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Reviews for Eyes of a Hunter

By : Vague
  • From ANON - mrs sesshy on November 19, 2006
    sooo intense~!!! can't wait for your update... always love the way you made it so HOT!
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  • From ANON - Cancan227 on November 19, 2006
    Awwww Man!!!
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  • From ANON - mel on November 19, 2006
    A great chapter. A few spelling errors, but the plot more than made up for it. Please keep going, and update soon.
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  • From ANON - winry on November 19, 2006
    omg! thank you so much for writing i almost thought you were not going to write again and i began to panic* where is he? he needs to write !* yeah good job you should have another chase scene except a bit longer
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  • From ANON - Slightly_Sinful on November 18, 2006
    Really great job...I absolutely love it
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  • From ANON - Angie on November 18, 2006
    OMG!!!... update ASAP!..damn you ...leaving huge cliffies!..gar
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  • From ANON - rowdycat on November 18, 2006
    oh goodie!!! i was so excited last night when i saw you'd posted more chapters that i sat up until 3 am reading them! i thought they were terrific, though too short. then i went back to re-read them this afternoon, saw you'd re-written them and they are EVEN BETTER!!!! i love your story, it has a strong plot, good characterizations and the sex is hot too! seriously, you are a good storyteller. and proof of that was how i wanted to kick Shiori's butt for getting Kagome drunk; friends just don't do that to friends. she put Kagome in terrible danger...oops! there i go again, it IS just a story.

    the only criticism i have is purely technical, the tenses of your verbs are often incorrect: using present tense instead of past tense or future tense. or using the wrong word, it sounds like the word you want but it means something totally different. [like the time a friend was beating himself up over a stupid grade and i told him not to castrate himself over it when i meant to say castigate. too embarrassing. yeah, my buds forgot that real quick.] it's a very common error; i know, i spent a semester as a TA in freshman english. besides, writing is NOT easy. i used to write a lot, but writer's block has to be the most painful experience...it totally sucks! And it takes time. it gets even harder when you try to have a life. Well, i've gone on too long. i just wanted to let you know how really good your work is and how much i am enjoying it. please please please give us more...
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  • From ANON - Metis on November 18, 2006
    Ah, back again I see. I hope she really lets loose on him.... after they've been separated a bit. They both need to come to some realizations. I wonder if he'll accuse Yasha, but I also don't want the immature pup to know about her. (sigh) I don't like Hanyou. Too insecure and chaotic.... but so it goes. Thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - AIdeen on November 18, 2006
    Oh my gosh!!! Ahh!! Soo good!! Please up-date soon!! I have to know what happens next!!!
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  • From DawnaSama on November 18, 2006
    Dont worry, as I said. I dont like to see a good story stop right in the middie of a good part. update soon


    Dawna Sama
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  • From ANON - Tussi on November 18, 2006
    good chapter!!
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  • From ANON - DOG MAN on November 18, 2006
    DAMN GIRL!!! YOU GOT SKILLS!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! IT'S VERY EROTIC IT MAKES ME WANNA GRAB MY GIRL!!! UPDATE SOONER PLEASE!! OH BY THE WAY I WANNA THANK YOU MY GIRL MY PRACTILY DROOLING AFTER SHE READ THIS STORY IT WAS PRETTY FUN THAT NIGHT IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN HURRY AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SEE YA LATER
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  • From ANON - INUMISTERS_BOYFRIEND on November 18, 2006
    YOUR lovely your amazing i applaud you (clapps repeatedly) Amazing as my girl said love your story LOVE ACTING IT OUT but sometimes she gets to tired so we haven't acted it all out yet but UPDATE SOON LOVE Ya
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  • From ANON - INUMISTER_GIRL on November 18, 2006
    I absolutely love your story its spanking ooooh will they get back together will she see Inuyasha oh gosh I can't wait my boyfriend loves this story to OR he mostly likes acting it out you see he died his hair silver like 8 months ago in honner of sess and my hair is black hes kinky but i love him no hurry and update my boyfriend says so to no hurry so we can act it out some more love ya INUMISTER_GIRL
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  • From ANON - madmiko on November 18, 2006
    Wow! What a powerful, erotic story! I sure hope you write more of this SOON!! It's fantastic! You really surprised me with the last couple of chapters, too. I was thinking this was just a whole other setting for these characters. To find out the travels in the past would come into play, well, WOW! Can't wait to see how you have Sesshoumaru find out she didn't know it was him. Will he confront Inuyasha? And she doesn't even know he's alive. Really can't wait for that part of the story to be cleared up. Obviously, he didn't die like she thought, and he must not be with kikyou or Sess wouldn't think he had promised to marry her, huh? SO much good story to come! Please update soon!!
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