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By : Vague
  • From ANON - madmiko on December 20, 2006
    Yay! Loved getting to read another chapter! Now I'm wondering if only a few powerful youkai remember, does that mean Inuyasha does not? And ew! He's married? Kikyou? Does he not remember Kagome? Because he would have known what time period she lived in. Can't wait to find out in Sess and Inu's conversation. Can't wait for Sess to find out Kagome almost died. I really like the way you had her save herself instead of him doing it. Baby boy name: I have to recommend Raiden - thunder god. Wasn't their first time together during a thunderstorm? Just a thought! I sure hope you get a chance to write more soon!!
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  • From ANON - Sweetcakes on December 20, 2006
    I'm still 13 years older than you young'un spankins are soo possible, especially when you reminde me of my kids! And, you don't like your cookies taken away hummm? It's the cookies or the cheesecake take your pick, buy you can't have both! Personally, I say to hell with the cookies, someones gonna get a but kickin for touching the cheesecakes.

    Ok, on with the review.

    Finally!! Inuyasha makes his appearance in the story, I can't wait for Sesshy to get a huge dose of guilt for being STUPID!!! Looks like I'm going to have to re-read the story over again...again. I thought that Kagome had already been "deflowered" before Sesshy's involvement. Oh well.

    You know, your doing really well, you still make spelling mistakes. Let me know if you want someone to review your chapters for spelling errors. I'd be more than happy to volunteer.

    Have a Happy Holidays Vague!
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  • From ANON - StarletAngel on December 20, 2006
    LOVE this story! Your prank was hilarious, btw! Keep up the wonderful writing!
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  • From ANON - Liquorish on December 20, 2006
    Don't take so long to update! Your story is really good!
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  • From ANON - Tussi on December 20, 2006
    good chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Tenshi Youkai on December 20, 2006
    You finally updated!!! I am so Happy!!!!! OK So... I really like the way you have handled this fic. It keeps popping into my head at the most inconvienent times. Especially the scene in the club where Kagome is dancing with Sesshoumaru in bliss and her friends are conspiring to get her away from him. and that scene in the park, and that scene -- well ok-- so I really like the whole thing. It was very hot!

    I really hope that you plan the happy ending for the couple. being a Single mother is a LOT harder that it looks.

    I really like the way you had Kagome-Miko talk to Kagome-herself. I enjoyed the fact that you made her tell herself to remember.

    I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. I do hope that we may have a little sex in it, even if it is just a fantasy of somebodies.

    Oh, and by the way, you are more than old enough to be spanked in punishment(and reward). And Don't worry, if the spanking was promised to you, you will enjoy it!!! ;) trust me on this one, okay.

    Tenshi Youkai
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  • From ANON - Patty on December 20, 2006
    Nice, I hope Sess suffers for awhile, jeje, if it's a boy i suggest Kotaru, i've always imagine Sess and kags son like Kotaro Higuchi (just physically) from Pita-Ten.
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  • From ANON - Airy on December 20, 2006
    I really would like it if Sessh had a girl, but if its a boy thats o.k. too. I'm not very good with names. Maybe Sesshinmaru, just an idea.
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  • From ANON - rowdygirl on December 20, 2006
    1. cat or girl depends on which personality is in control ^/^ *_*

    2. ur wrong we CAN spank you -> don't make US go there

    3. if u weren't such a good writer, creating believable, conflicted characters, inviting us to care about them, and an intriguing plot that hooked so many of us, you wouldn't have your readers getting all pissyfaced about your little trick [which WAS funny, but NEITHER of US will EVER admit that! (sesshoumaru is not the only one with a stick somewhere)], nor would your readers be whining for more chapters. so that one is on you

    4. baby names for boys??? how about monkeyface? monkala i think is the spelling. [i think it's yiddish but my yiddish isn't so good and what i know best i've been told not to use because it is very bad (as in foul)]

    5. i love this chapter, but it isn't long enough. it doesn't give us enough story development and we wouldn't HAVE this problem if a certain author would give up her life and just write stories for us, but i love this chapter! especially when her miko comes out and explains to kagome what's going on and she decides to fight for her baby. however, i've been starving for more chapters and beggars can't be choosers so i will take what you choose to give. it is what it is.

    6. i don't read papers anymore either. and there's a certain macdonalds commercial that always made me cry...my sister infers that it is pathetic and laughs.

    7. ur still a brat, but i like that in a person.
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  • From ANON - Anny on December 19, 2006
    good more more more
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  • From ANON - Reka on December 19, 2006
    Yeah. "Kusanagi" can also work as either a boy or a girl's name. The myth of the Kusanagi sword is as famous in Japan as the myth of the Excalibur sword, King Arthur's sword is in Bretain. Besides, KU-SA-NA-GI has four syllables, just like SES-SHOU-MAR-RU, I-NU-YA-SHA and their father I-NU-TAI-SHO, so it would kinda follow the tradition if the baby were to have that name.
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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on December 19, 2006
    WHAT?? INUYASHA IS ALIVE?! THAT SON OF A BITCH IS ALIVE AND HE DIDN'T EVEN TRY TO LOOK FOR KAGOME?! I don't care if he doesn't love her like a lover, she's still one of his best friends, why in hell didn't he try to contact her? The asshole!

    *breath in* breath out* breath in* breath out*

    Okay, I'm calm now...

    Baby Boy's names? How about "Shiro" or "Shiroi" (they mean white, or light, I think) or "Sunichi"? Perhaps "Shido" or "Shugo"? Or "Kusanagi" (it's the name of one of the Three Imperial Regalia or Three Legendary Divine Objects in Japan: the jewel, the mirror and the sword named Kusanagi... I can see Sesshoumaru's son having the name of the a legendary mighty sword in japanese mythology).
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  • From PhoenixWolf on December 19, 2006
    *jaw drops to the floor* Wow! Did someone not wake up on the right side of the bed that morning?

    I am very happy that Kagome has decided to fight. I am also happy that she has regained her memories of the past. Now what is going to happen? Sesshy has to find out sooner or later about the pup/child.

    Now about baby names, hmm ... How about Phoenix (hee hee), as in the child will rise from the ashes to become a flame. Or Flame, Brooke, River, Rain. Just a few suggestions.

    PS, thanks for the plug. I am tickled that you like my story.

    Until we meet again.
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  • From ANON - SJ on December 19, 2006
    wow
    Sesshoumaru's going to know everything now. Anyway, great story and it's developing very well. I'm really sorry to point this out but there's one inconsistancy. In this chapter, Kagome said she had "given her virginity to him." But in one of your earlier chapters she said, or at least implied, that she had sex before, just not for a long time. Other than that, I love what happening so far and can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - angie..who? on December 19, 2006
    ahh a cliffy!.. ugg i sooo want to know what sess says to inu.. grr! how could you?

    ... i guess that means you'll update soon....plllease?
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