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Reviews for Eyes of a Hunter

By : Vague
  • From ANON - szaugglaughs on December 19, 2006
    I really liked how you portrayed inuyasha in the last scene there, his brief meeting with Sesshoumaru was my favorite part of the chapter.

    names? I've always liked the sound of Minoru :-)
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on December 19, 2006
    Yes! You updated! Alright, Kagome and the baby live! And her family accepts her. Ooooh, is Sesshoumaru going to find out that Kagome had been brainwashed to not remember? Will he believe Inuyasha that there was no big plan? I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter!

    Heheh. You answered a question for me. I wondered if capital 'I's would mess up the italics html. *giggles* Now I know that it does! Glad it was you that discovered it and not me. LOL I have enough problems as it is! Can I make fun of you now? LOL ^_^

    Snow
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  • From ANON - Tamara on December 12, 2006
    Don't even threaten with something like that. That was just mean. I'm not trying to flame ya, but damn, why did you do that? I wonder how long it's going to take him to figure out that she's in the hospital and that he's the only one that can really get her to fight for life? And besides, he REALLY needs to figure out how to control his desire, lust, whatever you want to call this hunger of his. I mean it's good that he had the mind to feel bad about it but he didn't have to keep going. I so knew that she was going to get pregnant. But anyway, I have come to request that you continue this amazing twist of fate that leaves this guy far less intelligent than he was in the show. I like that. I find it a little strange that he didn't recognize her scent sooner. And shouldn't the boss know like everything about his employees, no matter how many there are. I mean, it's the mighty Sesshomaru, knower of wverything. Meaning that he would hav enoticed her name among the list of people on his payroll list. I don't know.
    But you said that reviews are required to urge you on in the continuation of your masterpiece and you can be assured that with every new chapter that I read you shall recieve another review from me. No matter how annoyed you become with them. Unless you send me an email to discourage me, then I'll stop. Here I ramble and carry on, keeping you from writing. Sorry. I'll stop doing that too. Back to my point; Please continue writing and not stop until the story is complete. Not the 'I'm sick of this story and so I'll stop'. No, it has to be complete with an ending good enough to be from you. If the story is any judge than it will end up with a strange, intriguing twist that will leave us(readers) begging for a sequal.
    I may end up loosing the internet in a little bit, so you may want to keep going if you want a to keep this follower.

    So your favorite Inuyasha character coupling is Sesshomaru/Kagome right. Whould it be unfair to ask that you write other stories as well? I mean after you've finished this one, of course. Why did you stop writing in The Photograph? I got that picture that was done for it and it is also great, doesn't really compare with the story, but it's good. I left a couple reviews there too.
    Thank you for reading and please obey my request. (OMG that didn't sound right but I didn't really know what to say. Yeah, um... good bye.
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  • From ANON - Clara on December 12, 2006
    That was a great Trick, i laughed at least. Keep going keep going all i gotta say
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  • From ANON - Tana-san on December 11, 2006
    Put 2&2 together Shiori, You've got to get Sesshoumaru with her! A very powerful youkai...Kagome having a meeting with the boss...go, girl, go!!! I cried when you first said she died...not funny! But I'm glad you amended that. Sorry you're wanting to end this already, I am really enjoying the drama.
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  • From ANON - mrs sesshy on December 11, 2006
    you're so evil but i love your story, someone needs some spanking!
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  • From ANON - Albaster on December 10, 2006
    I love the story...god I hope that other one didn't go through I wasn't done typing >.
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  • From ANON - LunarEmbrace on December 10, 2006
    You have a true give for writing. Keep up the great work! I love this story.
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  • From ANON - Metis on December 10, 2006
    Yay, you're back! And mean! Don't let the innocents (cough) who /didn't flame you be caught in the backlash. (pouts but then perks up) Thanks for the indulgence of proper terminology. Looking forward to tort- (cough) I mean reviewing this story again. I know it can be a pain if you lose interest but please don't give up!
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  • From ANON - Slightly_Sinful on December 10, 2006
    Dirty dirty trick........i almost cried anywayz good chappie update soon k
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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on December 10, 2006
    LMAO that was priceless! Even though you seemed to have a deathwish, but still hilarious.

    YAY! She hasn't lost the baby yet, there's still hope, sin't there?! I really hope they both turn out fine! Why do the doctors say Kagome's trying to save the baby while her body's trying to kill it? Weird... Is it because of her miko powers? And I'm really dumbstruck at the way people know about youkai and talk of them so lightly in the future, I'd never seen anything like that in a canon fic before.

    Hope you update soon!


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  • From ANON - rowdygirl on December 10, 2006
    YOU are a LITTLE STINKER!!!!! yes, i know i'm yelling at you! you deserve it! you're fake start to the chapter had me eeping and ohing all over the place. i was almost in tears!!!! BRAT!

    of course, the real chapter did have me crying. [don't get excited, i cry over hallmark commercials.] Any road, how are you going to bring them together now, cuz you gotta. i understand your desire to end this quickly, i had the feeling that it was originally just a light piece of fluff, not more than just a few chapters, but your skill at weaving a story outdid you and you found yourself with a real story on your hands; with demanding readers too. aren't we a pain in the ass? but i have the impression that you're kind of rushing it to the end and that does no credit to the beginning of the tale, which was so well written. i do the same thing too. i guess this is the part that requires discipline, maybe writing down how you want the story to end and then going back over it to flesh it out. that has worked for me in the past. the brothers grimm had it easy, they just had to slap "and they lived happily ever after." at the end of their stories and boom! it was done! the truth is there are no happy endings; when you find that special person with whom you wish to share your time and space, it's more of a happy beginning because the adventure is just beginning...

    gotta go, i talk too much. i love your writing but you're still a brat! [lol]
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  • From ANON - mel on December 10, 2006
    And here I thought the cliffhanger for the last chapter was bad. It just keeps getting better, and I'm still hoping for happily ever after. You're still doing a great job, so I can't wait til the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - angie..who? on December 10, 2006
    haha omg wow i actually thought that kagome died... well haha this was a interesting chapt. keep updating it!
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  • From ANON - AIdeen on December 10, 2006
    Ah, they can't let her and the baby die!! Oh, Sess has to save them!!!
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