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Reviews for The lost Kin

By : paula552
  • From paula552 on September 01, 2006
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  • From ANON - Fred on August 30, 2006
    If you want (note the spelling) more reviews, the learn how to use a dictionary, and what it means to spell check and grammar check your work. When you have post a REAL story that is readable, then perhaps you will get reviews more readers. Your poorly spelled summary is a turn off right from the start.
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  • From paula552 on August 30, 2006
    just whant to see if i had any reviews
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  • From XxSangoxX on August 29, 2006
    I got partially through the first chapter... wow

    very confusing... sOOOO many mistakes I don't know where to start.
    lets just mention your spelling... format, and grammer usage.

    you need to space the dialogue, you need to at least use partially proper
    spelling.... I don't know, maybe you get more hits that way. Beta's are
    always a good thing to go for. You can find plenty of them on here.

    you'll be pleased with the outcome if you only change the spacing situation.

    You might want to add an OOC warning... being as Inuyasha is the ONLY
    one who would say fuck you.
    anywho... try to lessen the confusion that you have instilled in here okay?


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