! You have such an awesome talent in your writing! Please Please keep up the awesome work! Looking forward to your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Tajia on September 27, 2006
    OMG! That was sooooo moving....I am really sorry about your niece...that so sad she was so young.
    It's time for Kagome and Sesshomaru to grow up dang it! Put em back together please.
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  • From ANON - jamie on August 30, 2006
    I realy liked it, and your englise is acully pretty good! Mine how ever I need work...mostly my spelling. Sigh, and to think I was born here in flordia, sighs... Well I hope you keep up the good work. Your plot and caritors is wonderful, and don't worry about what ever bad rewiews you get... All that matters is that you like it! Loves lots , and one more thing I looove your lil faces you have at the end he he he! I think they are just sooo cute! Smiles. GOOD LUCK!
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  • From ANON - Koinuchan9 (nli) on August 09, 2006
    OMG!!! I can't believe he actually did it! That bastard! Poor Kagome. I hope she makes him so jealous! Ok, well I can't wait for you to update!! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Cassie on August 08, 2006
    Very good so far.... Sesshomaru is being a major ASS!!!!! Please hit him over the head or something... make him smell so rich and powerful coffee.... make the words his father said burn in his memory.. make him hop out of bed and run to Kagome for forgiveness and to take him back and explain to her why he's being a ASS!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter
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  • From ANON - lennox on August 05, 2006
    this chapter was good post soon
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  • From ANON - Ana on August 05, 2006
    Update soon. The Sesshoumaru/Kagome relationship is interesting.
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  • From ANON - bettychan on August 04, 2006
    Of course you should post the rest of this story. Not only is it a wel written piece of fiction, it's intriguing too. Not only must you tell us what Father wanted with Kagome, but also why Sesshoumaru left. Please update as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - AngelsWarmth on August 04, 2006
    It thought that this is a wonderful story! And I think you should continue on with it.
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  • From ANON - RED DAY on August 04, 2006
    yes..please post more chapters, this is a good story, I hope you give intimate details of what happened to Sess, however, it just seems he was afraid to have his own children with her! just a thought! great story!
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