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Reviews for Nonchalant Observations

By : ShizukaDkAngel
  • From ANON - Spazz on September 05, 2006
    Hi, Well let me tell you that you are doing a great job I really like is so far. I just finished reading Chap 3 and I can't wait for you to update. Keep up the great work.

    -spazz-
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  • From ANON - Kero on September 04, 2006
    Thanks again for the wonderful chapter. I simply adore your work. Thanks for the little post at the beginning of the chapter.

    *Shudders* you paired Kikyo with Hojo? EW, that is sick.

    “He wanted to be able to walk away from anything--unscathed.”

    InuYasha is such a stupid prick. No offence to anyone who likes him. But, what kind of man who has been in a relationship for over five years says that? INUYASHA how selfish is that? How could he say that? Not to mention that Kagome would probably give InuYasha the world if she could.

    And yet he sits there and says that shit about her. *Mocking voice* I don’t want commitment. Bastard that is all you are I hope someone castrates you InuYasha.

    And yeah InuYasha, Miroku is going to propose to Sango. And what are you going to do? Leave Kagome high and dry. Ha I hope she ruins you *maniacal laugh*. You know I never expected Kanna to be against Naraku. I always though Kagura to be against him.

    I love how you said that Naraku’s greatest weakness is his heart. That was actually something I considered when I watch InuYasha. Some people might not see Naraku like that, only as a heartless bastard.

    Well anyways, this was a good chapter. I can’t wait to see what happens in the next. I will wait for it. You have a wonderful talent and creativity.

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  • From ANON - Kagome18 on September 04, 2006
    Intresting very intresting. Keep it up... I'm not logged on dur lol.
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  • From ANON - raven28 on September 04, 2006
    it was grat keep it up
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  • From ANON - Kero on September 02, 2006
    Great chapter this story is going really good so far. I like how you describe everything, it makes it better for the readers to understand and you’re doing a good job at it. I am very relieved that Rin is still alive. I was hoping that she wasn’t going to die I love her she is so cute.

    Creating the mark that allowed her to live all these years was very creative. I also like how you compare things to one another like:

    “Where Sesshoumaru’s character radiated coldness that could rival the Antarctic”

    Also, I think that Sesshoumaru would be an excellent poker player. With his coldness and cold demeanor and his quick tactics and strategies he could…would, win a poker game anytime he would ever play.

    Superficial friends, yeah I have a few of those. Don’t like them to much and want to kill them sometimes. Oh My God, I loved what Kagome said to Sesshoumaru. He is so Narcissistic and arrogant. I think his ego is the size of the planet and then some.

    It was fucking hilarious.

    Uh Oh InuYasha going to a strip club, is Kikyo a striper that he goes to see? This isn’t going to turn out good is it?

    Anyway, great story you have to keep writing I can’t wait for the next chapter. This is such a great story I really love it. I am glad that Kagome is miko; let me guess she has the Shikon Jewel in her body or something like that. *Laughs manically* that would be so awesome.

    Clan of Mikos? I laughed really hard when I heard that. Problem just me, but it sounded like some freaky tribe or something. All though it was well described and written. I loved it…clan of mikos *cracks up laughing*.

    Anyways, can’t wait to see what happens hope the next chapter comes fast.

    Bi

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  • From ANON - raven28 on September 02, 2006
    it was grat keep it up
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  • From ANON - raven28 on September 01, 2006
    its grat can't waht to read more

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  • From ANON - Kero on August 31, 2006
    Absolutely wonderful. I couldn’t believe what I read. This is truly a very enchanting story. I love the whole Kagome working as an under cover detective for a police station. You have a unique talent for writing and I simply loved reading this.

    Did you create that scroll of the Shikon Jewel? If you did that was really good and well written. I have a sneaking suspicion that InuYasha is going to do something or betray Kagome. Well that and the fact that this is a Sesshoumaru and Kagome archive.

    Regardless I hope you continue on with your story. I am defiantly intrigued and I can’t wait for the update. This is such a great story, I love the whole thing. I never really thought of Miroku as the geek type. I suppose his …interesting wisdom in the series would portray that scenario in this story.

    Anyways, I do how ever hope Kagome isn’t going to be one of those girls who is helpless. No offence to anyone who uses and makes Kagome act that way. I like it when Kagome has a sense of direction and is able to fight.

    Naraku that sick bastard. I can’t wait to see what happens to him next. I love twisted stories where Naraku is destroyed in the gorsiest ways. I am kind of a sadistic person and love watching horror, but having a happy ending as well.

    Again this was such a great read. I can’t wait until you update once again I truly look forward to it.

    Bi

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