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Reviews for Timeless Love

By : TheRealHotaru
  • From XxSangoxX on September 04, 2006
    WOW, this is crazy. Good job with the explainations. Am I to assume that the guy she later developed a crush on and saved herwas in fact shippo?

    awwwww you thanked me in ur Authors note!!! that's so sweet! u are the very first. lol
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  • From ANON - sesshy69 on August 30, 2006
    It's cute update soon
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  • From XxSangoxX on August 29, 2006
    Wow, in spite of your constant spelling errors and format issues, I really love the idea that you are playing out in this story. It is VERY good, i became genuinely enthralled. I hope that you will finish this soon and keep everyone updated.

    you might want to use some spacing when different people talk... just a suggestion, it DOES make it easier to read. I love how protective Inuyasha is of his little girl. . . do they have another child? that's what i kind of gathered, just wanted to make sure.
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  • From ANON - Mirokus dream on August 29, 2006
    I luv the angst btween Shippo and Chiyoko? Did I spell it right andyway I luv tht she tells him all about a crush she has and it just eating him up inside just eating him up but he's trying to be supportive I luv the bus ti was halirious!!!! I love the tail I think it's so sexy does that make me a perv??? I'm a perv arent I damn it I'm a sick person @___@ ! How can I like tails on a guy!!! Maybe it's a fake detachable one yeah now I'm not so sick forgive my rambling adn arguing with oneself.

    Good stroy update soon I'd like to read more

    Carmen
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  • From LdyMoon on August 29, 2006
    oh, i was so excited to see you writing a story that I forgot some of the other points i wanted to make.
    I love the cycle thing, where he has these cycles way before he's supposed to so that he could catch up with Chiyoko. And two...Inuyasha hurt Shippo!!! I know it's necessary for the story but ow that hurt me.

    Good job.

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  • From LdyMoon on August 28, 2006
    Hey there you I know you, you always left a great review on BG. Good to see you writing!!! ^__^ Welcome aboard!!!

    Ok, now that I've given you proper welcome, I believe this is the first fic that I've read that mainly focuses on Shippo's love intrest!!! Yay you!!!! It has a very good beginning, you caught my attention too with the title I always have a hard time coming up with those things I don't know how real authors do it. To have everything about the story in a few words its too hard :P I'm so happy that Kagome made that wish, I was like oh no, how are they going to wait 500 years!!!! And then Shippo making that kind of promise and Inuyasha getting mad it was so like him to be overly protective of what he holds dearest.

    Can't wait to read more so update soon k!

    ldymoon
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  • From ANON - who_do_you_do on August 28, 2006
    "WOW" this stoy is really good. Please update soon.
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