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Reviews for Eyes of a Hunter

By : Vague
  • From ANON - Sweetcakes on December 31, 2006
    Okay...let's try that again. I think I hit the wrong key last time. Darn it!! Anywho.

    You did't dissapoint Missy! I'm happy with the way it ended. I didn't see any loose ends or rushed explainations. I LOVE IT!! I do have one request...finish Photograph?

    *****If any one reads the review for this...I encourage you to read Vauge's other story Photograph! It has extrodinary potential and could EASILY be another AWSOME story like Eyes of a Hunter! Trust me, you'll love that one too!*****

    I'm going to be following your stories, so don't be surprised to see my name pop up in future reviews, Your writting is excellent. You're ability to suck the reader into the character's surroundings is astounding. I could envision the woods in the park, Sessy's office, the cafe in England, and Sesshy's kitchen. My only thing is the ever present spelling issues, and using the right word but with the "other" spelling (ie; right=write, here=hear).

    You finished your first Fan Fic (dancing around doing the happy dance), now it's time to finish the other ones. You've got a gift that has lead(sp) to a loyal fan base.

    Oh...and I'll try to lay off the spankings in the future, but still reserve the right to be President of the Spank Vauge Fan Club. ^_^

    Hope to see more awsome works in the future Vauge-sama.

    Your loyal follower,

    Sweetcakes
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  • From ANON - girl on December 31, 2006
    love it
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  • From ANON - Sweetcakes on December 31, 2006
    Vague,


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  • From ANON - Snowfall on December 31, 2006
    *sniffle* I'm such a sap. Unlike other stories, when Sesshoumaru confessed his love for Kagome, it felt right. *sniffle* Okay, so you've ruined me. I would have never read a romance novel and I think that this story comes pretty damn close. As always, your lemon was absolutely exquisite. And I don't use that term lightly. The ending was a nice touch. The children have a father and there is a new child. All warm fuzzies here.

    Congratulations on finally finishing a story! That is one hell of an accomplishment. So many don't know how to do that. I had a very difficult time finishing my first story and it took some time for me to figure out how to do it. Awesome job!

    Now, you are truly going to hate me. If you could, please write one last chapter. We have our sympathy for Kagome, but not for Sesshoumaru. You have left us wondering what happened when he went to see Inuyasha. We did not feel his anguish in his search for her. Also, the problem with Shiori has not been dealt with. Kagome is a very forgiving person. Yet, because of the importance of Kagome and the children nearly dying, Shiori needs to be made aware of the part she played in it. Kagome and Sesshoumaru need to confront her. Call it wrapping up loose ends. And there could be one final hunt reminiscent of the first, bringing us full circle.

    Do you hate me yet? ^_^

    Loved the story, excellent job, and again, congratulations on finishing it.

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - Demonlordlover on December 31, 2006
    Loved this story. I appreciate any fic where Sesshomaru and Kagome come together but yours had a special combination of steamy lemons, drama, and finally (not to mention most importantly) a happy ending. LOL...Hope to see some more soon!
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  • From ANON - madmiko on December 31, 2006
    Nicely done! Great wrap-up to a great story. I really enjoyed it. And I'm looking forward to more of your next one. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - SesshomaruCrazy on December 31, 2006
    OHHHHHHHHHHH what an awesome story. This was a great story to read.. I really enjoyed it.. Iam sad that it came to an end. But at some point it must. Glad you finished it.
    I hope that you will write more stories.. I truly enjoyed the eading.. It was sweet..
    Well take Care.. And here's my email so you can email me with other stories you will write later on.. And thanks for the great story to read..
    marisennet@yahoo.com
    Hope your holidays were good one's.. Enjoy the New Year..
    Mari
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  • From ANON - amhor56 on December 31, 2006
    Wonderful ending. Loved the last line. Loved the lemon. And I loved the story. I'll be looking forward to your new story. Oh by the way, I can not believe Shiori! Ugh! I was so mad at her for doing that! But you had me reasured with this line "If not for those years apart I would not have appreciated the depth of my feelings as much and though it hurt I am glad that it happened as I have you now in my arms. I will love you until my dying day.”

    Damn, now that's what a call a line.

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  • From DragonZero on December 31, 2006
    That so sweet *Cry* I'm always a big sap for a die hard romance. This is a great romance. You could have ended it so many ways but you choose a happy fairy tale ending.

    Happy NewYears to you.
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  • From ANON - lala_land on December 31, 2006
    your story is amazing, it started out as a sex slave then to love i love this kinds of story !!!! make a sequal if you can . ^_^
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  • From ANON - Badgrl74 on December 30, 2006
    I like the names you chose for them. Not sure what they mean, but they seem to suit them. I'm so glad you updated, I missed this story!
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  • From ANON - L.L. Crush on December 29, 2006
    xD First time I reviewing your story (please excuse, it's also the first time I'm reading your story) and I wanted to tell you what an awesome job you're doing, but you left it at such a cliff hanger that I want to punch you in the face. ">>

    Seriously though, this story is amazing. Keep on writing!!
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  • From ANON - Pastel on December 29, 2006
    Fantastic chapter. I love it.
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  • From ANON - [Isabel]Fucking[Rage] on December 29, 2006
    OMG! I love your story. It's the best I've read in a while! I had started reading the story a long time ago but my internet cut out so i lost it. When I found it I was estatic. Keep the good work comming. :D
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  • From mrskgoodman on December 28, 2006
    OH YEAH!! Its getting good now!!
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