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Reviews for Room Service

By : PhoenixWolf
  • From ANON - Angel Dust on September 19, 2006
    I read through the reviews and I got to say I realy loved that "Pleased to serve in every way" That was pure genus! But as for my name how about "My dirty little secret!" or "Going into the deep end"! And hey if you don't like any of my names its alright no hard feelings, just trying to help! Nice work though, up date soon!

    ~Love me tender~
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  • From ANON - jamie on September 19, 2006
    I think your story is fascinating, and don't let anyone tell you different. Up date soon, I would realy like to know Sesshomaru's reaction to it being Inuyasha, or who ever you have from her past! Good Luck! And stay strong!
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  • From ANON - kawaii-miko on September 18, 2006
    awww how sweet sess knows wat to say in this flic however you came up with this is really good your a really good writer
    UPDATE SOON CANT WAIT!!!!!1111
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 18, 2006
    My vote is Room Serviced because I think that Unexpected Desire has been done and Hotel Romance sounds a little lame(I'm sorry if I offended you with the 'kind of lame' part).
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 18, 2006
    Room serviced is definetly the best choice.
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  • From ANON - Lost child on September 18, 2006
    Awesome love scene there for someone who doesn't have much...experience as you said, I would never have guessed, so therefore you must be a very good writer. Also for a title for your story, Unexpected Desires I believe has been done before, Room Service sounds like a one-shot lemon which it's not. I say Hotel Romance sounds like the better title
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  • From ANON - JadedInu on September 18, 2006
    Evil....just pure evil all these cliffies! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!! (Ouch trying to get up from begging on knees, LOL)
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  • From ANON - foxy on September 18, 2006
    I think Room Serviced is a geat title for this story.

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  • From ANON - molly on September 18, 2006
    i like this title! Room Serviced
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  • From ANON - iluvsesskag on September 18, 2006
    Very good 'perverted' chapter. ;) I'm glad you're considering one of my ideas as a possible title. Hopefully other people understand the concept of the title.

    If others are reading this review, the title "Room Serviced" is to imply that Kagome is 'servicing' Sesshomaru's room and no other cleaning lady should even think about going near that room to do any 'cleaning,' because she has it handled.

    Keep up the good work (but still refrain from overusing certain words; a thesaurus is your friend), and update soon.
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  • From ANON - kooris_mate on September 18, 2006
    i believe that Unexpected Desire has been done as a name before .... i like the name Room Service ... anywho good job i cant wait to read more keep up the good work! ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2006
    Room Service is the best out of the three titles
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  • From ANON - Little Jack 2 on September 17, 2006
    My vote goes for the title Room Serviced,update soon please.
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  • From ANON - SesshomaruCrazy on September 17, 2006
    I like this story.. Pretty cool.. I like the story line that you have going... Cant wait for the next chapter...
    I like Hotel Romance out of all three.. But I would like add one too.. How about "" Maid to Service You"".. Just wanted to give my idea.. LOL

    Take Care
    Mari
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  • From ANON - Faerie Demoness on September 17, 2006
    O.O Wow, thanks. I am so glad I could help. I was trying to think of other names for the title...but am coming up blank. Hmm...I'm looking at my video games...Fever Fantasy...Unlimited Fantasy...or maybe you could do a play off of "Maid in Manhatten"? Miko in Tokyo? I dunno...oh, if you'd like some help in the experience area, go to www.newgrounds.com and take a look around the adult and hentai sections. Maybe they'll help some. One writer wrote a story based off of the Jungle Girl game. Its bad, I know, but they're fun to play. I am one sick twisted puppy. Great story. I look forward to the next one.

    ~Much Love~

    Faerie Demoness
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