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Reviews for Timeless Love

By : TheRealHotaru
  • From LdyMoon on October 06, 2006
    hey there the real hotaru thanks for your reviews I enjoyed reading them. I laughed when you said you reached the last chapter and was like "NOOOO!" I'm happy your enjoying it.

    Now for your story. It was cool of Shippo to help his friend see that she needed to move on and be happy on her own. And I'm glad that Kouga didn't beat the snot out of him for making her realize the way he did. I like the fact that Kouga has someone who knows how it feels to have an unrequainted love. They should be happy together.


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  • From ANON - niimo nymp on October 06, 2006
    This is cute are you sure you want this story on this sight maybe you'd be better off writing this story on fanfiction.net instead where is the real stuff??? I mean cmon!!! This is so waffy. I didn't even feel a flicker. It's cute but I'm not hot for Shippo or your story.
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  • From ANON - Miroku's dream on October 06, 2006
    That was so sweet and naughty of Shippo to help Rei to move on. I have to say for the first part of this chapter why a roach? Such an ugly animal I was creeped out when I read it I was checking my doors before going to bed,.

    Shippo in control can be a dangerous thing.

    good job

    Carmen
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  • From XxSangoxX on October 06, 2006
    awwe, that's cute.
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  • From ANON - baybeegurl on October 05, 2006
    This is good, update soon!
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  • From LdyMoon on October 04, 2006
    Chapter five was a nice chapter. I can't wait to see what Chiyoko is going to say when she realizes the teacher is her bestfriend Rei. And I liked how the bells rang when Shippo realized that "oops his secret was told." I also enjoyed the confrontation between Rei and Shippo when she confessed what was really going on.

    Overall it was a very good chapter. I'd say that being that this is your first fic it's moving smoothly and you should be proud.

    ldymoon
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  • From ANON - Dart0444 on October 02, 2006
    Great story. Can't Wait for next chapter.
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  • From ANON - baybeegurl on September 23, 2006
    I was surprised to see that Yori is the mystry man. lol, I liked that shippo tricked the guy that was funny. undate soon.

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  • From XxSangoxX on September 22, 2006
    haha I don't know why i decided i didn't want to read this anymore.

    i like this story. I think it's mean of shippo to do... but i understand completely.

    though loving someone also means the ability to let go as bad as it hurts.

    too bad shippo wasn't the mystery man.
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  • From ANON - Miroku's Dream on September 21, 2006
    Shippo is bad he's a bad man. Using good Yori's good intentions for his own means but hes so cute with it. Good chapter looking forward to reading the next.

    Carmen
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  • From ANON - foxykitten on September 21, 2006
    update soon its a good story.
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  • From ANON - ldymoonluvsinuyasha (nsi) on September 21, 2006
    Well, we all know that Chiyoko is going to be Shippo's so....it was a devious fox plan for Shippo to send away Yori to go to Disney Land with that sick little girl. Shippo is so evil. He didn't care not one red cent on the sick girl, he just wanted his competition out of the way. I thought that was funny.

    Again, it was a good chapter. Well written and enjoyable. KIU.
    see ya next chapter.

    ldymoon
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  • From ANON - Who_do_you_do on September 18, 2006
    Great story. I really like the plot so far. Updated soon.
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  • From Dunbarbalooie2 on September 11, 2006
    Very good story. Not as many regularly updating authors still here, so it's good to see one. Can't wait to read more update soon please.
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  • From LdyMoon on September 10, 2006
    This was another good chapter, I can't wait to see Inuyasha's face when he realizes that he fought Shippo and couldn't kill him. I'm looking forward to see what he has to say to his best friend. I liked how Inuyasha told Shippo to get with Rei so that their relationship wouldn't have to change and I like how Shippo responded.

    All in all this was a good chapter and I'm looking forward to reading more.
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