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Reviews for Reversed Enchantment

By : EasternCat
  • From ANON - Alan's Only on August 29, 2006
    YES! you so have to contuie with this story!!! It is awsome!!! I love the plot and i belive you've hit the deamon Inuyasha on the head!!!!
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  • From ANON - drake220 on August 27, 2006
    i don't think the above reviews were 'flames' persay but rather fusturated inuyasha fans. The plot isn't that original and does rehash some of the more negative perceptions of the rosary. The story was fine. However, your style and punctuation needs to be fixed a bit. You have a couple of misspellings (check "poring" in the first paragraph. I believe it should be "pouring") and the unfortunate tendency to have run on sentences. It may be just the format you used to upload the document with but little things like that- bad spelling, grammatical errors and some trite lines ("oh no, i'm too late")- detract from the overall feel of the fic. While it is a good fic and will perhaps become more original as the plot develops, those mistakes are ruining it a bit.
    This isn't a flame. I'm just trying to point out some avenues for improvement.
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  • From ANON - Happy on August 27, 2006
    This is really good!

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  • From ANON - emily on August 21, 2006
    what no more?
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  • From ANON - Lissa on August 19, 2006
    I enjoyed this story so much. You HAVE to continue it. (Ignore the flames. The purpose of writing these stories are so that you can have control of these characters and explore the realm of "what if...". Continue with your creativity and have fun.)
    LOL :P
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  • From ANON - S-and-M Hanyou (too lazy to login) on August 19, 2006
    It is fan fiction, so you be all means have every right to write however you see fit. But it would be nice to have certain things taken into context.
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  • From ANON - Trampled_Rose on August 19, 2006
    And for those people who dont like the rosery part, ITS YOUR STORY! I think you have the free will to write what you want! ...thank you lol
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  • From ANON - Trampled_Rose on August 19, 2006
    WOW. Please continue! I love this story, I would have never thought! I really liked it!
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  • From ANON - XxSangoxX *not signed in* on August 19, 2006
    .... Um, yeah, the rosary? do you have any knowledge of what the whole purpose of the rosary REALLY is? this is so redundant. Granted you did write it very well, but First... Inuyasha would never rape Kagome, he would never do any of this... trying to redeem himself from a 'groping' accusation, doesnt really work when he attempts to and then STARTS to force her into mating.. therefore raping her. Just do a bit of ... study and research before you write something of this magnitude. There are far too many kagome 'rosary abuse' stories. It gets a tad overkill.
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  • From ANON - Sam on August 19, 2006
    What if Kagome looked him in the eyes and asked him about it .. do you reall love me? and when he says yes.. she says I love you in return and he changes. so there wont be hatred at the end of this

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2006
    OMG ... this is well written but ...
    ddamn

    how could inuyasha do that!
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  • From ANON - Vanguard on August 18, 2006
    Once again, another author has misinterpreted the use of the rosary as Kagome "abusing her power." Have you bothered to read the manga or even look at interviews where Takahashi-san gives her thoughts on the rosary? Or have you read too many bad fanfics where Kagome uses the "sit command" as if she's some sadistic, bi-polar dictater who loves to inflict pain on the "poor, innocent hanyou?" Please do your research, which doesn't include taking fanfic stories at face value, and understand the character's motivations for using the rosary unless you want you're characters to be completely OOC (and if that's the case, why not turn it into original fiction and drop the pretense of anime/manga names?).
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  • From ANON - Cloudy on August 18, 2006
    DANG IT!!! WHY THE HELL DID YOU STOP THERE???


    You better update soon or I well be all sad -laughs-

    Love how it going but make your chapters longer.

    Please?
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