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Reviews for Dark Times

By : tsikinoodango
  • From ANON - madmiko on December 06, 2006
    Hey! You never came back to this one! I'd like to see more of this story!
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  • From PhoenixWolf on September 13, 2006
    I can hardly wait to find out what you ave in store for us here! I hope that you can work through your writers block. As for the battle ideas, I have no ideas. I haven't written a battle scene before, so I unfortunately, can't help you there. I wish that I could help.

    Update as soon as you can.
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  • From PhoenixWolf on September 07, 2006
    Hey! Can't wait for the next chapter! This is a hell of a story. Later.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 28, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - SesshomaruCrazy on August 26, 2006
    I like this story.. Pretty good so far... I know who her stalker is LOL.... Hurry and update plz.. Email when you update if possible... marisennet@yahoo.com i hope its soon...
    Take Care
    Mari
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  • From ANON - sublimetrickster on August 23, 2006
    Interesting idea, I like the cultural creativity you got going on here. Only down side is the spelling and grammar. I had a lot of trouble following the who's perspective you were writing from. You need a beta, someone else to read over it and correct it before you post it, cause it's almost impossible to follow without good imagination and insinct.
    Keepu up the hard work.
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  • From ANON - SesshomaruCrazy on August 21, 2006
    Pretty good so far.. I like the way the story is going.. Cant wait for the next chapter... Hurry and update plz..
    Mari
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  • From ANON - Darkus on August 21, 2006
    You have a very good idea here, but the execution needs a great deal of work. Get yourself a beta reader and learn how to use spell check. With some touch-ups, this could become one of the better stories posted on this site. As it stands now, it is one of the lesser ones available.


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  • From ANON - raven28 on August 21, 2006
    keep it up
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  • From ANON - raven28 on August 18, 2006
    it grat cant what to read more please up dite soon

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