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Reviews for Primal

By : RhiannonoftheMoon
  • From blue_heron on February 18, 2017

    After many years of abandoning my love of Inuyasha fan fiction, I have found my way back and find that I love the characters as much as I ever did. The strange plot, fun/sexy writing, and enjoyable characterization in the story was great. I know that it has been ages, but a girl can secretly hope that you miraculously come back to your fan fiction just as I have!  Great writing. I hope the inspiration to return & update comes around to this gem! Best ~ 


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  • From ANON - TouchofFever on January 05, 2015
    Please tell me you're going to continue. I'm so interested in the next piece that it's breaking my heart to stop here. ;w;
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on August 17, 2009
    Hey there! I really enjoyed this story and was wondering if you intend to continue it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2009
    What a dark yet captivating tale! Perhaps someday you will continue it?
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  • From jadesanstar on April 16, 2008
    hey love your fic's do you plan on ever updating them? can u e-mail me and let me know ^_^
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  • From ANON - ruth on November 04, 2006
    oh god please tell me thats not the end.. i really want to rad more. i reallylike the way your doing the story. it oringel.so please don't stop. and a part of me thinks kagome is with cub.. i hope she is, that would make things interesting.
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  • From ANON - lisa t on October 30, 2006
    more ch 5
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  • From PhoenixWolf on October 28, 2006
    Wow! An interesting twist. Kagome taking back over her body. Now, will she keep control, or will she lose it again?

    I can hardly wait for the next chapter!

    Until we meet again.
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  • From ANON - jenn on October 28, 2006
    Really cool & substantially different plot. Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on October 28, 2006
    I am really enjoying this fic. So, she has a pot belly? Hm, is she preggers? He certainly smelled Sesshoumaru on her. Don't answer that. I like mystery. I feel so sad for Kouga and hope that he is able to get better. Heheh, she got the best of Kagura. So, she thinks that she has lost her miko powers. Hm, but there was the mention that she sensed that Kouga had none which could mean that she still does have that power. I'll have to read back through the fic. It's been awhile. Can't wait for any one of the other characters to meet up with her. Ooooh, I'm so glad that Sesshoumaru has decided that he truly wants her. And I agree with him. She is a spitfire. I'm glad that you made her so dominant. I do feel sorry for the real Kagome since the demon part of her new form causes her to do things that are painful to the real Kagome. I'm wondering just how much of the real Kagome that we see in the end. I'll have to read back through to remember how you are painting the rest of the crew.

    Anywho, great writing.

    Snow
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  • From ANON - Kyote on September 16, 2006
    I'm really enjoying this story. It is very well written and engaging enough to hold my interest. I kinda want to know more about what kinda vampire-demon Kagome is, how she'll get along once she remembers who/how she was, and how her relationship with Sesshoumaru will proceed (will he be Dom, She? Or will they comp?). By the way, did she meld with that other demoness, or what? I'm hoping not, but I'll be confused if you never finish with the one who made her as she is.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on August 24, 2006
    This is a really great fic. Lot's of action, heat, and suspense. Yay, for killing Kikyou! I don't hate her, she's just in the way. I love the way that you described Kagome's ability while in her other state of being. I can imagine it. You know, I've had dreams like those. How about you? Rather freeing, really. I love the youkai form that you have given Kagome.

    Well, great fic and I look forward to the next chapter.

    Snow
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  • From ANON - Byako on August 19, 2006
    You are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors. You have such interesting ideas! I'm rather sad to see how few reviews this story has, it needs more! The idea itself of Kagome becoming something of demonic nature is not terribly original, but the what, how, and effects are new, as far as I've seen, and very much entertaining. I especially enjoyed the fact that Kagome places herself in the "almighty bitch" position, totally dominating Sesshoumaru(though, yeah, she kinda really cheats), carting him around on her shoulder, and such. I also enjoyed the "kagomes, inuyashas, and sesshoumarus" thing. Ah, I hope that made sense ^^; Anyway, keep up the wonderful work on your stories, I very much look forward to when you update them!
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  • From ANON - wynter89 on August 14, 2006
    wow! i wonder what happens next? Sesshomaru and Kagome make a hot couple in this fic... never thought of kagome lossing her Super Ego. (Ego is the reality principle, Id is the pleasure principle and the Super Ego is the moral part. Sigismund Freud ) Kagome is missing the Super Ego therefore she has no morals and ethical restraints. or does she?

    I think you have done an amzing job writing this...

    Good luck
    i hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - Metis on August 14, 2006
    Ah, it's been a while. This is the type of fic where I don't know who to root for. Kag needs to be smacked/trained back into control, Sess will be controlling if not held in check. Hmm. Well, Bye bye Kikyou! I bet she'd have even less qualms about killing Naraku! YAY!
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