Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for Lost but not found!

By : Inugasha
  • From ANON - XxSangoxX *not signed in* on August 16, 2006
    god... this is illiterate if i have ever seen an illiterate story.

    i don't know where to start.

    One, spacing,
    Two, this reads like a BADLY thought out list.
    Three, You cannot even spell the character's name's right...
    Four, You have mannny grammical and composition formatting problems,.
    FIVE, a lot of this is sooo cliche and ooc.. that I couldn't even go on to the
    next chapter... I was afraid to.

    Try a bit harder, get to know your anime before you write about it.. and THANK you for not writing a lemon... i wouldnt subject anyone to that kind of torture, considering you probably like to write rawnchy and cliche scenes. IF you follwed episodes btw, you would know that miroku already asked sango to be his wife. in a matter of words... Anyway, i forgot what else i had to say, it's late and i'm tired.... But anyone who was enthralled by this story has some serious issues, in caseyou are unaware this site is for 18+.... So dear, Stay in school
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2006
    It is NARAKU. The dictionary, spell check and grammar check are your friend. You have all kinds of word usages wrong (like "know" instead of "no"). You should also use things like capitilization and punctuation. It also helps to put a blank line between paragraphs, but that is minor compared to the other problems.

    Do yourself a favor and get a beta. The story is pretty much unreadable as it is.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - unname on August 15, 2006
    Loved the storie

    Report Review

  • From ANON - Ashley on August 15, 2006
    I really love this storie it made me cry when I read it.I mean it.
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!