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Reviews for Battle Cry

By : Rebeldedm
  • From ANON - fire_eyez on September 27, 2006
    GRRR!!! Kikyo makes me sooooo mad!!! ugh evil person..i enjoyed that chapter :-). keep it up! awesome job.
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  • From ANON - Danny Girl on September 26, 2006
    I love this story because it shows how much a baka
    Inuyasha is I think in this story him and Kikyou
    belonge together. He is selfish don't you think?
    he only thinks of his self in this story. I glad
    Sango smacked the hell out of him maybe that will
    rearrange the rocks in his head..Man,you have got
    to update this story it just Rocks!!!
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  • From ANON - Aleaha on September 26, 2006
    This is a critic, not a flame, I'll even give you my email sense the site blocks the emails of people not signed in. Miss_Marilyn69@yahoo.com.

    I stopped to give your story a try because the summery grabbed my attention. I think the idea of this is very good. Kagome being trapped in the feudal era after Inuyasha has chosen Kikyo has lot of potential. For example, it would be interesting to read about the role reversal that would come about from the situation. How would Kikyo react to having Inuyasha's sudden disappearances when he feels compelled to protect Kagome? The fact that Kagome's normal escape has been taken away. The potential for drama is huge.

    However it's a bit bothersome to read with the indentation. I understand that is how they teach you to write things with word in high school keyboarding, but it is much easier to read without them.

    In my own opinion, I feel the start was too fast. We go from finding out Inuyasha has gone off with Kikyo to Sango already thinking Kagome is dieing inside, in the space of two or three paragraphs.

    The beginning of this is a wonderful opportunity to grab our attention. When I read it I wanted to read more about why Inuyasha left, and why Kagome is stuck. After that I wanted to read about her feelings. If you really think about how you would feel in a similar situation, it might help you to elaborate on her state of mind.

    After spending the time to review this I'm even more enthused about the potential of this story. I have meant no ill will by righting this, but as the story is now I can't go on reading it. I hope your muse and beta help you to build this story to its potential.

    My name is Aleaha and here is my email again if you feel my review deserves a rant in retaliation: Miss_Marilyn69@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - inuyasha1357 on September 25, 2006
    Hey,
    Your fic left me with tears running down my face... it's amazing, and I absolutly loved it! I can't wait to see more of this fic... arigato, ja ne
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  • From Pucedragon on September 06, 2006
    I like it. . .Kagome has so much angst. . . .pleez o pleez update soon! *looks with sad puppy dog eyes*
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  • From ANON - Kagome18 on September 05, 2006
    Sam well this is very easy for me to answer well why don't i just write a chapter about it. Was the story good sam?
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  • From ANON - Sam on September 04, 2006
    Hey I have question.. oK Is Inuyasha mated? Why is Kikyou with him.. when he is still Hanyou she wont have him Hanyou..
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  • From ANON - Kagome on September 04, 2006
    Wow.. Very good! Keep it up. Poor Kagome! *Hugs* Inuyasha.. What have you gotten into now. LOL This story is worth alot more reviews than that! Come on people, don't be shy! *Cheers for kagome18*
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  • From Rebeldedm on September 01, 2006
    Glad yal peoples like my story though you guys aren't leaving enough reviews to get me motivated to do the other chapter how do I think I feel 1190 people hae read this review and only like 14 reviews ^-^. What's wrong with you? Review me people show sum love ^-~.
    Ha ha ha and read my other stories to lol :-) i'll really apricate it or how ever you spell it ~*-*~ aight well I'm out for now see ya tommorow. $-$ caching I'm going shopping saturday yo get an Inuyasha movie the 1st one since i already have 3 & 4 lol well aight people sweet dreams have fun and take care peace ^__^.
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  • From ANON - unknown on August 31, 2006
    wow i like ur story alot i say kagome beat kikyo's ass
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  • From Rebeldedm on August 31, 2006
    ha ha ha no Inuyasha isn't fucking Kikyo lol. Nope they were just whipering or whatever seductively yup. Yea you'll be happy when the end comes he which is when I hhave time since I got rotten school. Love the fact ya like my story. Yay I got 1 more review I want more. Lol spread the word and tell peoples to review. ~*-*~ or something ^-^.
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  • From ANON - freezingcold on August 31, 2006
    I really feel bad for Kagome, and who else wnats to weigh Kikyo down with rocks and toss her in a lake? Man, even in her dreams Kagome is suffering. Though something got me curious, is Inuyasha fucking Kikyo? I just want to know.
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  • From Rebeldedm on August 31, 2006
    Lol.... so far you like the new chapter I posted? Yea I'm working on it since I got school and all that shit it's going to take awhile to get this done. *Sigh* ~*-*~ yup anyways lol glad you liked it ^-^ I love your reviews sam they're so ****in funny lol any ways people review me please! :) humm don't see any new ones :( yal broke my heart :`( . ^-~
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  • From ANON - Sam on August 31, 2006
    I was SOOOO close to castraighting Inuyasha with A RUSTY SPORK!!!!!!!!! He must have smelt her or felt her aura.. but then it was a dream so Inuyasha gets to keep his manhood for the time being.. but if I were him.. I would watch my back :) mmmmwwwaaahhhhaaaahhhhaa
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  • From ANON - fire_eyez on August 30, 2006
    this story is great! it made me really sad and cry for kagome..but ppllleeeaaassee update soon!! i want to read more..maybe it will get a little happier?..lol. but i like your story. keep it up!
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